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Comedy is a lot tougher than I thought, I hope this works.

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Greetings and welcome to Inspirational Friday. This week we had just two contributions and both were very good. The reward goes to Warsmith Aznable and his sidekick The Wretch. I especially liked the "transfer" of ownership part. 

 

Step forth Warsmith Aznable and claim your reward!

 

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Inspirational Friday - 19/06/2015 - Chaos Skirmish - Tactical Squads

 

I have something special this week. Unlike in the previous IF, today I will offer you simply a stage and on this stage you have to play an event. Try to convey the philosophy and physicality of your warband with their actions and show us how your Chaos Space Marines would act in such a situation. If you take the role of the Imperial Space Marines, the same applies. 

 

Locale: A farmstead on an Agri-World. The farmstead offers some defense with its high walls and big farming equipment but on itself it is not an important resource to capture. Surrounding the farmstead there is a forest on the East, West and North, while there is open farmland with blooming greenfruit in the South. The South also has the main road approaching the farmstead. 

 

Objective: Chaos and the SM defenders fight skirmishes for the control of the Green Road, the main arterial road which connects the vast farmlands in the South with Nova Serra, the capital. The control of the roads is imperative for its mechanized convey system and tracked railroads are important to deliver what is due, the tithe of men and food goods. The CSM are in dire need to resupply so the fight for the farmstead and its surrounding area is ferocious. 

 

Actors: A Chaos Space Marines "tactical" squad and an Imperial Space Marines Tactical Squad. Chose who acts as defender and who as the attacker. They both command similar martial power and you are also allowed to field cult troops instead. Ten marines on each side plus auxiliary units (Scouts, Imperial Guard, Cultists, Daemons...). 

 

Bonus: Control the farmstead. Gather the enemy geneseed (for implantation or for observation). Contain your losses. Maintain the infrastructure. 

 

Let us be inspired!

 

Tenebris

Congratulations, Warsmith Aznable and good work Carrack too. I just couldn't get my juices flowing over a sidekick.

 

And kudos, Tenebris! This week's new topic is really a good one!

A hint of Rogue Trader's The Battle At The Farm and a chance to show how our warbands handle things.

I'm almost tempted to write it both ways, as attacker and defender.

  On 6/19/2015 at 9:10 AM, Kierdale said:

Congratulations, Warsmith Aznable and good work Carrack too. I just couldn't get my juices flowing over a sidekick.

And kudos, Tenebris! This week's new topic is really a good one!

A hint of Rogue Trader's The Battle At The Farm and a chance to show how our warbands handle things.

I'm almost tempted to write it both ways, as attacker and defender.

Based on the brief it sounds like it might change hands a few times!

Ok here's my attempt at it

Bullets began flying at them from the fortress. Nemeroth sent word through the coms link on his personal land raider the Harbinger of Despair to make haste to the enemy's lines. Rows upon rows of dirty white rhinos and land raiders rolling forwards towards the enemy lines backed up by squadrons of predators and vindicators and a few rare scaring battle tanks tearing apart the Ultramarine vehicle squadrons. Weaving in between this was Lord Mordreath and his company of bikers proving hard for the enemy to stop. They needed to clear a area for the teleporting Terminators and the swift striking assault marines to hit home and really begin this siege.

 

The Ultramarines were firing at the oncoming vehicle columns with every lascannon missile launcher and demolished she'll they could manage but by some strange sorceror the vehicles kept either vanishing behind a cloud of daemonic flies or completely vanishing from sight.

 

Being almost in close range of the enemy lines Mordreath ordered his bikers to be ready for the ensuing assault. As Rhinos began to disgorge plague marines chaos space marine havocs and chosen the aerial battle above finally came to a conclusion with the chaos forces emerging victorious.

 

As the bikers reached the imperial lines they began charging their bikes at the Ultramarines firing their bolters plasma guns Melta Guns and flamers before drawing their pistols and chain swords some wielding deadly power weapons others wielding a power fist or lightening claw.

 

As the bikes began slashing and stabbing left and right while those champions who were lucky enough to be gifted with a lightening claw or power fist were killing any loyalists who came near by. As cultists emerged from the tunnels they had built and began to run at the ultramarine lines trained ranks of Ultramarines used bolters missile launchers flamers and heavy bolter fire to try and push the chaos forces back. Many Ultramarines would fall this day to the chaos assault forcing the Ultramarines to retreat until they could receive reinforcement from the imperial forces due to enter the system

  On 6/15/2015 at 4:43 AM, Carrack said:

Comedy is a lot tougher than I thought, I hope this works.

It definitely worked. You painted a vivid picture of the situation and the two characters inside a very tight word limit, and it was a fun read.

