Muras Posted May 19, 2006 Share Posted May 19, 2006 Heya, Kinda new old guy here. After about a year of not really working on it, I've begun working on my marine chapter again. Thought I'd have some of you take a look at my site, and give me some feedback as to the viability etc. of the chapter. Any thoughts would be appreciated. You can find the information at: http://thediscipleschapter.bravehost.com/ Be warned it's a free site, and has the popups etc. associated with it. Thanks! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87209-the-disciples-chapter/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted May 19, 2006 Share Posted May 19, 2006 You might be better placing the text into your post. It would make it easier for people to reply. I have got time to read it all, but one quick thing did jump out at me. You say they were meant to fight the Tau, but got rerouted to fight the 13th Black Crusade, just a point, they are on the opposite sides of the Universe, so you might consider dropping the BC reference. Ferrata Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87209-the-disciples-chapter/#findComment-1009710 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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