BDS Posted April 5, 2013 Share Posted April 5, 2013 First pic of my new Dark Angel successor chapter, Legios Ultionis; The Punisher Legion: Libby on Bike: http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b358/40KFightClub/BDS40k/Punisherbikelibby5_zpsc1d90dac.jpg http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b358/40KFightClub/BDS40k/Punisherbikelibby4_zps422b1007.jpg http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b358/40KFightClub/BDS40k/Punisherbikelibby3_zpsffa40bc8.jpghttp://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b358/40KFightClub/BDS40k/Punisherbikelibby2_zps299dc490.jpghttp://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b358/40KFightClub/BDS40k/Punisherbikelibby1_zpsa75ddd69.jpg Thanks for the look, BDS Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/273777-punisher-legion-dark-angels/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firepower Posted April 5, 2013 Share Posted April 5, 2013 That's a very odd palette. I think you might be trying to use too many colors- yellow, red, kiwi green, silver... I would lose the green altogether, except for maybe the power sword. Some of the small details could use a touch- the skulls on the bike, the bolter, and the ankle. Nice to see you take a shot at weathering. It's not bad, but is pretty much absent on the front, which is weird to say the least. But most of all, mold lines! Ick! Evil evil mold lines. The sword arm and on top of the backpack, for instance. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/273777-punisher-legion-dark-angels/#findComment-3344006 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BDS Posted April 6, 2013 Author Share Posted April 6, 2013 That's a very odd palette. I think you might be trying to use too many colors- yellow, red, kiwi green, silver... I would lose the green altogether, except for maybe the power sword. Some of the small details could use a touch- the skulls on the bike, the bolter, and the ankle. Nice to see you take a shot at weathering. It's not bad, but is pretty much absent on the front, which is weird to say the least. But most of all, mold lines! Ick! Evil evil mold lines. The sword arm and on top of the backpack, for instance. Thanks for the feedback. BDS A pic of my Punisher Legion Grand Master (Azrael): http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b358/40KFightClub/BDS40k/Azrael2_zps04a3208b.jpg http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b358/40KFightClub/BDS40k/Azrael_zpsc2f237e1.jpg Thanks for the look, BDS Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/273777-punisher-legion-dark-angels/#findComment-3344233 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexus25 Posted April 8, 2013 Share Posted April 8, 2013 besides the mold lines I think a good matte finish needs to be applied to the robes. They are just to shinny, for cloth material unless they are made of something else in your fluff. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/273777-punisher-legion-dark-angels/#findComment-3345459 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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