Son of Barbarus Posted January 28, 2014 Share Posted January 28, 2014 Hey Guys here is a story I wrote a little while ago. It is set in an alternate 40K universe. I will put it up a page at a time. Secret Legion Lord Araxus was angry. He was angry for two reasons: One hewas waiting, he hated waiting especially when he was as close to a ragingbattle as he was now. So close that he could hear the screams of dying men andsmell the chemical tang of weapons being discharged: Two his men hated waiting, it frustrated thehell out of them and the way his men dealt with frustration was to murder eachother. They were pacing around like caged carnivores hatred and bloodlust intheir eyes. He felt exactly the same as them but as he was the commander he hadto keep his bloodlust down and only unleash it when he was in the thick ofbattle. He checked his chronometer, by its indication he and his men should befighting their way into a breach in the cities defences right now. But he hadreceived a coded message on his vox this morning telling him that there hadbeen a change of plans and he needed to bring his men to this place. Completevox silence was needed as the imperial defenders were monitoring all communications. His vox operator had assured him that all the proper codeshad been used so it was no imperial ruse. So he moved his men to thecoordinates given in the message, they found themselves in a deep concreteculvert. Its walls were steep and there were huge piles of broken concretebefore and after them. Lord Araxus had assumed that they were brought to thisspot so that the enemy could not see them. That was then, now that it was fiveminutes past the time he was supposed to meet the person behind the message. Hewas beginning to wonder whether it had been a genuine message. Maybe this wasan imperial ruse designed to keep his men out of the fight, he turned to hisvox operator. He intended to contact the Daemon Prince vox silence be damned. “Lord Araxus”. Araxusturned and looked up. Standing at the top of the culvert was a tall figure inthe armour of the Alpha Legion. “Alpha”. Araxus spatunder his breath. He should have known that it was these shadow warriors who had sent him themissive, they were always up to something and once you had gotten enmeshed inone of their schemes you usually got outof them only at tremendous cost. They were not like a World Eater, a WorldEater fought you face to face a screaming chainaxe in hand. An Alpha Legionnairewould plot and scheme you to death. No he would rather be a World Eater anyday… “Lord Araxus”? Araxus turned brought out of his reverie. Thetall armoured figure was standing next to him. The armour the figure wore wasthe same as any other Alpha which served their secret machinations. You were never quite sure who you were talkingto it could be the lowliest battle brother or a high lord of the legion. “Yes I’m Lord Araxus, who are you”? Araxus demanded. Thearmoured figure inclined its head. “I’m sorry my lord but I cannot tell you that, it’sclassified”. Araxus smiled (which was an awful sight) had been expecting thissort of answer and so did not press the issue. “Well you’ve got me here what do you want”? Araxus asked.The armoured figure pointed towards the city. As Araxus turned to look hevaguely noticed that there was a small number of Alpha Legionnaires on eitherside of the culvert. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/286163-secret-legion/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Son of Barbarus Posted January 31, 2014 Author Share Posted January 31, 2014 Second page. “Change of plans my lord. At the end of this culvert thereis a grate. My operatives have rigged it with explosives. When they are readythey will set off the charges and your men can assault the surpriseddefenders.” The Alpha turned back to Araxus. Araxus glanced sidelong at thefigure. “These orders came from Distratix himself”? Araxus asked, hewas keen allay his misgivings about this mission. “No lord Araxus, these orders come from the Warmaster”.Araxus’ eyes widened. “Abaddon”. He said thoughtfully. A man he held in greatesteem second only to Angron himself. “The Warmaster is concerned that this city is too long inthe taking and so asked my masters to intervene and bring it to destruction”.The armoured figure went on. Araxus started just a little, the word destructionmade him feel good inside. “If the Warmaster wants it done then we will do it”. Araxussaid with the conviction of a born slaughterer. The armoured figure nodded. “Once you have slain the defenders on the wall you are tolink up with Distratix’s Black Legion troops for an assault on the upperhives.” Araxus nodded. “Very well, when are the charges going to be set off?” Heasked the armoured figure. “Very soon my Lord things are almost ready”. Araxus noddedwearily and looked around his men were still pacing excitedly and up on thesides of the culvert were the Alpha Legion. He blinked his eyes which seemedheavy all of a sudden were there more Alphas than before? It was hard to tellhe wasn’t sure how many had been there to begin with. He thought that he mighttry to count them all. On a rocky crag overlooking the battle the Black LegionDaemon Prince Distratix