Kales Posted October 11, 2013 Share Posted October 11, 2013 appolagies in advance, its rather long, and is the culmination of many years work and re working. feed back is more than welcome on any of my legion stuff i am posting, thats why its here THEFORGOTTEN The story of Kales andthe Storm Eagles Kales, one of the 12 Primarchs created by The Emperor of Mankind, awoke on a distant planet far fromthe touch of earth, beyond the explored parts of the galaxy, like his brothershis life pod had been snatched by the forces of chaos and flung into the warp,to be scattered across the galaxy. Kales was found by a group of people, havingseen the bright light flash across the atmosphere of their planet and land,they had set out to discover what had landed. The Planet was Ikathos, and washome to the Shianto, descendants of humans that had left earth centauries agoaboard colony ships; their ships having taken them further than expected,landed on Ikathos. The Shianto were descendants of ancient Indian tribes fromearth, they had taken the majority of their culture and beliefs with them intospace so that they could escape the conditions they faced on earth. Ikathosspent many years as a peaceful world, the Shianto building a thrivingcivilization, this peace was shattered when their world became the target ofork raiders, for years the planet was besieged by the Orks, their crudetechnology and barbarism forced the Shianto to erect defensive structures fortheir cities, these were however constantly battered by the various ork warbands that took their turn in smashing them. It was into this world that Kalesawoke, rescued by a group of Shianto, Kales was a small child of no more than 3years old. Over the years he grew at an exponential rate, the people of theworld gave him the name Kales, which in their language meant wise and strong.By the time Kales had reached the age of 10 he was a giant, he spent his timelearning all he could about the people who had adopted him, and learning aboutwhat they faced in their struggle to survive. The Shianto discovered that amongKales’s many new skills he seemed to have an exceptional skill when it came tocrafting with a forge and the design and understanding of fortifications. Overthe coming years Kales helped the Shianto to re-design and build newfortifications to defend their people, The Orks were successfully repelleduntil one day a massive horde was able to breach the walls around the palace, Kaleswas unable to reach the position in time with his defenders, when he finallyreached the attackers and drove them off it was too late, The Chieftain of theShianto had been mortally wounded, The chieftain named Kales as his successor,and upon his death, Kales was granted the title and role to rule the people ofIkathos. Kales decided thatenough was enough and vowed to throw the orks from the planet, using hisknowledge and skills along with the artisans of his people they turned theirabilities over to making weapons of war. When Kales and his army marched on theorks, the green skins were wholly un-prepared for the onslaught, their outlyingforces were crushed within hours, Kales and his army destroying them with theirnewly created tanks and armored infantry. Seeing their boys and trucks smashedasunder, the various Warbosses pulled their remaining forces behind theirdefensive walls, Kales’s plan was working, he knew they would never be able todrive the orks off the planet without destroying the ork forts, however herealized he could do both tasks in one if he could force them to fall back to theirdefenses. Kales and his army surrounded the mass of iron and crude defensivestructures, and unleashed his secret weapon; following behind his main forcewere dozens of crude but effective siege weapons, various forms of cannon andlaser arrays mounted on tracked vehicles. The siege weapons were quickly movedinto the carefully prepared earth works, earth and stone ramparts along withtrenches had been dug and erected to protect the Shianto warriors and theirweapons, once everything was prepared the siege began. The orks pounded theposition for days to no avail, their crude weapons however powerful they maybe, were fired with dreadful inaccuracy, The return fire from the Shianto siegebatteries was not so inaccurate, the shells and energy pulses hitting theirassigned targets with brutal efficiency. The siege lasted only 3 days; those Orksthat had survived the shelling were killed in extermination sweeps of theplanet. Kales realized that therewere threats in this galaxy that static defenses would not always hold off, tothis effect the Shianto craftsmen, under the guidance of Kales began theconstruction process on a fleet to take the remaining people away from theplanet, each ship was a virtual space born fortress, armed and armored with themost advanced technology available to the Kales and his artisans. Once builtthe Shianto set sail for the stars carrying the remains of their people and theirideas and beliefs to locations unknown. During their journey they came underattack from various alien menaces, but all were swiftly dispatched, eventuallythey