teblin Posted February 16, 2013 Share Posted February 16, 2013 Based on a 600pt Tau vs Templar battle at my local GW. +++MESSAGE RECEIVED, SOUTHEASTERN QUADRANT, SEGMENTUM AETERNA+++ ++FROM: CASTELLAN LAERTES++ ++TO: MARSHAL HYPERION++ MESSAGE IS AS FOLLOWS: ENGAGED TAU STRIKE FORCE ON PLANET OF AETERNUS SECUNDUS, SOME BATTLE-BROTHERSLOST, ULTIMATELY XENOS DEFEATED AND ROUTED. WILL PROVIDE FULL DETAILSUPON DOCKING WITH THE SWORD OF MIGHT. ++COMMUNICATION TERMINATED++ … The Thunderhawk engines screamed, blue sheets of flame scorching theground beneath as the immense ship touched down. A black cross setagainst a white panel clearly marked this ship as one belonging toone of Dorn's noble Chapters, the Universe's greatest Crusaders, theBlack Templars. Its jet black sides absorbing the light of a distantSun, hatches swiftly swung open, its occupants rushing to becomecombat-ready as soon as possible; for Astartes it didn't take long.The large main hatch opened at the front, and loud, reverberatingfootsteeps echoed through the interior as an immense Dreadnoughtmarched from inside, closely followed by five Sword Brethren clad inimpressive Terminator armour. Two of the Sword Brethren had incredibly large launchers, Cyclones, attached to their armour, making their already impressive height even more imposing. The Dreadnought and Sword Brethren took large, purposeful steps to where the rest of the men were gathering. It was a small force, no larger than 20 individuals, but these were Space Marines, and even a single Astartes was a sight to behold. The Templars knelt before their current leader, Castellan Laertes, a veteran of more than half a dozen crusades and with more than four centuries of combat experience. “Stand, brothers, you are pure in the eyes of the Emperor, blessed be hissoul.” The Initiates eagerly raised their full height to attention,the seasoned Brethren rising more slowly, their Tactical Dreadnoughtsuits bulky in comparison to regular power armour. “Brother-Castellan,” boomed the Dreadnought in an impossibly low, bass-enriched voice,“can you now reveal the nature of our mission, and the reason forour excursion to this desolate world?” The younger Initiates turnedand scanned the horizon, this planet was indeed desolate. As far asthe eye could see, nothing but sand, rocks and, in the distance,mountains. “Indeed I can, my friend.” He smiled as he glanced over the sarcophagus ofhis long-time companion, brother Pestor, who once walked in the openair as the Castellan still did, but was struck down by a squadron ofTau Battle suits 140 years earlier. White-hot plasma severed his legsand missiles cracked his chest plate, pulverising his torso, and onthe verge of death he was forever sealed inside the fighting machineLaertes now saw before him. 140 years ago... it felt as though itwere yesterday. “There have been mounting reports of xenos activity in this quadrant, andAeternus Secundus is the centre of the zone in question. We are toinvestigate these reports, and if we find any foes if the Imperium,we shall smite them.” “What kind of xenos are we facing?” Asked an Initiate, his bolter claspedagainst his chest. “Beyond reasonable doubt, we are facing leadelements of an excursion into the galactic South-East by the TauEmpire. “TAU!” spat the Dreadnought. Despite being sealed awayfrom the outside world for more than a century his hatred of the T'auhad not diminished, he would never forget what they reduced him to,his replacement body a forever-present reminder of the day he fell inbattle, his last day of freedom. He had never felt more alive themoment before the end came, but now... “Your time will come, sons of Dorn. We will scour the northern hemisphereof Aeternus Secundus, and if we locate enemy forces we can requestreinforcements. Marshal Hyperion's Crusade is standing by less than20,000 miles away. It is vital that we remain in control of this areaof space. We are not far from the Eastern Fringe, the Imperium isalready spread thin there and a Tau offensive from behind theirdefences could spell disaster.” Silence descended as the smallgroup of Battle-brothers took in the gravity of the situation. Behind them, a Techmarine was wetting the rim of one of the Thunderhawk's engine cowls with holy ointment while chanting blessings to theOmnissiah, ensuring a safe voyage back to the fleet. He heard adistant high-pitched whine, and turned. In the distance he saw ashape, a ship? It was hovering a few metres above the shifting sands.He adjusted the lenses in his helmet and zoomed in on the strangeobject. At 12x magnification he finally saw it was a skimmer, but notan Imperial vehicle. It had a broad, sweeping glacis and atop itselegant frame sat what appeared to be a large, flat, box-shaped...his thoughts cleared as he saw a dim blue glow materialise in what henow saw was the barrel of a massive weapon. Despite the vehicle beingat least three kilometres away, the whining grew louder still, untilCastellan Laertes and his men turned to see what the source of thenoise was. Even without zooming his lenses in the direction of theglow, which was now almost as bright as the Sun of the system theywere in, he knew it was bad news. The whine became too high-pitchedeven for the Astartes' enhanced hearing, and silence enveloped themonce more, save for the howl of the eternal wind. Time slowed as theglow dulled, and masses of energy were sucked in all directions tothe end of the barrel. A beam of pure energy stabbed forward, and ahyper-velocity projectile was propelled at unimaginable speeds fromthe weapon to the Thunderhawk, covering each kilometre as if it wereless than a centimetre. Before anyone could react, the energy made contact with the hull of theThunderhawk with a blinding flash. Laertes thought he heard theangelic voice of the