Codex: The Badab War (Redux) 3rd Edition Badab War Reimagining

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So after a lot of format fiddling, text wrangling, brain bending, fluff jigging etc... 
 

We've got the first pass of rules sorted for Codex: The Badab War. 
 

This is an attempt to bring the absolute phenomenal Forge World Badab War books back into the gloriousness of 3rd ed 40k.

We've attempted to keep the same design language in both rules, art and layout for the book, while hopefully drawing in some of the fantastic stuff from the Imperial Armours.

(Some example pages)

We've also opted to add some units in that are hopefully thematic, while still being true to well...the very barebones nature of Codex: Space Marines. The rules offer some limited improvements to the baseline codex space marines, as well as taking a page (or multiple) from the likes of Codex: Armageddon and the Codex: Space Marine supplements (Dark Angels, Blood Angels and Space Wolves) for how we've decided to add units and create any new rules for the myriad space marine forces involved in the Badab war.
 

On top of that we have the Tyrant's Legion which leans heavily on the 3.5 ed imperial guard, as well as some suggested ways to run mortal forces within the Maelstrom Zone and the Badab War setting.
 

So this is where you the community come in, as a team of 3 we miss plenty of stuff in regards to proofing, layout and (hopefully not too much) balance issues and concnerns. Most characters were applicable for instance are either a copy paste with some shimmying of rules from other exisiting marine characters, or built using standard equipment with some extra skills here or there with costs added on top. 
 

At the end of the day, these, much like the vibe of older editions, are just a guideline and a jumping off point for people to get some sweet Badab action in on an older edition of the game!
 

Anyway, less prattle.
 

Here is the link for the 1.0 community feedback pdf of Codex: The Badab War:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DtzqnyBcaKiwPlTIoPaG0rQHhpVe2Ews/view?usp=sharing 
 

And here, more importantly, is the feedback form, where hopefully people can put any issues they see, proofing errors, fluff they reckon would be good that is missing, or just any old suggestions:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLSfesof9iVHT8ej9ZwazrOhlFa7Ln_wJI8xvM3VnP6Qm_mc1Eg/viewform?usp=sharing&ouid=109185400872703587615 
 

Thanks in advance and we certainly look forward to creating an absolutely banger document with your help!

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