Henimann Posted June 2, 2005 Share Posted June 2, 2005 OK - Here's the hopefully finished fluff for my chapter, the Steel Tempests - +++Searching Imperial Data Files+++ +++Uploading Link Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/76093-finished-fluff-long/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tubal Posted June 2, 2005 Share Posted June 2, 2005 Very good, much better than the draft you posted a while ago. It's clean, comprehensive and fits well with the rest of 40k while still being unique. The only problems I could find was that the librarians would try to contact nearby astropaths, not the astronomican, and you misspelled "[sychic". All in all nothing important, now get painting :blush: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/76093-finished-fluff-long/#findComment-875005 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Henimann Posted June 2, 2005 Author Share Posted June 2, 2005 Very good, much better than the draft you posted a while ago. It's clean, comprehensive and fits well with the rest of 40k while still being unique. The only problems I could find was that the librarians would try to contact nearby astropaths, not the astronomican, and you misspelled "[sychic".All in all nothing important, now get painting :blush: <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Thanks for the feedback. I fixed both errors and I already have a tac squad ( or most of it, at least) built and almost fully painted. Now, I have to find my dad's digi-cam.... :blush: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/76093-finished-fluff-long/#findComment-875035 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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