v6v77 Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 Hey all Some of you may have interacted with me on here abit and know i am abit of an Alpha legion fan mainly due to their sensibility. I have a few writting ideas in my head that i would love some feedback for. As far as i can see we dont have an age of darkness section in the liber. Going to drop the ideas here and wait for a mod to come and move it if needs be. The actual fluff pieces will be coming shortly. Idea 1) Based on the biblical quote "He who is last shall be first" what if alpharius was the first primarch to be found. How would that (for better and worse) affect the future imperium. Idea 2) Back in the canon verse, what if shortly before the heresy someone gathered in secret 18 astartes into a single band of warriors. 18 astartes from 18 legions. Basically to explore inter legion interaction and how opposites can be complementary (AL and UM for example). More ideas forthcoming. Feel free to help and or give me a nudge. Better yet drop an idea here yourself. I am pretty good at AL fluff and will mainly be writing that but if something else good comes up i would be happy to jump on it. Regards V Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309643-literary-ideas-in-the-age-of-darkness/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skalpynock Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 Well for all they know, Alpharius could have been the first primarch found, but... this account is a lie. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309643-literary-ideas-in-the-age-of-darkness/#findComment-4094142 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hesh Kadesh Posted June 19, 2015 Share Posted June 19, 2015 Even telling someone you are lying is lying. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309643-literary-ideas-in-the-age-of-darkness/#findComment-4094148 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skalpynock Posted June 20, 2015 Share Posted June 20, 2015 However, a "What if?" scenario I'd suggest, based on the premise of Alpharius being found first, would be to reverse the rest of the Primarchs' rediscovery order. To see the Storm Walkers being sent into exile by the Iron Lord, to hear the sorrow of Fulgrim as he meets the ashes of his sons, to remember the World Eaters' honors at Desh'ea. ...that was supposed to be for you to write, but the premise is too good for me not to proceed Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309643-literary-ideas-in-the-age-of-darkness/#findComment-4095284 Share on other sites More sharing options...
v6v77 Posted June 20, 2015 Author Share Posted June 20, 2015 However, a "What if?" scenario I'd suggest, based on the premise of Alpharius being found first, would be to reverse the rest of the Primarchs' rediscovery order. To see the Storm Walkers being sent into exile by the Iron Lord, to hear the sorrow of Fulgrim as he meets the ashes of his sons, to remember the World Eaters' honors at Desh'ea. ...that was supposed to be for you to write, but the premise is too good for me not to proceed Im not entirely clued up on pre discovery legions but i would love to do that. I have 2 and abit short chapters of alpharius fluff done already. Cant seem to get the mechanicum to sound properly. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309643-literary-ideas-in-the-age-of-darkness/#findComment-4095593 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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