A Vox in the Void Posted February 18, 2021 Share Posted February 18, 2021 https://youtu.be/WaM3zAF5VNs Story written by rhysh63 and audio by myself, 'A Vox in the Void' Brother Lunkhead 1 Back to top Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/369117-aquila-narrated-fan-fiction/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Lunkhead Posted February 18, 2021 Share Posted February 18, 2021 Very fine work sir Great story, excellent ambiance and narrative work. Nitpickry: Hidden Content I think in the future you might consider altering tone in your narration to fit the character's point of view. For example, using a gentler tone in the beginning, emphasizing the child's point of view and then moving to something more intense as you get to the fight scene. On the whole though, the voice work was very good and you have an excellent voice for narration. A Vox in the Void 1 Back to top Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/369117-aquila-narrated-fan-fiction/#findComment-5668786 Share on other sites More sharing options...
A Vox in the Void Posted February 18, 2021 Author Share Posted February 18, 2021 (edited) Thankyou my friend. Had a lot of fun with this one Edited February 18, 2021 by A Vox in the Void Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/369117-aquila-narrated-fan-fiction/#findComment-5668885 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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