Brother Captain Sirus Posted October 13, 2013 Share Posted October 13, 2013 I have been slowly working on this between projects and real life, and I decided it was time to get some of it up here on B&C, Its a bit rough round the edges and i'll be updating when I can. Hope you enjoy. *Incoming Transmission* “This is Lord Militant Vincent Edgar, requesting immediate assistance, the Siox system is underattack. Initial reports suggest Chaos. All military forces and P.D.F units have been deployed. Planetary defence platforms are holding but we can’t be certain for how long. Send reinforcements.” *Message Ends* Chapter 1 Captain Lykos strode onto the bridge of the Emperor’s Scythe’s strike cruiser, Eternal Reckoning. The air was thick with incense, the lack of light causing his auto-senses to compensate. There was little in the way of decoration orornamentation, the only real feature on the bridge was the command throne where Brother Aegon sat connected to the mind impulse unit “Report” “All systemschecks complete, we can make way on your order Captain.” Replied Brother Aegonlooking down from his command throne. “Then let us make haste. Set course for the Siox system.” *** Lexicanium Icarion fell back under another flurry of blows, only managing to dodge the final strike that would have parted his head from his shoulders. How could this adversary keep up this sustained physical and mental assault without showing any signs of fatigue? Every attack rained down upon him as if he were an insect under foot, unable to save himself from the fate that had forced itself upon his very existence. In that moment he realised that he’d lost, his thoughts had strayed, his guard had lowered and at any moment…Pain exploded through his abdomen, quickly followed by a concussive blow to the head that sent him crashing to the floor. Icarion lay looking up at the gun metal grey ceiling of the private training room of Epistolary Kyros on board the Eternal Reckoning, and not for the first time this morning. “If you ever wish to make the rank of Codicier you will regain focus.” Chastised Kyros retaking position on the far side of the room “Now attack with both blade and mind as one” *** Edit: Spelling and adjustments Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/281846-the-scourging-of-siox-emperors-scythes-diy-chapter/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inquisitor Ehrenstein Posted October 15, 2013 Share Posted October 15, 2013 You should change Lexicanum to Lexicanium. It's quite a big difference, when you take into account the work of people in the hobby. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/281846-the-scourging-of-siox-emperors-scythes-diy-chapter/#findComment-3495443 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Captain Sirus Posted October 15, 2013 Author Share Posted October 15, 2013 Cheers man i missed that one, as you can guess this is first fanfic ever and i know it has a long way to go. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/281846-the-scourging-of-siox-emperors-scythes-diy-chapter/#findComment-3495525 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jape Posted October 21, 2013 Share Posted October 21, 2013 Liking it so far Sirus. I might be misreading the title but you do know the Scythes are already a chapter right? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/281846-the-scourging-of-siox-emperors-scythes-diy-chapter/#findComment-3502513 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Captain Sirus Posted October 22, 2013 Author Share Posted October 22, 2013 I didnt see that i thought the scythes of the emperor were just that, now thats a shame. Back to the drawing board for name then. Really want a scythes name. Oh well just something else to flesh out :-D Cheers for the heads up though. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/281846-the-scourging-of-siox-emperors-scythes-diy-chapter/#findComment-3503007 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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