Guest No-One Posted June 13, 2005 Share Posted June 13, 2005 Chapter Master Matheo stood up from his prayer, his terminator armor groaning under years of use. He was a vetean of thousands of battles, his eyes giving away his strategic mastery. His short cropped mohawk had long lost its pigment to age somewhere in his 400's. Clutching his chapter symbol, a winged fist grasping a blood drop, he looked at his command unit and nodded. Looking over the cliff where his men were fighting it out with the orkish horde. "It's time" he said in a raspy tone. As his command unit of terminators leapt over the edge, a resounding warcry was let out "For the Emperor, and our lord Sanguinius". They smashed into the ground killing orks beneath their massive weight. Master Mateo charged forward into a unit of 'ard boys whipping around his Thunder Hammer in massive blows, and slashing fiercely with his Lightning Claw, opening rivers of blood and leaving crushed faces in his wake. so thats what i gotso far C&C welcome!! ++edit on the eyes part++ Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/77099-my-very-first-fluff/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted June 14, 2005 Share Posted June 14, 2005 I like it :D, Always like to see stories here Thunder Hammer in massive blows, and slashing fiercely with his Lightning Claw What weapon is he armed with? A T-Hammer and Claw ::cuss: thats gotta be hard to use Ferrata Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/77099-my-very-first-fluff/#findComment-886930 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironloki Posted June 14, 2005 Share Posted June 14, 2005 He was a vetean of thousands of battles eyes giving away his strategic mastery This sentence doesn't run that well as it just kind of jumps in "Eyes" so I would tweak that. Not a bad little story but what is it for? Is it for your DIY chapter? like a little intro to them :D Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/77099-my-very-first-fluff/#findComment-886979 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest No-One Posted June 14, 2005 Share Posted June 14, 2005 yeah thisi for my DIY chapter he weilds a master-craft T-hammer in right hand and a master-craft L-claw in left the army is called the "Fists of Sanguinius" an their symbol is a winged fist grasping a blood drop Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/77099-my-very-first-fluff/#findComment-887169 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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