came across a vast fleet of crude looking starships, thinking them to bejust another attacking force, the fleet entered into its standard defensiveformation with their largest ship, known as the Wolfs Lair, forming the frontof this formation, The Wolfs lair was a colossal vessel, part asteroid, partspace fortress, it was defended with shields strong enough to repel concentratedship to ship fire, backing that up was advanced armour plating coveringvulnerable areas, and multiple powerful long range and close defensivebatteries. It looked as though a battle would soon ensue, however the fleetthat faced them was in fact the outer edge of the Emperor of Mankind’s Fleet,The emperor contacted Kales through a psychic link he shared with his son, and Kaleswas relived to finally have contact with his father. Kales and the emperor meton board the Wolfs Lair, pride at his son’s achievements was clear in the waythey talked, the Emperor was also happy to see another of earths lost peoplesreturning. The Emperor introduced Kales to the role that had been prepared forhim, and the legion he was to Command, the vast force of Space Marines underthe banner of the Storm Eagles. The legions fleet soonnumbered over 1000 vessels, the largest being ‘The Wolf's Lair' the ship thathad been recently modified and refitted with new Imperial technology and wasnow adorned with a huge Imperial Eagle on the front facing, this served severalpurposes, it was a vast visual reference to the Legions loyalties, also itprovided extensive re-enforcement to the forward armour and helped to disguiseseveral experimental weapons systems that had been mounted on the prow of thefortress ship. It was with this fleet they carved through space sendingheretics, chaos and aliens scattering, there was one race however that neverran, these elder were a mysterious force, and even though the Emperordistrusted all aliens, Kales was more open minded, he made several allianceswith these aliens and entered a mutual understanding with them. Their conquestsbrought them closer and closer to the eye of terror, the massive warp stormthat lead to the chaos realm, it was here they began to embark upon theirsecret mission, the fight against chaos, alas the forces of chaos conspired totry and remove this threat, and whilst they journeyed through the warp, theybecame stranded. Kales was powerless tostop this event but vowed he would have his revenge, time did not exist as itdoes in the warp as it does in realspace, but the fleet survived, honing theirskills against demonic attacks, and crafting new tools and weapons for theirrevenge, Many hundred of years had passed when their fleets Shaman Seers wereable to find a way out of the warp. The fleet slid back into real space closeto Cadia, but Kales was immediately aware that things had changed, chaos wasattacking the planets of the emperor, this could not be allowed, the fleetsurged like eagles towards the chaos insurgents on three of the Cadian system'soutlying planets, and they ruthlessly scoured them from the surface,slaughtering and crushing all that stood before them, Kales saw that the forcesof chaos were franticly falling back into the eye of terror, but becameactually aware that they were being watched, several large ships bearing theicon of his brother Vulcan approached the fleet and hailed them, Kales openedcommunications with them and was greeted by the carapace of an ancientdreadnaught, it introduced itself as Ten'shal, Kales knew this name but howcould his old friend be trapped in the form of a dreadnaught so soon, it wasn'tuntil the situation had been explained and past history revealed that Kalesrealised they had been lost in the warp for far longer than several Hundredyears, millennia had past and the galaxy was in a mess. A fleet of the Ecclesiarchy was sent todestroy the legion as they were classified excommunicate tratoris, and 300ships from the inquisition were sent to aid this, the fleet blindly lead by themisguided belief that the Storm Eagles were chaos, attempted to bulldoze itsway through the fleet, it was repelled with a furious barrage from the weaponssystems on the Wolfs Lair. it was not until an order reached the fleet from thehighest members of the Inquisition, that the battle was halted, the existenceof this Legion was purged from all data banks, and apart from the Salamanders,who were protected by Kales, those who had witnessed the return of the StormEagles were ruthlessly purged, from this point on they disappear from history,maintaining contact only with the Salamanders through ancient unbreakablebonds. The truth about theseevents is only known by The Legion itself, the mysterious Chapter 666, theHighest Members of the Inquisition and the Salamanders. The Draconan Empireand the History of the Exodus Armour: During the eons pastwhen the ancient races still flourished in our galaxy and beyond the reptilianrace known as the Draconan began to expand their realm, they were initial fromoutside the known areas of space, beyond the explored regions but they began tocreate colonies and carve out territories in