SimSnow Posted July 22, 2014 Share Posted July 22, 2014 Hey everyone! As you can see from the title, this is my very first post on this forum. I don't know if any of you have played through the campaign for Dawn of War 2 recently, but there was an exchange between Cyrus and Thaddeus that got me thinking about this. Anyway. Feedback is welcomed, of course. --- So I edited this out for now, just in case. If things don't pan out the way I anticipate, I'll repost the story. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/294115-an-eagle-doomed/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Musketeer12 Posted July 22, 2014 Share Posted July 22, 2014 This is just great! Musket Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/294115-an-eagle-doomed/#findComment-3753002 Share on other sites More sharing options...
deathspectersgt7 Posted July 23, 2014 Share Posted July 23, 2014 What Musketeer said. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/294115-an-eagle-doomed/#findComment-3753224 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lysimachus Posted July 25, 2014 Share Posted July 25, 2014 Very nice indeed! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/294115-an-eagle-doomed/#findComment-3755826 Share on other sites More sharing options...
carpediem Posted July 28, 2014 Share Posted July 28, 2014 Well written, well paced, no obvious grammar or spelling mistakes...and fairly engaging at that. Well done, I look forward to your next attempt. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/294115-an-eagle-doomed/#findComment-3757700 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForlorneRaven Posted July 30, 2014 Share Posted July 30, 2014 Great structure and well written!I'm hoping for more :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/294115-an-eagle-doomed/#findComment-3760195 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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