Badaboom Posted November 21, 2013 Share Posted November 21, 2013 Hello Brothers, The guys at DesignstrikeUK and some other people are involved in the pre-production of a fanmade short film about the Horus Heresy (just a fragment, not all the story), and I am designing several characters. The first one is Horus Lupercal, in the time when he was still leading the Luna Wolves, fighting side by side with the Blood Angels. I´d appreciate all kind of input and feedback, so feel free to provide your opinion about this first rough draft: http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/324/6/4/horus_character_design__1st_session_by_diegogisbertllorens-d6uzw3o.jpg Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlabasterKnight Posted November 21, 2013 Share Posted November 21, 2013 I like the one all the way to the right if it had the belt of the one all the way to the left... Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3527442 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conn Eremon Posted November 21, 2013 Share Posted November 21, 2013 2nd from left body, with middle portrait. Though I always imagined him with more of a bulldog look. Short and stocky neck, big and bald head. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3527445 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argun Posted November 21, 2013 Share Posted November 21, 2013 For the armor, I'm liking the tabard of the far right, fur of the far left, and armor of the third from the left. Is it just me, or is Horus lacking obvious means of holding a sword/pistol? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3527459 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iron Hands Fanatic Posted November 21, 2013 Share Posted November 21, 2013 I prefer the far left armour version - the colour of the tabard is rich, but not too bright - I feel the colour of the far right's tabard draws the eye away from the rest of the detail too much - but the purple shade to it in the far left is fantastic. If you want to draw the eye to the face more - perhaps have it backlit by amber/yellow light from inside the armour's cowl - art of him later in the heresy usually shows a red backlighting, and amber/yellow would compliment the existing colours and reference his (current) loyalty. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3527474 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joeyray Posted November 21, 2013 Share Posted November 21, 2013 Horus, for me has always been Bullish, like a good front row prop, only on a Primarch scale. I like a mix of both far left and right, the pelt and sash really do it for me. As for size, let me introduce "Big" Bill Cavubuti:http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-q3SjoLaRUZA/UccQHOmk5UI/AAAAAAAABx0/ZVDe9W8UEbE/s1600/Bill+Cavubuti.jpg Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3527475 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kais Klip Posted November 21, 2013 Share Posted November 21, 2013 Leftmost armour with its plentiful iconography, although with the rich, Imperial red cloth of the far right. I'm assuming the white is meant to be of uniform shade, otherwise the second has the best luminosity to my eyes. The armour to the left of the middle is the most intimidating, but it's not regalised enough for me to fit Horus' character. Battle damaged, shredded up tabard would bring about a very brutal show for a few minutes while really showing his true character and bring some attention to the chest plate, but ceremony-wise the far left sticks the best. Middle right is just slightly over-adorned with the gold trim for my taste. Damn good visualisation in the far right face, it seems like it was drawn from the bald head downwards, which fits the Horus in my mind; a slightly off-putting feline gleam to the features, eyes wide for that hint of androgyny but still undeniably masculine, whereas the far left sample looks far too human. That's how I picture Horus, whereas if you go with the wider, pitbull-y profiles as proposed above you don't leave yourself much room to work with the real heavy-sets like Ferrus or Vulkan, and I don't see much primal charisma flowing when he's half a foot shorter than most of the others, as a wider build would suggest. Pinpointed why I like the face; it's the chin. For me, I don't expect a face with such a longer chin and jawline to have such a round forehead and skull, and that is what offsets it from being acceptably ratioed for me to view as human, like the left one. That is damn fine work by my tastes! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3527545 Share on other sites More sharing options...
SteelPaladin Posted November 21, 2013 Share Posted November 21, 2013 Armor: 2nd from left. I just don't see Horus with a tabard for some reason. Face: Far right. Very charismatic. Awesome stuff all around though. Keep us updated! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3527564 Share on other sites More sharing options...
amaze07 Posted November 21, 2013 Share Posted November 21, 2013 Awesome designs!!! cant wait to see more! keep us updated!! Armour:Far Right, ( but with the darker fur cloak and storm bolter on wrist) Face: Far Right, Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3527740 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Badaboom Posted November 22, 2013 Author Share Posted November 22, 2013 2nd from left body, with middle portrait. Though I always imagined him with more of a bulldog look. Short and stocky neck, big and bald head. But he is also described as very attractive, beautiful. I´d reserve such a hard, stocky look for Abaddon. For the armor, I'm liking the tabard of the far right, fur of the far left, and armor of the third from the left. Is it just me, or is Horus lacking obvious means of holding a sword/pistol? You are totally right, sir! I´ll address that issue once I start to refine the design, but first I have to choose which one to refine. @Kais Klip: thanks for the extensive feedback, it´s really appreciated! @Steel Paladin: of course, I´ll keep posting the new material here as the project advances. @amaze07: thanks! I will. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3528459 Share on other sites More sharing options...