unoccupied space, it wasn't longbefore a vast network of planets had been created and trade links forged withmany of the other ancient races. The Draconan's had extremely advancedtechnology, most of which had been created to aid in the setting up of thecolony's including mining tools and tera-forming machines, but the Draconan'srealised that these could be used for military purposes, they had no need foroffensive weapons but they decided to create them for defensive work, theymanufactured a large number of pulse weapons of various sizes, mag acceleratorswere very popular among the troops because of their power and range, and theirtanks and structures were armoured with their finest creation ever Bio Metal,this was a marvelous invention, a living metal that could assume any form, itwas initial used to create tools, but it advanced into the mining industrywhere it was used to create flexible protective suits that could adjust to themine conditions it was able to extrude or form anything the user could think ofso if they needed lots of light, they got lots of lights from their suits if therewas going to be a rock fall the suit would thicken its armour and protect thewearer, their became a symbiotic relationship between the Bio Metal and itsusers, each unit becoming almost linked to the user rather like a faithful clawhound would. The Draconan's used this technology to protect its troops,vehicles and buildings alike from attack, the military version became known asDragon Armour, for vehicles the armour would be bonded with the crew so that itcould react to them, if attack was imminent it could adjust itself tocompensate for incoming damage ordinance, for their buildings the Bio Metal waslinked to a Bio Sensor unit that would be aware of an attack and could allowthe building to react accordingly. The Draconan's are relatively unheard ofthese days, their planets our outside the range of the astronomicon so theImperium is barely aware of their existence, it wasn't until the Shianto exodusfleet was roaming the stars that they were encountered, Kales discovered one oftheir larger colonies but it was under attack from a large Dark Eldar Fleet,Kales took his assault ships and smashed the fleet, he then landed his finestshock troops on the planet and began to aid the locals in repelling theslavers, thanks to his quick assistance the slavers were slaughtered and alltheir captives rescued, the Draconan's couldn't thank the Shiantoans enough, sothey granted Kales the gift of their Bio Metal, something they had never tradedbefore, but it was the only way they could properly thank Kales for his timelyintervention, the Draconan artificers instructed Kales and his closest mechaids in how to create this metal, and they helped in the construction of apowerful suit of armour for the god Primarch, the Draconan's knew all about thePrimarch project and the Imperium, they also knew about Kales and his people sothey could trust them with this sacred information, the end result of thearmour was the Exodus Suit, a lethal multi form combat suit that could imitatethe Imperium's Armour types but be far stronger than they ever could be. Kane and the Brotherhood of Steel With the loss of Kales and the Storm Eagles,The Emperor could see his plans starting to fall apart; he approached hisclosest advisors to see if between them they could come up with a solution. Thesolution that they arrived at was relatively simple, using the gene stocks fromKales, they created a new Primarch, however this Primarch would not lead alegion like his forbearer, and he would be put in charge of a specialised unit,charged with creating weapons to fight chaos. The new Primarch, known as Kane,was more a brother to Kales rather than a clone, subtle differences separatedthem. The child Kane was left in the charge of those who he would eventuallycommand, like all Primarch’s, his accelerated body functions meant that he grewup in a fraction of the time a normal human would take, during this time helearned the art of the forge, and discovered he had an innate talent when itcame to the arts of manufacturing weapons and equipment. As he grew his psychicpotential began to evolve, like his brother his abilities became focused onspecific areas, his talent appeared in the form of the telekinetic ability tomanipulate metals and other such materials, this ability became known as thepsychic forge. Kane was raised by the Demi Legion known asthe Brotherhood of Steel, based on Mimas, one of the moons of Saturn. Theirexistence was a closely guarded secret, and their base of operations was protectedby a psychic shield. Some of the Imperium’s most well-known weapons andvehicles originated in the forges of Mimas, but their creation has always beenattributed to STC specs found by the priests of mars, The Brotherhood has aclose if secret relationship with the Techpriests of Mars, without their helpthe forge facilities would never have been created during such a turbulenttime. During the Horus Heresy, Kane and hisBrotherhood, fashioned some of the Imperium’s finest weapons, from the ancientand now barely heard