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Space wolves VS Orks


Sgt.Rob

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You demonstrate great promise as an illustrator. Your posing and setting needs more development, though. As is, I get no sense of motion in the image.

 

Suggested improvements: Let the Space Wolf and his opponent lean- forwards as if charging into battle, or backwards as if recoiling from an enemy attack. Have metallic sparks and/or splashes of blood fly from the weapons and their targets, to show the Space Wolf's chainsword and the Ork's power claw are being used. Have dust clouds coil about the combatants' feet, to give us viewers a sense of motion. Add battle damage to the armor of the Space Wolf and/or the Ork, and have the damage look as if their opponent's weapon caused it.

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