Herald of Necrosis Posted May 14, 2014 Share Posted May 14, 2014 Herald of Necrosis This is some Lore of the Army that I am currently putting together, feedback would be awesome, cheers TheHeralds of Necrosis Brucellosis Maahes was a Captain in the Ultramarines in the M31500. He was a fine leader, and was always in the fight with his fellowmarines. Maahes was highly decorated and recognised around the Galaxy and inthe upper ranks of his legion. Maahes fought bravely, never backing down and never has he lost a battle; his soldiers look up to him as he looks up to Emperor. He foughtin many battles, both small and large, and came out on top. Except for now… “Move forward bothers! Drive the scum straight into the grasp of the Emperors grip!” this of course was Maahes, he was in command of the 1st Vanguard Company of his Chapter and was tasked asa shock force, to stun and wound the enemy. The enemy being the Orks, a fiercenation that was made with one purpose alone, to kill everything they set theireyes upon, even their own kind. The battle was a fairly ordinary one, much blood and much killing. Many brothers perished under the assault of the greenskins, but for every brother who perished, twenty Orks payed withtheir lives. They were out numbered twenty to one but not out gunned andcertainly not out-experienced. Until, that is, a group of Ork Warbosses stormedin. Maahes thought nothing of it, so he gathered up several of his brothers and a dreadnaught to combat the group. Maahes ordered the Dreadnaught to provide supressing fire upon the Warbosses and with the rest of his Brothers, he charged in. Just before impact, Maahes felt a rush like no other because for the first time, he saw fear in these Orks eyes... Despite thembeing genetically modified for combat, these Orks were scared and Maahes lovedit. He tore through them like a knife through paper; no one has ever seen himlike that before. After the skirmish, Maahes froze, everything around him froze and a being appeared and spoke to him. To this day, all he knows is thatit was Khorne himself. When Maahes awoke from his vision, he killed everything that he saw; he even ripped apart a Dreadnaught in a matter of seconds. When hewas finally restrained, he was banished and forever branded as a heretic… He fled, and lived as a nomad for three hundred years, worshipping Khorne in any way possible. At the end of his nomadic ventures, hebegan to gather followers and start his own army. In the two hundred years that passed, Brucellosis Maahes put together a large force, the first of his army being twelve Khornate Berserkers,who will remain loyal to their Lord and whoever, their Lord worships. And so he killed in the name of Khorne, for countless years he decimated populations of planets as his nameless army tore through thegalaxy, spreading the word of Khorne through bronze and blood. The Ascension to Nurgle Maahes was fighting fiercely; he was attacking the largest city of an Imperial world, Artemis. He wanted to decimated the entire populace in the name of Khorne andshow the Imperial that he was not to be taken lightly. He and his Berserkers charged in as usual, leading the 1st Vanguard Company. The challenge was mighty as these were not the commongreenskins; they were Ultramarines, one of the greatest fighting forces everknown. And so they fought fiercely, pushing through the enemy’s lines and eventually breaking and routing the cowards. So much for the Emperor… The Khornate berserkers rounded up the remaining civilians, killing the men and holding the women and children hostage. One ofhis commanders, Klades, asked what they should do with the civilians. Withoutthinking, Maahes ordered them to be let free. The minute he issued that order, his entire army, excluding himself and his first twelve, exploded into bloody chunks, spreadingover miles and miles of land and over everyone including the children. All that he could recall of the incident is seeing Khorne himself. He said that he was now branded as an enemy of Khorne and is forbiddento practise any Khornate rituals. Why Khorne didn’t finish him there and thenwill forever remain a mystery… For ninety years, Maahes and his twelve wandered the galaxy, doing naught but surviving on scrapings. While resting in an abandoned building, Maahes heard small scraping. He arose to see an odd shaped rat. As it was dark, he shone light onit to find that it was plagued and its innards were scraping off the floor. Once again, Maahes was knocked unconscious, and when he arose, his twelve berserkers had been converted into the colours of a PlagueMarine. He himself had undergone a dramatic change; he stunk as if he had sleptinside a ripening corpse and there were large incisions all over his body, yethe felt nothing. Around his neck slung a medallion of Nurgle, and from then on, he made it his life’s duty to spread the word of Nurgle. He gathered anarmy, and begun his cleansing of the Universe. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/291077-the-heralds-of-necrosis/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reaver Lord Soul Posted June 7, 2014 Share Posted June 7, 2014 Right well I`ve just finished reading through your lore post :) (actually i`ve read through it a good few times, beauties of having free internet at work ;) ) anyways overall I must admit i really like the paint scheme that you`ve come up with. Definitely got a nurgle feel to it and as well as the name i think you are gonna have a lot of fun coming up with both lore and models for it :D For the lore itself, I also like that the leader of the warband used to be an ultrasmurf, (mainly because you rarely hear of ultramarines turning to chaos) so I am definitely liking that bit. However, i might suggest that you edit the backstory of him once he had left the ultramarines.... I am only suggesting that as if he turned from Khorne to Nurgle then he would be meeting khorne`s favorite doggy pretty soon. Apart from that, I am definitely looking forward to either reading more lore about this warband and hopefully seeing some models soon XD Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/291077-the-heralds-of-necrosis/#findComment-3711398 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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