of, Volkite weapons, to the various Rhino hull versionsthat are still in use today. At the conclusion of the Heresy, The High Lordshad to account for the large number of Space Marines, assigned to theBrotherhood of Steel, to this end they were attached to the Ultramarines asTechnical advisors, Roboute Guilliman, included them in his initial roster ofSpace Marines, but mysteriously during the breaking up of the Legions intoChapters, these Space Marines vanished from all records, an agreement had beenreach between Kane and Roboute, to attach his troops to the Ultramarines anduse their livery, to provide a reason behind their existence, however to retaintheir secretive presence, all note of this was removed from Chapter records.Very few of the Ultramarines were ever aware of this arrangement, and with thedeath of Roboute, it is believed that only Marneus Calgar and his closestadvisors are aware of what happened in the past, it is not uncommon for theBrotherhood to appear on the field of Battle sporting the Livery of theUltramarines, and also to be found assisting The ultramarines as technicaladvisors. With the return of Kales during the finalthrows of the 12th Black Crusade, Kales and Kane were united for thefirst time, a brotherly bond soon developed between them and since then theyhave worked closely with each other, their forces effectively merging into one,both brothers use their skill and knowledge in the on-going fight against theforces of chaos. The Forgotten and theGrey Knights The Truth The Horus Heresy wasturbulent time, the powers of chaos were strong and the demise of the Imperiumof man looked sure, the Primarch's loyal to the Emperor were strong but theforces of chaos were getting more numerous, The emperor had always known hewould need a force of pure hearted warriors to battle chaos, to this end heempowered his most trusted Primarch Kales to create this force, his legion wasalready highly focused around psychic marines and opposed the corruption in thegalaxy. The Storm Eagles Legion began to train and craft weapons and equipmentsuited for a battle against chaos, their fleet entered the warp so that theymay engaged their chosen foe within the boundaries of Terra, alas the gods ofchaos became aware of Kales and his Legion, and during their warp travel, thegods manifested warp storms and cast demonic sigils that trapped the legionwithin the warp, they planned for them to be annihilated by swarms of demonicentities, but to their shock Kales and his legion swept away all that opposedthem. Their legions Shaman Seers spent years looking for a way out of the warpbut to no avail, the legion continued to train and battle their hated foegaining more experience as time passed. Back in real space theHorus Heresy was in full swing, and the Emperor, unaware of the fate of Kalesdecided to set in motion another plan of a much smaller scale, he created theGrey Knights and The Inquisition, The Inquisition would be the investigativearm where as the Grey Knights would provide the military strength, Gene seedfrom The Storm Eagles was used to create these new Chaos Hunting Space Marinesand after many years being hidden within the warp they emerged as a new chapterof space marines, Information about chapter 666 is closely guarded, to mostthey are nothing more than myth, to those that know some of the truth they area hidden blade against a dark enemy. Eons later after theone of Abbadon's many black crusades, the fleet of the Storm Eagles burst fromthe warp, they were immediately set upon by several sections of the inquisitionand space marines were called from the surrounding sectors to meet this newthreat, the Storm Eagles had largely been forgotten about, to them only a fewhundred years had past, but thousands of years had gone by in real space, Thisearned the Legion its new name The Forgotten, disaster was only averted whenthe most senior members of the inquisition stepped in, they alone were the onlyliving members of the Inquisition to know the truth, all records of the arrivalof The Forgotten were expunged and a purge of the inquisition was enacted toprevent the knowledge of the return escaping, the only space marine chapter toknow of its existence are the salamanders, they are sworn to secrecy but theirties with legion go back to the birth of the Primarchs, ties that simply cannotbe broken.. Kales was introducedto the standing Grandmaster of the Grey Knights and had the gaps in historyfilled in, Kales learned how the Grey Knights in their limited numbers hadfocused their efforts of destroying the demonic hordes, with the return of Kalesand the remains of his Legion, they were bolstered, able to attack both chaosforces and their demonic masters, The fleet of The Forgotten is currentlymoored around Jupiter, protected from sight buy psychic wards cast by Kales, Kaleshimself was made Grand Praetor of the Grey Knights. The Legions vastmanufacturing and Tech based skills were made use of, crafting weapons andwargear with which to battle their ancient foe. To this day TheForgotten exist along side the Grey Knights in Mythology and Legend, battlingthe