  On 6/19/2015 at 8:41 AM, Tenebris said:

Greetings and welcome to Inspirational Friday. This week we had just two contributions and both were very good. The reward goes to Warsmith Aznable and his sidekick The Wretch. I especially liked the "transfer" of ownership part.

Step forth Warsmith Aznable and claim your reward!

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I accept this reward and the kind words of yourself and Kierdale. thanks.gif

This next scenario is interesting and I look forward to taking a crack at it!

Thanks for the encouragement Warsmith, and congrats on another victory well deserved.

 

I liked this week's challenge quite a bit, so I worked up this story. It may be a tad long, but I opted not to trim it down.

 

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Battle at the farm

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“Hey, sarge, how do I get out of this grox-spit outfit?”

Before sergeant Slater could reprimand the private, the whiner was nailed with a fearsome stare by commissar Flint.

The torrential downpour and occasional lightning drowned out almost all sound -and indeed it hid the squad’s advance and likely had swallowed up the private’s moaning- but Slater was sure he could hear the tapping of the commissar’s fingers on the patent leather holster of his bolt pistol. The stern officer popped the catch and drew the oversized pistol, his eyes still on the private, who hefted his lasrifle, adjusted his helmet and turned to look up the road toward the farm, squinting in the last hours of light.

The commissar gave a nod and the sergeant noticed the sides of the older man’s mouth rise in the slightest hint of a grim smile. The smile he always had before combat. A smile Slater had seen lead countless men to their deaths in the name of the Emperor.

Third squad had been tasked with taking and holding the Baker farmstead, overlooking the Green Road: the main north-south route in this region. The owners had apparently -quite pragmatically- evacuated the area some weeks ago when the renegade forces had arrived. `Arrived` wasn’t entirely correct though, as pockets of heretics had wormed their way into the various sects of the Imperial Cult here on Phioria 7 and all strata of society. When they had revealed themselves infrastructure had ground to a halt within days. And they possessed -having both squirrelled away over countless years and in the uprising seized- considerable military hardware. Thankfully not all were particularly skilled in its use. The 98th Cadian Alpine Rangers had been the nearest regiment capable of sending aid and word was that Astartes were also inbound. The 98th had been able to hold up the insane masses but it was going to take post-humans to prevent it becoming a long war of attrition.

Command had been relieved at the arrival of a space marine battle barge in orbit and had rushed to hail the Harbinger of Hades to apprise them of the situation. The Astartes had responded with an orbital bombardment centered on regimental command’s coordinates. Since then command had been at company level. He had heard rumours, unbelievable rumours easily dismissed, of renegade Astartes existing but had never believed it. It shook Slater to the core that the Emperor’s Angels of Death could turn from His light and only the preaching of the regimental ministers - and to a lesser extent Flint’s bolt pistol - kept the aged sergeant in the fight.

Squint and Cueball, the squad’s sharpshooter and his void-born spotter, found that the farmstead was already occupied by the enemy: ten cultists. One on lookout on each side of the farmhouse, autoguns held casually, the rest making themselves at home in the living room and making sport of the Bakers. Apparently the family hadn’t made it out in time after all.

Once the squad was in position Squint took out the lookout on their side, synchronizing his shot with the boom of a lightning bolt. A brace of frags went through the living room as the rest of the squad advanced, taking out the majority of the tattooed, pierced freaks and no doubt putting the Bakers out of their misery.

Commissar Flint then took his position to the side of the front door as guardsmen stacked up behind him and on the other side of the doorway. He booted in the door and vanished within only to be thrown back out less than a second later, his broken body riding a deafening shockwave which smashed every remaining window in the building and splintered the doorframe.

Jameson swept the doorway with the flamer to cover his squadmate’s retreat, Slater grabbing his vox-op’s webbing and hauling him away from the house, back toward the perimeter wall as the harsh bang of bolt guns opened up from within the farm house. Jameson fell first and the man next to him was engulfed in the fireball as a shot penetrated the flamer’s tank.

Slater threw himself and the younger guardsman over the wall. Good, hard Phioria granite. They landed elbow deep in the mud on the other side and kissed it.

“Get on the blower,” he called to the vox-op, “Get backup. Now!

Squint’s rifle kept up a slow but steady tempo, covering another guardsman as he vaulted the wall only to be hit midair, sheet lightning ripping across the heavens and illuminating the ruin a bolt shell made of the human form for all to see.

“How many?” Slater called to Cueball.

The spotter did not look up from his binocs nor did he cease his commentary to Squint, but raised a couple of fingers toward the sergeant, who hoped the gesture was a kill count.

There was a sound like the scream of a banshee, first rising in volume then suddenly cut, as if the sound had been sucked inward...then a boom as the sharpshooter team were torn apart by another sonic blast.

“You made the call? Help’s on the way?”