Astronomican in the impossible silence just asthe beam struck. The silence lasted the tiniest moment before acolossal explosion shook the ground, sending most of the Templars totheir feet. A blinding flash and a wave of heat emanated from theblast, and brother Pestor felt a faint sensation that he had oncecalled “warmth”. The incredible heat had reached his wasted fleshinside the sarcophagus and he felt something upon his skin for thefirst time in 140 years. It was incredibly faint, he barely noticedit, but to him it was a moment he'd never forget. For the briefest ofmoments, he felt alive once more. A series of catastrophic explosions tore the Thunderhawk apart, thestorage for the lascannon battery packs had been struck and theimmense release of trapped energy went off like a massive bomb,wreaking terrible havoc and slaying all within. The Templar Techmarine that had been applying ointment to the engine cowlwas caught in the blast and blown 20 feet through the air, strikingthe ground with a crack as his spine snapped; he had landed headfirst. He was too weak to move, and despite being a Space Marine thisterrible injury was too much to recover from. The Castellan movedquickly towards him and put his hand behind his head. “You will beavenged, brother.” “My Lord... you honour me. I am ashamed to fall in your presence.” “You have no reason to be ashamed, brother. You have made the ultimatesacrifice and the Emperor will remember your service. What is yourlife, Templar?” The Marine's eyes blazed beneath his helmet as the Castellan spoke therites of Initiation. With his last vestiges of strength, he slowlyspoke. “My honour is my life.” The Castellan realised the Techmarine would slip away before the entirerites could be spoken, so he chose a single rite to end theTechmarine's service. “What is your reward?” “Salvation is my reward. And my pledge is eternal... service...” darknesscovered his eyes as his spirit departed. The Castellan was alone. Heset down the Techmarine's head and made the sign of the Templars'cross upon his chest plate, the gleaming Aquila shining through thewisps of sand. “You are with the Emperor now, my brother.” He turned to see the skimmer responsible for the Thunderhawk'sdestruction moving gracefully forward, it was now less than akilometre away. He turned to the Sword Brethren, who had beenobserving it for a short while. “Brethren!” the Castellan gestured toward the Hammerhead. “The Tau are upon us!We will pledge to avenge our fallen, for Dorn, for the Emperor, showno mercy!” The two Terminators with Cyclone Missile Launcherskneeled and locked on to the Hammerhead with their targeting sensors.With a thought, they replaced the frag missiles with krak warheads,the missiles switching places in an instant. They let loose with athundering barrage as one, more than a dozen Krak missiles screamingtoward the Hammerhead. They exploded en masse, ravaging the gravityrepulsion generators and the gunnery targeting systems. TheHammerhead lazily lost altitude and crashed into the dust. The Tau,known for their cautiousness, quickly bailed out to ensure theirsafety. Vehicles were easier to replace than crews. From behind bluffs and rocky outcrops, figures emerged. The Templars saw they were the Tau foot troops, Fire Warriors. A large, bulky shape,similar to a Terminator in size but far more swift, soared abovethem, white-blue jets of light notifying the Space Marines it wasusing a jet pack of some kind. The pulse rifles of the Tau Warriorshas impressive range and accuracy, and before long a fusillade offire was being directed towards the Templars. “Cover! Get out ofthe open!” barked the Castellan as the Marines sprinted forboulders, depressions and hillocks. An initiate was caught by a beamfrom one of the pulse rifles, puncturing his armour above his hip andinstantly cauterising the wound. [More to be added] Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/271392-praise-the-eternal-sun-templar-fanfic/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
EzekyleVIII Posted February 16, 2013 Share Posted February 16, 2013 This makes me want templars in my life.. Is the tau ship meant to be elegant or eloquent? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/271392-praise-the-eternal-sun-templar-fanfic/#findComment-3306623 Share on other sites More sharing options...
teblin Posted February 16, 2013 Author Share Posted February 16, 2013 Aha, indeed, elegant! 10 lashes for me. Thanks for pointing that out. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/271392-praise-the-eternal-sun-templar-fanfic/#findComment-3306733 Share on other sites More sharing options...
EzekyleVIII Posted February 16, 2013 Share Posted February 16, 2013 looking forward to the next installment! :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/271392-praise-the-eternal-sun-templar-fanfic/#findComment-3306756 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Walha Posted February 19, 2013 Share Posted February 19, 2013 Excellent start this, looking forward to more with great anticipation! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/271392-praise-the-eternal-sun-templar-fanfic/#findComment-3309246 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taranis Posted February 25, 2013 Share Posted February 25, 2013 Good start, now I'm ready for more action. Please continue. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/271392-praise-the-eternal-sun-templar-fanfic/#findComment-3314171 Share on other sites More sharing options...
WatchCaptainAzrael Posted March 5, 2013 Share Posted March 5, 2013 Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/271392-praise-the-eternal-sun-templar-fanfic/#findComment-3321458 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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