One or two quick things before I upload.

[Deus Imperator Vult]

Right, I've finished my first edit. Thousands more will probably be needed as my dyslexic mind seems to think I never need commas haha however, I am happy with it in general and would love some opinions. But, I think the file is probably too big for one of these posts, its around 24000 words, plus posting it here would probably gut my formatting so might I be better off gathering some email addresses and sending people a read only version?

 

I promise you lots of Black Templar based Zeal, staggering amounts of gore and, what I think, is a pretty damn good story.