forces of chaos. The Forgotten Second Founding’s With the return of the Forgotten at close tohalf of its original legion strength, the High Lords ordered the immediatebreaking up of the Forgotten; however, like most aspects of the Forgotten thiswas kept a closely guarded secret. The three chapters that were formed from theremains of the Forgotten were: The Forgotten, The Brotherhood of the Eagle andthe Forgotten Angelus. Each of these Chapters followed the same structure andguidelines as their original Legion on simply a smaller scale. The ForgottenAngelus themes themselves around the more shamanic side of the Forgotten, theirdesigns and symbology bearing some similarities to that of the Dark Angelswhich share a similar heritage, whereas the Brotherhood of the Eagle took onthe warrior aspect of their tradition and can often be found with animal peltsand other such adornments on their armour. Each Chapter maintains a small Base on Titanas well as bases on some of the other moons of Saturn; their fleets form partof the Forgotten Grand Fleet, but are able to act independently if required.Officially the Chapters are now independent of each other and function asseparate units, unofficially however all three function as a united force,collaborating when required. Given this new Level of flexibility, each chapterwas able to focus their skills and efforts on a specific area of operationsthat would allow them to support their Brother Marines. The Forgotten focus their efforts of siegeand mechanical operations, crafting new weapons with which to breach the darkfortresses of chaos, the creation of new and updated forms of current equipmentis also a priority, they share this role with the Brotherhood of Steel, suchcreations include new Dreadnaught chassis, and updates to the TacticalDreadnaught Armour. The Forgotten Angelus focus their efforts onInfantry assaults, utilising everything from the Legions lightly armoured Reconsquads to the Mk4 Aegis armour wielding Terminators, this chapter is able todeploy an infantry force to match any opposing chaos force. The Brotherhood of the Eagle focus theirefforts on rapid attacks from both the ground and the air, to this end theyhave modified or created a variety of new and improved vehicles for both rapidair and ground assaults, Such creations include the Aurora and Shadow StrikeGunships. The Chapter Masters of the three chaptersform part of the Black Council, the one of most note being GrandmasterKeleshan, the Chapter Master of the Forgotten Angelus The Forgotten: The Forgotten arebroken down into different areas, as they are still close to legion strong itis difficult for them to follow codex doctrine. The Black Guard: These form the core ofThe Forgotten's army, these space marines while veterans compared to any normalchapter still break down into specialist squads Scimitar Squads: these function much in the same way as Tactical squads with theexception that they take no heavy weapons, this allows them to advance in asteady wall, riddling the enemy with rapid bolter shots and flame bursts,however their psychic potential is always manifested with the help of a ShamanWarrior leading the squad. Scythe Squads: these function in the same way as space marine devastatorsquads, carrying the chapters heavy weaponry, they comprise the most accurateand steady of the chapters Black Guard, their psychic potential allows them toplace shots in impossible places Falchion Squads: these function much like assault squads in most space marine armies;however their ability to use psychic powers means they are much more effective,generally equipped with psychically charged weapons similar in function tonemesis force weapons and able to harass the enemy psychically, they are adangerous foe indeed. Scouts and Aurora Scouts: These form thereconnaissance units of the Black guard, unlike most chapters scouts are notneophytes, the legion has not recruited for several generations, its numbershave not significantly dropped for it to be necessary, instead these scouts arejust specialized members of the Black Guard The Black Knights: These are the elite ofthe elite, forming the veterans of The Forgotten; many of these have lived inthe warp for years and survived its punishments, emerging stronger for it. Black Knights form themain Terminator Equipped force of the Forgotten, their combat load can varybetween close combat weapons to punishing long range missile launchers is notuncommon to see these squads carrying a mixed weapons loadout. Shadow Guard: These form the bodyguards of the Black council, the mostexperienced Black Knights in the legion are chosen for this duty. Black Council: This is the leading organizationof the Legion; this comprises the Masters of the Legion, the Shaman Seers, theShaman Healers, the Spirit Guides, Techmarines and Tech Adepts Masters of the Legion: Led by Kales, thisform the central command structure of the Legion, all of the Legions mastersare powerful psyker's and equally powerful warriors who regularly smite theforces of chaos. Shaman Seers: Due to the shamanisticbackground of the Legion