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Vulpine

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Hi All, I've posted some story's up on this page.

 

I would love some feedback and most of all just people reading and (hopefully) enjoying them.

 

So if you do give them a read and don't want to leave C&C. Please give a little post so I know you've given it a try.

 

1) The Small Bunker - A Imperial officer incharge of a bunker on the front line finds himself irritable and missing 'the fighting '. Stuck on watch over an empty no mans land... Or is it empty? :

http://www.bolterandchainsword.com/topic/315416-the-small-bunker-an-imperial-guard-siege-story/?do=findComment&comment=4209565

 

2) Awake - An Evesor assassin is sent on a mission. A expensive and valuable peace of imperial equipment. The Emotional repressed supper killing stalker... But what happens if the death dealer becomes unbalanced? And perhaps started "feeling"?

http://www.bolterandchainsword.com/topic/315417-awake-an-eversor-assassin-story/?do=findComment&comment=4210150

 

3) Fifty Six - A group of elite guard snippers are called in to locate, out whit and kill a Eldar Ranger sniper who has been holding up the imperial forces in the area.

http://www.bolterandchainsword.com/topic/315418-fifty-six-story-about-guard-snipers-vr-eldar-rangers/?do=findComment&comment=4209572

 

4) The Spiders Web - A group of Artefact hunters in the 41st Millennium. But this artifact has attracted the attention of multiple parties, who will secure the artefact?

http://www.bolterandchainsword.com/topic/315419-the-spiders-web-artefact-hunting-in-the-41st-millennium/?do=findComment&comment=4209577

 

5) The Mutant Within - Commissar Grey finds himself at a lone outpost preparing for what might be a last stand against Geanstealer Cultists. As an Abhuman Regiments arrives to help reinforce the outpost will they be welcomed by Grey and the Guarsmen of the outpost?

http://www.bolterandchainsword.com/topic/315421-the-mutant-within-story-about-an-abhuman-guard-regiment/?do=findComment&comment=4209589

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