paced angrily. Distratix was a four metre, two tonnightmare of snarling muzzle, fur and talons. ‘Where in the warp is that idiot Araxus?” He asked hisassembled aides. He looked down at the battle scape below, His Black LegionMarines were trying to force a way through the breach that the Iron Warriorsartillery had smashed in the cities walls, but without the ferocity of theWorld Eaters they were making little headway. His aides looked at one anothernervously, although all of them were battle hardened marines they did not wantto attract the ire of their commander. Distratix looked back at them. “Well”? All but one of the aides took a step backwards helooked at his colleuges with a mix of fear and anger. Distratix stepped up tothe man and put his muzzle right in the man’s face. Well? Distratix’s eyes bored a hole into the aides face,eons of death and destruction danced in those luminous orbs. The foul stench ofthe Warp puffed out with every breath Distratix took, the man tried not to gag.He steeled himself. “Lord Araxus is gone my lord, he has not responded to vox hails”. Distratix rose tohis full height the man flinched a little but stayed where he was. Distratixturned and walked over to where some prisoners were chained he picked one manand pulled his face off a, thoughtful expression on his monstrous visage. Thescreams of the man were horrifying but nothing the aides had not heard before. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/286163-secret-legion/#findComment-3583156 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Son of Barbarus Posted February 1, 2014 Author Share Posted February 1, 2014 Third page. The aide who had been volunteered by his colleagues lookedat them triumphantly he had delivered bad news and not been killed for it, theylooked back sullenly wishing that he had been killed. Distratix’s act oftorture had calmed him down a bit but he was still angry, he promised himself along talk with Lord Araxus next time they met. He turned back to aides lettingthe tortured man slump back half alive. “Send some Raptors to ascertain the whereabouts of LordAraxus and his men. Make sure you bring Lord Araxus to me”. The aides shoutedtheir platitudes and went to work, Distratix lifted a finger a thin green raysprang from it and hit the messengers back. The man stopped still, the ray slidall over his body covering it completely. The man started to scream and screamthe screams slowly turned to gurgles as all the man’s organic components were liquefied.The ray snapped off and the former aides armour slumped to the ground theremains of the man still oozing out of it. “Clean that up”! Snapped Distratix, the rest of his aidesscurried to do their masters bidding. Distratix turned with a horrible smile onhis face and walked back into his tent. His men were smiling too their littleplan to murder their friend had worked. At the culvert Lord Araxus was about to reach breakingpoint, his blood was up and he needed action, he needed to kill. He spun toface the Alpha. “When will…”. He trailed off into silence. The Alpha wasstarting the process to remove its helmet Lord Araxus wanted to see what layunder that helmet desperately. Would it be scarred and ravaged like his own orperhaps angelically beautiful like the face of a member of the EmperorsChildren, it could even be a puss ridden horror like a Plague Marine. “Tell me Lord Araxus, what do you remember about the timebefore the Heresy?” The question hit himlike a bolt of lightning and sent his mind spinning back across the millennia.He started to speak, he spoke of the first time he saw Angron and how they hadbeen moulded by their Primarch into a formidable force. He told of their manyvictories against impossible odds bought by the sacrifice of many of hisbrothers, the honours and heads that they had collected. Then his mood turnedsour and he spoke of the other legions jealously and eventual hatred of Angronand how Horus had helped them see the truth. That the Emperor and his lapdogswere not the right rulers of the galaxy and that Horus and only Horus had theright to rule mankind, his anger had been rising as he spoke of the Heresy andnow all he could think of was the many injustices that his Legion had suffered.He looked out at his men they had all stopped their pacing and were looking athim quietly as though they were lost in recollections of their own. Realisationdawned on Araxus’ scarred face and he turned towards the armoured figure. As heturned he noticed that there were a lot more Alpha’s on the sides of theculvert easily twice as many as his own warriors and strangely enough they wereall holding chain axes. A thought drifted across his mind. “Alpha’s don’t carry chainaxes”. Anger bloomed in his mind,they’d been had, this was a trap and his men were in great danger. He reachedfor his own chainaxe the mighty Decapitator and fully faced his adversary. “You…” Was as far as he got, the stranger had taken thehelmet off and was standing there looking at him. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/286163-secret-legion/#findComment-3584338 Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathspectersgt7 Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 Cool!!!! