New Templar needing advise on first army

[Topsy_Kret]

Greetings Brothers, while I have been using various resources on this forum for the past few months waiting for 8th edition, this is my first post. Most things I try and figure out on my own, but I've come to a point that I'm ready to field a question. For the most part I believe my army is complete/correct using the Imperium keyword and was wondering if any may look it over and give me their opinion. Please remember this is the very first army I've assembled.....ever. Yes, everything on the list I have purchased and physically have in my hands. My army is currently being painted and pictures will follow once completed....it's alot for a first army but I'm loving it with...much  ZEAL!!!!!!

 

 

 Happy Purging Brothers.

 

=+= The Cadian Crusade =+=

Black Templar & Adepta Sororitas

Battalion Detachment

>> 1999 Points <<

 

      ~HQ~

>>357 pts<<

 

200pts || St. Celestine + Geminae Superia

 [Transport] N/A

 

 85pts  || Castellan (Captain) - Plasma Pistol, Power Sword, The Burning Blade

 [Transport] Drop Pod

 

 72pts  || Chaplain - Bolt Pistol, Crozius, Crusader's Helm

 [Transport] Razorback 1

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    ~Troops~

  >>351 pts<<

 

80pts  || Battle Sister Squad (6) - Hvy Bolter, Flamer /// Sister Superior - Chainsword, Plasma Pistol

  [Transport] Sororitas Rhino 1

 

80pts  || Battle Sister Squad (6) - Hvy Flamer, Storm Bolter /// Sister Superior - Chainsword, Plasma Pistol

  [Transport] Sororitas Rhino 2

 

92pts  || Crusader squad (5) - Plasma Gun, Heavy Bolter, 2x Chainsword /// Sword Bro - Power Sword, Bolt Pistol

  [Transport] Razorback 1

 

99pts  || Crusader squad (5) - Flamer, Plasma Cannon, 2x Chainsword /// Sword Bro - Power Sword, Bolt Pistol

  [Transport] Razorback 2

 

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   ~Fast Attack~

   >>104 pts<<

104 pts || Dominion Squad (6) - flamer, flamer, flamer, meltagun /// Dominion Superior - Boltgun, Bolt Pistol

  [Transport] Immolator

 

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   ~Elites~

>>175 pts<<

 

55 pts || Apothecary - Chainsword, Bolt Pistol, The Armour Indomitus

 [Transport] Razorback 2

 

120 pts || Reiver Squad (5) - Grav Chutes, Bolt Carbine

 [Transport] N/A

 

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  ~Heavy Support~

     >>486 pts<<

 

170 pts || Devastator Squad (5) - Plas Cannon, Las Cannon, Missile Launcher, Missile Launcher /// Sword Bro - Power Sword, Bolt Pistol /// Armorium Cherub

 [Transport] Drop Pod

 

316 pts || Land Raider Crusader - 2x Hurricane Bolter, Multi-Melta, Twin Assault Cannon, Storm Bolter

 

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  ~Dedicated Transport~

         >>431 pts<<

 

81 pts || Sororitas Rhino 1 - Storm Bolter, Hunter-Killer Missile

 

81 pts || Sororitas Rhino 2 - Storm Bolter, Hunter-Killer Missile

 

105 pts || Immolator - Immolation Flamer, Storm Bolter

 

82 pts || Razorback 1 - Twin Heavy Bolter

 

82 pts || Razorback 2 - Twin Heavy Bolter

 

95 pts || Drop Pod - Storm Bolter

 

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Edit 1: Original list scrapped and alternate list became primary list....if that makes sense

 

Edit 2: New Codex Astartes Released, point values updated as well as inclusion of Reiver squad.

Edited July 31, 2017 by Topsy_Kret

[SWORD BROTHER RYAN]

I can't speak to the SoB, but the Templar list seems pretty solid. Not at all surprised that Battlescribe doesn't figure the Crusader SQD!

 

I don't have my index to hand ATM, but I'm sure the PTS values aren't too far off. If nobody gets back to you by the time I get off work tonight, I'll crunch the numbers & let you know if there is a discrepancy.

[Marshal Wolfhart]

Maybe update Battlescribe or the datalog, i got crusader squads in mine and the points seem right.

[Topsy_Kret]

Thank you Brothers, I was also told Celestine was a jump pack unit so couldnt take the immo as transport, as well as the canoness not able to use the LRC as a transport due to being Sororitas. I've been playing with the idea of removing the dreadnought and replacing it with a drop pod for the dev squad and castellan/captain, thoughts?

[Honda]

Welcome brother to the Eternal Crusade. You are joining the greatest brotherhood in the Imperium, at a time of dire need.

 

Your Emperor has not released us from our duty. We are his divine instruments entrusted with cleansing his galaxy of the foul, the weak, and the alien. Your duty is to accept this honor and in the name of Dorn and Sigismund, purify the stars.

 

Let nothing prevent you from accomplishing your anointed task.

 

Go forth and unleash your ZEAL!

[Gendo]

Welcome!

 

Do you already have the models and how fluffy you want it to be?

[Topsy_Kret]

Welcome!

 

Do you already have the models and how fluffy you want it to be?

 

all models on list are ones i own, not sure about fluff.....first army so not sure what exactly that entails