IDK where else to put this, my idea for a cowboy guardsmen regimen or smth

[Witherking17]

Home planet: Vitria.

Rangers of Vitria are like the death Koorps of Krieg, but instead of Krieg it's Vitria, and they have to deal with the dusk tribes. They dawn themselves in brown and black leather, arm themselves with Galvanic carbines, bolt revolvers, and mechanicus pistols. They take their equipment from the mechanicus and patrol the irradiated dessert. They hunt for outlaws of the imperium who have escaped the law's cold, unforgiving, grip. They all dawn cowboy hats and try to make with what they have. They ride horses and other mounts, like domesticated xenos. They set up camp in random spots. They fight off whatever still remains of the indigenous life. 

 

Should I do a different planet?