Gree Posted June 12, 2005 Share Posted June 12, 2005 PRALIS Lt. Commander Lucius Semterx of the Sons of the Emperor chapter gazed out of the view port of his Rhino Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/76976-new-fluff-for-my-army/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted June 12, 2005 Share Posted June 12, 2005 Most of it seems well written. Slightly confusing as you use "Grand Company" in reference to a normal Company. A grand company was used by the legions and was about the size of a normal Chapter. Your size of squads seem a little large too. Even though I'm not keen on the chapter and their background, Good Story :blink: Ferrata Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/76976-new-fluff-for-my-army/#findComment-885197 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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