House Goliath Gang Background Concept

[space wolf]

Just wanted to get everyone's thoughts ways to improve my Gang Background:

 

The Warriors Without Fear

In the heart of the Goliath Stronghold, where the forges roar and the air crackles with heat, a legend was forged: the "Warriors Without Fear." This gang, a force defined by attitude and aggression, was led by figures whose names echo through the rusted tunnels of Necromunda.

 

Stone Cold Steve: The foundation of the gang, Steve is the Forge Tyrant wielding a boltgun and chain axe. He aggressively challenges the status quo of the current underhive establishment in every action, always ready to open up a can of whoopass on anyone who crosses his path. He is the heart, soul and fist of the gang.

 

His core crew is a collection of brutal individuals:

• Hulk: A hulking Stimmer, armed with paired Pulverizers. The stims have warped his mind, causing him to hear voices. He believes his pulverizers are the spirits of his long-dead brothers, guiding him. Before he charges into battle, he yells, "Whatcha gunna do, Brother?" as he asks them for guidance. Unfortunately for his foes, the answer he hears is always the same: "Kill." His presence is one of drug-fueled, unbridled power.
• Savage Randy: A volatile Forge Boss, he loves nothing more than snapping off shots from his beloved Heavy Bolter, "Slim Jim." His erratic behavior and devastating firepower make him a terrifying force on the battlefield. His battle cry, "Ooooooh yeah!", precedes every burst of heavy bolter fire. He is a chaotic and unpredictable storm.
• Razor: A smooth-talking Bruiser, armed with an axe and grenade launcher. He blends brutal efficiency with a touch of swagger, a dangerous combination in the underhive. He values his gold chains, and always has a toothpick dangling from his mouth. He saunters into combat, a casual "Hey yo" preceding the launch of a grenade. He is cool and calculated.
• Rocky: A charismatic Bruiser, armed with a combat shotgun. He uses his sharp wit and brutal efficiency to command respect. He will take on any challenge, as his personal philosophy is to "Just bring it!". He projects confident dominance.
• Chyna: A powerful Bully, armed with an axe and stubgun. Known as the "9th wonder of Necromunda", she enforces Stone Cold's will with brutal efficiency, her presence a chilling reminder of the gang's ruthlessness. She projects unwavering, intimidating force.
• Kid: A quick and agile Forgeborn, armed with a stubgun. Known as a "heartbreaker" because he constantly declares himself a "sexy boy" and leaves a trail of broken hearts and broken bodies, he uses his speed to out-maneuver his opponents. He is quick and unpredictable.
• Big Poppa: A raging 'Zerker, his raw power and rage make him a fearsome close combat fighter. His brain has become so clouded from years of combat and stims that all he seems capable of saying is "boom-shaka-laka", especially when smashing things. He is pure, unadulterated fury.
• Kane: A silent and imposing Stimmer, his massive frame and brutal strength make him a terrifying opponent. Early in his life, Kane survived a terrible forgefire, losing his ability to speak. He constantly uses stims to further numb the pain he feels at all times from the burns. He projects silent, brooding menace.
• Deadman: A brooding Forge Boss, armed with heavy weapons, and the brother of Kane. He brings a cold and calculated brutality to the gang, promising his victims "I'll make you famous" before delivering a final blow. He keeps a meticulous tally of his victims, etching their names and fates onto his armor, ensuring their "fame" is forever etched in steel. He projects grim, inevitable destruction.
• "T": A skilled and acrobatic Bruiser, a master of close-quarters combat. He taunts his opponents with a swift "Sucka!" before unleashing a flurry of blows. He is flashy and skillful.
• Dogg: A fast-talking and quick-witted Forgeborn, armed with a stubgun. He warns his foes that "your ass better call somebody" before engaging in a firefight. He is cocky and street-smart.
• Eddie G: A cunning and deceptive Forgeborn, who uses any means necessary to win. His motto is "cheat to win", and he lives by it. He is sly and underhanded.

 

Their base, a repurposed forge deep within a forgotten sector of the underhive, is a testament to their strength and resourcefulness. Here, they maintain their arsenal and hone their already formidable combat skills. The "Warriors Without Fear" are a force of nature, a living testament to the raw power of the Goliath gene. They carve their path through the underhive with ruthless aggression, their name a chilling reminder to any who dare oppose them. A new generation of ganger for House Goliath, they are the embodiment of strength and they fear no one.

Edited March 20 by space wolf

[Kilcin]

I like the background, no notes except I see 'is' in bold twice, once under Eddie G's entry and the first sentence in the following paragraph. Definitely enjoy the fun wrestling references.

[space wolf]

Thanks for the feedback! Yeah i dont know why those are bolded, but ill fix them. I know the theme is a bit on the nose, but hopefully it doesnt take from the immersion.

[Kilcin]

I don't it takes away too much, feels like the GW of old when the original Necromunda came out.

[Cactus]

Goliath gangers named after wrestlers? It checks out, that's genuine Necromunda.

 

My only concern is hubris - they sound awesome but will the dice back that up?