The vox-op looked up long enough to nod at his squad leader before burying his head once more.

Slater patted him on the back and hefted his lasrifle. He’d do his best to keep the enemy - traitor Astartes, it had to be - busy until backup arrived.

 

He had no idea how much time had passed. The torrential downpour had not ceased and smoke rose from his rifle’s barrel, water hissing upon the metal. He had no idea if he had managed any kills, but he had kept the enemy from venturing out of the building. Or were they just toying with him? Either way, he was sure there were five traitor Astartes within.

He had moved around to the far side, his night vision slowly returning after being robbed of it by the blast of Jameson’s flamer, when a sound made him look up.

A meteor? That would surely be a bad end to a bad battle in a bad war on a worthless little mudball of a planet, he thought to himself as the fireball streaked toward him from the heavens. It flared brighter as retro engines engaged and Slater swore -as much in relief as surprise- as the drop pod slammed down inside the farm house.

Bolts exploded and the petal-like doors blew open, gusting fire and clouds of dirt through the remains of the house, bringing down most of the internal walls and floors.

The ten Astartes within, clad in the dark green and brilliant white of the Mentor Legion, debarked swiftly, firing on the move. From his vantage point at the perimeter wall Slater saw more gouts of flame scour in the side of the building and bulky silhouettes moved through the smoke, which was lit from within by the muzzle flare of bolters on both sides. There were no cries of pain nor orders shouted out, just a rapid rally of gunfire. To unleash such destructive firepower at such short range! The smoke and debris was cleared briefly by another sonic blast and Slater saw one of the pastel-armoured marines - the colours of his armour more akin to rotten flesh in the dying light - ram the long, low barrel of his curious weapon into the gut of one Mentor. The traitor pulled some trigger deep within his weapon, blowing the Mentor apart and smearing the remains of him and the marine behind him over what little of the walls still stood.

But the traitors were outnumbered. The one with the sonic weapon was cut down by coordinated fire by two of the other Mentors while the rest of the squad forced the turncoats back.

The house was now ablaze and Slater watched as horned and hunched silhouettes, not those smooth, heroic forms of loyalist Astartes, ran from the rear of the building toward the nearest cover: the farm’s large barn. Eager to deny them cover and concealment, one of the Mentor Legion took a knee and raised a tubular weapon to his shoulder. A comrade knelt by him and tapped him on the shoulder before raising a bolt gun to cover them both. A missile shot forth and the barn went up in a cloud of splinters...

From within which there was a roar of engines and headlights of several vivid hues sprung to life. The traitors’ Rhino charged forth and Slater saw another five traitors run out from behind its cover before a grill-mouthed demonic-faced device atop the APC let out a scream which shook his very soul and voided his bowels.

He did not see the final clash between the Mentor Legion and the Psychopomps but when the rain finally ceased and the sky began to lighten once more with His light, Slater raised his head to see ten post-human corpses, atop crimson-slicked stakes, five either side of the roadway. All had been stripped of their armour and equipment, and many of them their very faces.

He turned and fled.

  On 6/24/2015 at 1:47 AM, Carrack said:

@ Kierdale. "Hey sarge, how do I get out of this grox-spit outfit?" Sounds familiar :) I may have heard something similar at least a hundred times.

I make no claims to originality there :D

  On 6/24/2015 at 3:22 AM, Kierdale said:

  On 6/24/2015 at 1:47 AM, Carrack said:

@ Kierdale. "Hey sarge, how do I get out of this grox-spit outfit?" Sounds familiar smile.png I may have heard something similar at least a hundred times.

I make no claims to originality there biggrin.png

We all know the 40k universe is full of pop-cultire references anyway. You're just keeping up with tradition, hehe :)

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Greetings, brothers!

So the latest Inspirational Friday topic has been Chaos Skirmish - Tactical Squads. It was inspiring to read through the writing and imagine the various battles. That poor farmstead... smile.png Well, it's a very tough pick as usual even with only three participants(I had to sleep on it)...but
Kierdale, "A winner is you" as the old NES-game said.

Here is another badge for your collection, congratulations!

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It's been a long journey and it has been a great journey. There has been a ton of fun for us all and what great things this topic has produced. (I still remember having an actual nightmare from one of the stories in here!) Tenebris will always be remembered for the hard work he put into this thread, a fine job. But as things have changed, this thread has to change as well.

Now, this is not the end, far from it! We will take a break while restructuring things a bit and then the "Inspirational Friday" will rise again!

So, thanks to all participants, and don't let your writing skills get rusty...they will surely be needed again soon! smile.png

  • 2 months later...

Cant PM you tenebris, but wanted to let you know that i finished your two last ships! Took a while for me, alot of RL stuff, work, family and other commitments!

All three are below here smile.png enjoy!

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And the ship you already seen!

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