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There are post-humans who have lived and fought for and against some of the worst nightmares of our collective imaginations in an alternate Hell-dimension where time literally has no meaning; an eternity of war, death, disease, and soul-tainted corruption that ever so slowly is driving each of them over the lip of sanity.

 

. . . .so why wouldn't they use profanity?

There are post-humans who have lived and fought for and against some of the worst nightmares of our collective imaginations in an alternate Hell-dimension where time literally has no meaning; an eternity of war, death, disease, and soul-tainted corruption that ever so slowly is driving each of them over the lip of sanity.

 

. . . .so why wouldn't they use profanity?

Often just feels forced when written.

 

Understand TG, I didn't mean to come across as uppity, I just tend to find it jars when reading. For emphasis, sure - but too many writers fall into the trap of using it lazily, and it detracts from the overall piece.

 

I look forward to reading it when finished!

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