Librarians function differently to those in most spacemarine forces, there are similarities between their practices and those of thespace wolves chapter. Each Seer calls upon the spirits of its forbears to guidetheir powers; they also employ a similar rune based system to the space wolvesto focus and use their powers. Shaman Healers: Similar to the Seers,the Healers function differently to standard apothecaries, they are able tocombine their psychic abilities with that of their technology, using thespirits of fallen warriors as a guide for the spirits of the injured and dead,this coupled with their equipment means they have a high chance of revivingfallen marines, those that are unable to be brought back still aid the Healerin preventing the deaths of others. Spirit Guides: These marines areresponsible for the spiritual health of the legion, similar to chaplains,Spirit Guides guide and protect the spirits of the living and the dead, theyalso support their forces in combat lending a heavy psychic hammer to deal withstubborn enemies, they differ from chaplains as the Legion does not follow theImperial cult, Kales remembers the Emperor for what he was, a man who hatedworshipers, to this end he has prevented the Imperial cult from gaining anyfooting within the legion, this would normally gain him a great deal of enemieswithin the Imperium, but their anonymity shields him from this. Spirits of the Fallen: The psychic strengthof the legion's brotherhood means that when they die they don't just disappearinto the warp, their souls are bound willingly to their fellow brothers in thelegion, this is a pact that is wrought before the space marines even put ontheir power armour for the first time, this has two functions, firstly thespirits of the fallen help to guide and focus the powers of their brothers, givingthem advice when necessary, secondly the Shamans and Spirit Guides are able tocall upon these dead spirits to aid in their work and enhance their abilities. The Forgotten Commandstructure: The Black Council: Primarch: Kales/Kane Grand Master: Kalinor Chief Shaman Seer: Kalius Chief Spirit Guide: Gorak Forge Master: For'Sahn + Techadepts Master of the Fleet: Gealen Master of the Arsenal: J'Akear Master of ‘The WolfsLair': Shakar Cabal of the Ancients: venerabledreadnaughts Shrine: Shaman Seers, Shaman Healers, Spirit Guides. The Forge: Techmarines and Tech Adepts 1stCompany: Damoc ‘Cla: Master of the 1st Company Black Knights: Terminator Companies Terminator squads of various armour types Dreadnaughts 2ndCompany: Black Guard Combat Company: Company Master: Janus Black Guard Scimitar Squads 3rdCompany: Black Guard Support Company: Company Master: Corvan Black Guard Scythe Squads 4thCompany: Black Guard Assault Company: Company Master: Gavern Black Guard Falchion Squads 5th Company: The Armoury Master of the Armoury: Cronus Landraiders various types Predators Vindicators Leman Russ Basilisks Razorbacks Rhinos Fell Sturmblades Sturmblades Aurora Gunships Shadow Strike Gunships 6thCompany: Reconnaissance Company: Company Master: Orion Squads of Aurora Scouts Squads of Veteran Scouts Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/281752-the-forgotten-the-background-to-my-legion/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
JeffTibbetts Posted October 11, 2013 Share Posted October 11, 2013 I know it might seem like a small thing, but seriously you need to fix all the many, many incorrect uses of "there" (should be 'their', the possessive form 90% of the time here). I'm honestly not trying to be a jerk or a curmudgeon, but I kind of quit reading part way through. It's a bit of a pet peeve for me. Take care of that stuff first and I'll give it another go. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/281752-the-forgotten-the-background-to-my-legion/#findComment-3492559 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kales Posted October 13, 2013 Author Share Posted October 13, 2013 my apologies, grammar is not my strong point, I usualy rely on word to catch them, for some reason it didnt, until I changed them all, then it decided to work properly, I will paste the current version hopefully with most of the errors gone now, will do it once I get to a pc later at work. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/281752-the-forgotten-the-background-to-my-legion/#findComment-3493460 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kales Posted October 13, 2013 Author Share Posted October 13, 2013 Ok sorry for the double post, didnt feel editing the previous one would be suitable. New version is now up for some reason i cant get it to format right, probably something to do with the way I have done it in word, I have also recently done furthur expansion on the Draconian faction mentioned in this, I am also in the process of doing a test codex for them to make them a playable race in 40k. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/281752-the-forgotten-the-background-to-my-legion/#findComment-3493614 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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