miller_gooner Posted November 22, 2013 Share Posted November 22, 2013 It has to be far left body/armour and then far right portriat for me - spot on! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3528488 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deathwatch/Grey knight Posted November 22, 2013 Share Posted November 22, 2013 Well he doesn't have pistol/shooter because he has a twin bolter built in his talon of horus and he has a sword Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3528491 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deathwatch/Grey knight Posted November 22, 2013 Share Posted November 22, 2013 First body on the left but no belt/red cloth it just seems something from macragge/ ultramarines but maybe the one from the third from left is alright Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3528498 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deathwatch/Grey knight Posted November 22, 2013 Share Posted November 22, 2013 So is this gonna be cartoon or animation and there is a difference cartoon is spongebob and animation is ultra marines ( disappointing movies) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3528645 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kol Saresk Posted November 22, 2013 Share Posted November 22, 2013 So is this gonna be cartoon or animation and there is a difference cartoon is spongebob and animation is ultra marines ( disappointing movies) Spongebob is an abomination. Transformers, that was a cartoon. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3528661 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallar Posted November 22, 2013 Share Posted November 22, 2013 Fantastic designs and looking forward to the updated versions. Horus I do not think is bullish but is charismatic - Originally I pictured him to be like one of the ancient Greek sculptures or a Roman emperor. Handsome but radiating power and majesty which marines and humans will follow blindly. The bullish one would have to be Erebus who I think at least helps if not cuases Horus' downfall. We all know what Horus looks like when betraying Sanguinius and the Emperor but what about just before - tragic possibly and even vulnereable... Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3528901 Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunkyMonkey Posted November 23, 2013 Share Posted November 23, 2013 I always thought of Horus as looking like the DC animated cartoon's Lex Luthor, specifically the Justice League one. For Greek sculptures, I always thought of Papa Smurf, down to the Mediterranean curly hair. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3528957 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallar Posted November 23, 2013 Share Posted November 23, 2013 :] Lex Luther is cool but Horus needs more depth Balding evil geniuses: Lex Luther and Doctor Evil - must-avoid-at-all-costs Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3528965 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Conn Eremon Posted November 23, 2013 Share Posted November 23, 2013 The artwork done for the Horus Heresy gives him more of a bullish look. I honestly think that's awesome. It's not a look you normally associate with charismatic people, but actually fits rather well for a militant brand of charisma. He is a consummate warrior, first and foremost. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3528978 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand Master Aldric Posted November 23, 2013 Share Posted November 23, 2013 Number 2 is best plain and mostly simple. I imagined Horus with medium long black hair. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3529029 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deathwatch/Grey knight Posted November 23, 2013 Share Posted November 23, 2013 Hey sol your rite but that why I said dissappointing movies lol but transformers is great I still have a box full of em and I'm 18 because I know 20-50 years they will cost a lot of money............. But the best cartoon of all time was Dino riders I'm a 90's kid don't judge me And funkey monkey your right when you think about it especially when lex puts on his armor some things surprise you I geuss a friend and I were talking if they ever did live action or something like Beowulf horus heresy movie and he said vin diesel should play Russ now I know what your thinking but remember in chronicles Of riddick at the start when he had that beard I always think of Russ Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3529059 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother-Chaplain Kage Posted November 23, 2013 Share Posted November 23, 2013 I always kinda pictured Horus looking something like Luke Goss. Well, when he's not in monster make up, like this: http://i.imgur.com/aZ4ozFe.jpg?1 http://i.imgur.com/ZBik8ob.jpg?1 More like this: http://i.imgur.com/WdFyzuB.jpg?1 Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3529063 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deathwatch/Grey knight Posted November 23, 2013 Share Posted November 23, 2013 Actually when you think about it picture black hair and he can pull of corax or night haunter Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3529073 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallar Posted November 23, 2013 Share Posted November 23, 2013 Am so looking forward to the devlopment of these concepts. I hope that everyone can make it to the next live session to make their suggestions as it is developed In the meantime I am going to post some information about the next set of free 3D tutorials from youtube Texturing for Beginners and Space Marine Neophytes Update on the free space marine shoulder pad and texturing tutorials below! Diego, David and I are creating these concepts and models to send to Games Workshop along with a bit of animation.Hopefully Games Workshop will like them and allow us to do more. We will be uploading lots more artwork, 3D models and designs very shortly and we would love to hear what fans say about the work. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3529466 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sons of Horus Posted November 25, 2013 Share Posted November 25, 2013 2nd full body from the left and 3rd(rightmost) face Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/283596-horus-lupercal-character-design/#findComment-3530690 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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