The Soulguards of Nepthys

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well guys after much hard thought and discussion with my little sister

Soo many great chapters have started of the same way :blush:

 

the people of Furia, their homeworld, have eyes that have evolved to be able to see even in intense light and total darkness

 

This seems a little wierd. Evolved to see in complete opposites. Most creatures I can think of can only see well in one or the other (extremes that is). Maybe say they can see well in intense light, but struggle in the dark. This could add a character to the planet (whole population scared of the dark :P ) and maybe add more to the chapter. Have pride in you colours as they prefer to be out in the open.

 

P.S. i have corrupted my sister into the hobby, even though she's only 8, funny thing is she want to start a SOB/WH army. so i went and bought the codex and she read it, amazingly she understood most of it, and she still wanted to play them, even with all the torture and martyrdom. lol. she has a sadistic side, she now wants to start a egyptian themed SOB army!!! i'm currently thinking of a name for her girls.

 

Destroying young minds..... :lol: It makes me cry sometimes to see the joy a warped mind can bring B)

 

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