relishman Posted September 8, 2005 Share Posted September 8, 2005 This my DIY Chapter, The Angels Mortalitis (Angels of Death) Chapter Name: Angels Mortalitis Gene-Seed: Ultramarines Founding: 8th Symbol: White Wing Color Scheme: Jet Black armor, green trims and parts on bolter. Homeworld: Tedorus Secundus, a fortress world near Armageddon. Combat Doctrine: The Angels Mortalitis are adept at siege warfare, and neutralizing fortified positions. Organization: Codex Chapter, but the tactics they employ to get the job done are a bit uncommon for Space Marines. Current Chapter Master: Grandmaster Altarin Tyrillis Current Arch-Chaplain: Aius Boridos Current Chief Librarian: Yuri Dorimov Captains 1st Co. - Cpt. Manduris 2nd Co.- Cpt. Tannos 3rd Co.- Cpt. Inias 4th Co.- Cpt. Ultrok 5th Co.- Cpt. Hallinos 6th Co.- Cpt. Yallik 7th Co.- Cpt. Sargis 8th Co.- Cpt. Relian 9th Co.- Cpt. Von Goss 10th Co.-Cpt. Zallion History: The Angels Mortalitis were founding during the 8th founding, and garrisoned on Tedorus Secondus, a fortress world in the Armageddon sector, for the purpose of intercepting and defending Armageddon from attacking forces. They fought in all three wars for Armageddon, but played a pivitol role in the Third War, when during the siege of Hades Hive, Captain Haephestus lead his 4th Company on a raid deep within the hive through a fuel line. The valiant marines of the Angels Mortalitis 4th Company fought through thousands of Orks until they confronted Warboss Gornuzz, an ork who was know for his ability to survive against the odds. Haephestus himself struck the ork down with his last remaining strength, and his last remaining marines carried the heroic captain from the hive, and he was interned into a dreadnaught. The Angels Mortalitis continue to guard the Armageddon Sector to this day, turning away possible foes with the Emperor in their hearts and litanies. So what'dya think? i'm going to add a short story about the raid into Hades Hive soon. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/84233-angels-of-desolation/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
WingZ Posted April 8, 2006 Share Posted April 8, 2006 i like it but i think your breaking one of the golden rules Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/84233-angels-of-desolation/#findComment-978202 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rymeer Posted April 8, 2006 Share Posted April 8, 2006 I don't think you can legally insert your chapter onto Armageddon during the three various conflicts there. Especially since all the participants are listed in the back of Codex: Armageddon. Perhaps, and instead of being ON armageddon itself, your chapter led a counter-assault on the ork worlds supplying the ork Waaagh on Armageddon during the time period of the various wars on that war-torn world. This way, to still get to associate yourself with Armageddon, but not be ON armageddon. Instead, your chapter was off leading a long-term series of major raids on ork worlds to relieve the pressure on the defenders of Armageddon itself. Also, remember, to get to armageddon, your fleet would have to fight through literally thousands of ork vessels to reach the planet. Why upset the written history of the universe, when you can add to it by the heroic counter-assault of ork held worlds suppling the Waaagh? Just a few thoughts, Rymeer Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/84233-angels-of-desolation/#findComment-978221 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Molotov Posted April 8, 2006 Share Posted April 8, 2006 It's worth pointing out that this topic is seven months old... :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/84233-angels-of-desolation/#findComment-978222 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rymeer Posted April 8, 2006 Share Posted April 8, 2006 humm... didn't notice that. WHUPS. Rymeer Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/84233-angels-of-desolation/#findComment-978224 Share on other sites More sharing options...
WingZ Posted April 8, 2006 Share Posted April 8, 2006 wow i didnt notice that.. lol Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/84233-angels-of-desolation/#findComment-978233 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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