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/286163-secret-legion/#findComment-3584448 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Son of Barbarus Posted February 2, 2014 Author Share Posted February 2, 2014 Thanks. Fourth Page. “Beautiful”. Was the last thing he said before the stranger’ssword took off his head, After his head had stopped bouncing and before all theblood left his brain, His eyes saw the Alpha’s running down the sides of theculvert chain axes screaming, his own men reacting too slowly and the Alpha’schopping into them. Great arcs of blood and gore fountained into the air fromthe spinning axes, it was a beautiful sight he thought. Khorne would be happy that this bloodlettinghad taken place. Then his eyes stopped working and his soul was sent spirallinginto the Warp to stand and be judged before his masters Brass Throne. The fight was quick and brutal, before the Bezerkers hadorganised themselves into a defensive position the Alphas were in amongst themchopping, chopping and chopping. The end of the fight saw the Khornatesslaughtered to a man while the Alphas due largely to surprise and the earlydeath of the world Eaters commander had sustained fairly light casualties. Thearmoured figure had not taken part in the battle instead letting the otherAlphas do the grisly work. Now that the battle was finished and the blood waspooling on the ground the armoured figure strode over to Lord Araxus’dismembered body. Prising Decapitator from his cold dead hand was not easy butfinally the mighty chain axe was free. Once the blade was spinning at maximumrpms it was applied to the wound inflicted by the armoured figure’s sword,Decapitator was then gently placed back in the Bezerker Lord’s hand. Thearmoured figure straightened, as the downwash from the transports made the dustin the culvert swirl around and settle in the blood of the fallen World Eaters. “Get the dead and wounded into the transports”. The Alpha legionarieshurried to obey the command. Only when the last dead Space Marine was carriedonto the transport did the armoured figure take one last look at the smallbattlefield and alight onto the transport. The flight to their cloaked carrierwas brief and uneventful. They witnessed the flood of imperial reinforcementsgoing to the surface at the same time that Chaos forces were starting towithdraw. The sight gave them some measure of satisfaction, but it was notenough to dispel their distress at seeing their fellow Marines injured or dead. When the doors of the transport opened the Alpha leaderstepped into a busy hanger, preparations were being made for the ship to enterthe warp. Apothecaries rushed over to the transport and carried out thewounded. The dead would also be collected and their gene seed harvested, theCaptain of the ship was waiting beside the hangers doors. “Captain, take us into the warp, when it is safe bring usout I have to report to Lord Alpharius”. The Captain bowed in the wake of thearmoured figure. Later the Alpha commanders armour had been removed by silentassistants, the Captain found his commander sitting in a simple robe before ablank vid screen he announced himself with a little cough. “Captain.” The robed figure did not turn around. “ Commander, Lord Alpharius has contacted us”. The Alphacommander sat more upright. “Put him on”. The Captain worked on the controls. An imageof the Alpha Legions Primarch came into view. He was strikingly handsome in theclassical sense, at the sight of the Alpha Commander his face split into a widegrin. “Sister, how did you mission go”? She grinned, her smilemirroring that of her twin. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/286163-secret-legion/#findComment-3584621 Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathspectersgt7 Posted February 2, 2014 Share Posted February 2, 2014 What? Whoa!! Man I did not see that coming!!.A good read. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/286163-secret-legion/#findComment-3584806 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Son of Barbarus Posted February 3, 2014 Author Share Posted February 3, 2014 Thank you, glad you're enjoying it. Page 5. “It went well we delayed the Chaos forces enough to allowImperial reinforcements to arrive. Araxus’ mental defences were formidable butnot undefeatable. We suffered some losses but that was to be expected whenfighting Khornate troops”. Her smile hadfaded at the mention of the causalities. Alpharius noticed her mood darken. Hethought some good news was in order. “My mission went off without a hitch two million Imperialcitizens were massacred by Chaos Marines because we let them into the city. TheImperial defenders never stood a chance”. “That’s good brother”. Alpharius was sure that his successwould cheer his sister up but she was still glum. He knew from experience thatshe liked to talk things out. “What’s wrong”? He asked her, she looked up at him. “It never gets any easier some of those sisters I lost todayhave been with me since the beginning”. Her eyes were glinting with tears butshe would not let them flow. Alpharius nodded solemnly. “I know”. He said gently. “What is it all for Alpharius”? She asked him. “Why do we sacrifice our