Guest No-One Posted June 19, 2005 Share Posted June 19, 2005 Master Chaplain Mateo charged forward, breaking the door open, and began running down the hall. Ork war cries could be heard from around the corner and the clack of bolter fire resounded around him. His terminator command unit ran as fast as their ancient and barogue armor would allow, as they turned the corner, they looked upon the massacre. Only one marine was alive, seven others lie dead around him. The orks were making their final charge as Mateo moved up beside the remaining marine. "Sargeant, report" Mateo said in a demanding tone. Veteran-Sargeant Carlos yelled over his bolter "They came in waves, each time we lost a brother to them, I'm the only one left from my unit". Mateo called for Brother Carlos to fall back and report to base, and then he began moving forward as he chanted the "Litanies of Hate". His brother terminators moved forward with him, crying out "for the Emperor, and our Lord Sanguinius". They charged forward and he threw his Thunder Hammer at a feral-looking ork, picking it up as he ran over its crushed corpse. Letting loose a few rounds from his twin-barreled inferno pistol into an ork skull he ran forward and began crushing orks under the weight of his crosius/hammer. His command unit followed suit, letting loose their fury with their thunder hammers. Suddenly the ground began to shake as a unit of three orkish killer kans and two ork dreadnoughts lumbered forward. "Emperor protect us" Chaplain Mateo thought......... ... :blush: well thats what i got guys :P going crazy trying to write this stuff. changed Mateo into a Master of Sanctity and switched his master-craft L-claw for a Master-craft inferno pistol, he's from my last fluff if you've read it Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/77515-fists-of-sanguinius/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted June 19, 2005 Share Posted June 19, 2005 Looks Good :devil: Carlos does get demoted within 2-lines :P Would like more to see how he gets past them dreads. Ferrata Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/77515-fists-of-sanguinius/#findComment-892146 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest No-One Posted June 19, 2005 Share Posted June 19, 2005 thanx ferrata :P well heres the rest .... Mateo charged upon the center killer kan dropkicking it, causing it to bowl over, all the while pumping another kan full of inferno rounds. Whipping his crozius/hammer into play he began smashing the kan he had kicked before. His Reclusiam command unit moved in on the dehibilated kan that had been shot earlier and made short work of it. The last kan struck Mateo in the chest with is pincer-like claws tossing him back. Grunting, he heaved forward, swinging his hammer in a 360 degree angle smashing the left side of the foul machination. His unit swarmed over it, as one of his command unit was crushed under the orkish dreadnoughts fire, opening up rivers of blood. The dread lurched forward, the ground trembling. "Form up and hold positions" Mateo said in a calming yet stern voice, "Today we fight for our fallen brothers". Emptying the rest of his clip into the dread, he charged forward smashing it with his crozius/hammer, the rest of his unit charged forward, mauling it with their hammers. Suddenly a krak missile open a hole in its chest dropping it as Mateo finished it with a round of his pistol. looking around to where the missile came from, he spoted Veteran-Sargeant Carlos and his new veteran unit, complete with smoking missile launcher .... :devil: there you go Ferrata, also had to give Vet-Sarge Carlos a fitting comeback :D Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/77515-fists-of-sanguinius/#findComment-892485 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted June 19, 2005 Share Posted June 19, 2005 I like it again :P :devil: I would prefer it if Carlos came back with a melta, as this seems to fit in with the Inferno pistol. Im still wondering how he managed to take a buzz-saw to the chest and survive. How about one of his brothers jump in his way, showing how respected he is. Ferrata Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/77515-fists-of-sanguinius/#findComment-892641 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest No-One Posted June 19, 2005 Share Posted June 19, 2005 the mans ancient he's picked up a trick or two and has learned to roll with the punches :devil: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/77515-fists-of-sanguinius/#findComment-892899 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest No-One Posted June 19, 2005 Share Posted June 19, 2005 Also Carlos will eventually become a terminator in Mateo command unit i my fluff Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/77515-fists-of-sanguinius/#findComment-892902 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted June 20, 2005 Share Posted June 20, 2005 Hint: Use edit, it makes things so much more fun :P Its not really a punch, more of a slic. Maybe say he managed to dodge the blade, but got caught by the arm and go thrown backwards Could to see Carlos moving up in the world :devil: Ferrata Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/77515-fists-of-sanguinius/#findComment-893483 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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