Brother Lunkhead Posted September 3, 2019 Share Posted September 3, 2019 Brother Bjorn makes a good point when he says get some proof readers who are familiar with the setting..... that's why we're here and hopefully that's one of the reasons you are posting. We should all listen to thoughtful advise from knowledgeable and well meaning Fraters, but..... that does not mean we necessarily have to take their advise I've said it before and I'll say it again, ultimately it's your chapter and you ultimately decide where to take it. Where're not GW so, as Brother Messor says, "the stakes probably aren't that dramatic for someone's personal IA." That also gives us a lot more freedom to explore different possibilities. Some advice will help you to edit your IA and some will assist you in examining points that you haven't given much thought to and need to expand on, or even rethink. Some comments will challenge your resolve. Maybe your IA isn't what you wanted it to be and you need to make the big redo, or MAYBE it IS what you want it to be and your critic just needs to chill So, Brother Bruce, from my point of view the Revenant Fists are lookin' good and you should stay the course and see where it takes you Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/357512-the-revenant-fists/page/3/#findComment-5381029 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bruce Malcom Posted September 4, 2019 Author Share Posted September 4, 2019 Brother Bjorn makes a good point when he says get some proof readers who are familiar with the setting..... that's why we're here:yes: and hopefully that's one of the reasons you are posting. We should all listen to thoughtful advise from knowledgeable and well meaning Fraters, but..... that does not mean we necessarily have to take their advise:no: I've said it before and I'll say it again, ultimately it's your chapter and you ultimately decide where to take it. Where're not GW so, as Brother Messor says, "the stakes probably aren't that dramatic for someone's personal IA." That also gives us a lot more freedom to explore different possibilities. Some advice will help you to edit your IA and some will assist you in examining points that you haven't given much thought to and need to expand on, or even rethink. Some comments will challenge your resolve. Maybe your IA isn't what you wanted it to be and you need to make the big redo, or MAYBE it IS what you want it to be and your critic just needs to chill:teehee: So, Brother Bruce, from my point of view the Revenant Fists are lookin' good:tu: and you should stay the course and see where it takes you:unsure::D Thank you, it's shaping out perfectly, and that is one of the reasons. The other reason is that I like making stuff and showing people it. :teehee: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/357512-the-revenant-fists/page/3/#findComment-5381348 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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