people like this”? A hard edge hadcrept into her voice Alpharius noted it and chose his next words carefully. “Family, we do it for our family. For so long we have beentorn apart by war, but soon sister we will bring our family back together. Myplans have been a long time in the coming but they are almost at an end. Everylittle nudge that we give them brings our family closer and closer together. NowI have something in my possession that will bring all of my plans to fruition.But more on that later”. He grinned andhis joy was infectious, she felt her mood lifting not entirely she still missedher battle sisters that had fallen in combat but she’d had her faith in theplan restored. The losses however painful were worth it if they could bringtheir vast family back together. “Are you feeling better”? She nodded. “Yes thank you Alpharius”. Her brother could always put herin a good mood. “Good that makes me happy, when you have arrived at therendezvous come aboard my ship I want to meet your latest husband”. She noddedagain. “Goodbye Alpharius, I’ll see you soon”. Now it was his turnto nod. “Goodbye Omegia”. He made a movement out of sight of thescreen and it went blank. Omegia sat for a moment, then smiled her mood lifthad made her hungry. “Time to see what the Captain is doing for dinner”. Shethought to herself as she left her chambers. It is known that the Emperor fashioned twenty sons in hisimage to lead his forces to war across the galaxy. What is not known is that ina moment of indulgence he fashioned himself a twenty first child, a daughter.On the fateful day that his children were scattered across the universe hisgrief was total, but out of all his infants the one he grieved the most was hisdaughter little Omegia. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/286163-secret-legion/#findComment-3585249 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Son of Barbarus Posted February 3, 2014 Author Share Posted February 3, 2014 The last page, I hope you enjoyed my story. The Chaos Cruiser Annihilator was sailing silently throughthe stars. Distratix’s chambers were a triumph of gothic architecture cappedoff with a massive viewport through which the galaxy revealed its splendour.Distratix was not interested much in the stars at this moment he was staringglumly out of the viewport. “How did it all go wrong”? He thought to himself. He had theperfect battle plan and had executed it perfectly one thing had gone againsthim and it had cost him an entire world. An aide made his way to his mastersside a data slate in his hands Distratix barely looked at him. “Well”? He demanded, the aide cleared his throat. “The Raptors report my Lord”. Distratix fixed the aide witha baleful glare. “What does it say”? The aide swallowed audibly. “The Raptors found Lord Araxus and his men”. Distratixlooked at the door to his chambers. “Where is he? I thought I told you to bring him before me.”The aide looked miserable. “He’s dead my Lord, he and his men. They were found some wayfrom our position. It appears that they killed each other." Distratix sat backin his throne and snarled, black canine lips slid over his yellowed fangs. Theaide waited sure that his death was imminent. “Plot a course for the Eye I must report my failure to theWarmaster”. The aide scrambled to do his masters bidding. When the aide hadleft Distratix swivelled and looked out at the cold blackness of space. Littledid he know but the Galaxy was about to be turned inside out by WAR. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/286163-secret-legion/#findComment-3585251 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Welcheren Posted March 7, 2014 Share Posted March 7, 2014 Wow! That was incredible. Well done! You should turn this into a novel and send it to the Black Library, if you have not already done so. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/286163-secret-legion/#findComment-3613124 Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathspectersgt7 Posted March 9, 2014 Share Posted March 9, 2014 Another good read still taken a back a little. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/286163-secret-legion/#findComment-3615642 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Son of Barbarus Posted March 18, 2014 Author Share Posted March 18, 2014 Thanks for the comments guys! I really appreciate them! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/286163-secret-legion/#findComment-3625130 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akragth Posted March 18, 2014 Share Posted March 18, 2014 An enjoyable read for sure. My only critique would be grammar, but that's relatively minor all things considered; the content is definitely there! Good stuff. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/286163-secret-legion/#findComment-3625168 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Son of Barbarus Posted March 24, 2014 Author Share Posted March 24, 2014 Thanks for the reply! Grammar was never my strong suit I'm afraid. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/286163-secret-legion/#findComment-3631440 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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