Sunburner Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 ++ UPDATE++ May 23/06 New Shots: Commander - Shield Side Commander - Rear Commander - Front Commander - Hammer Side That's it..bash it some more...I dunno if I should keep that Imperial Eagle on the shield, I might fiddle around with the back arms on the rear if possible, I'll see, it'll take some cutting and repainting. - Lou'e ____________________________________________________________________________________ Yep another mini, This time it's the force commander. Originally the Archaon on Foot model from a few gamesdays ago. Now he's my force commander.. no not for evil.. hehe. Check'm out. (some might remember what he did look like before) Searing Dragons Force Commander - Front Searing Dragons - Force Commander - Back Searing Dragons Force Commander - Front/Left Searing Dragons Force Commander - Front/Right ______________________________________________ Older Pics of that model: Latest Putty work before painting (u can see I primed and did a first coat, but then decided to change the armour) Old Size comparison shot What it First Looked like - notice the sword Well that's about it for the commander... hit me!.. haha. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87627-searing-dragons-force-commander-wip/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ahmato Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 I think it looks good overall, but the backpack over the cloak, just makes it look weird in my eyes <_< Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87627-searing-dragons-force-commander-wip/#findComment-1012056 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheDarkApostle Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 Just remove the Backpack and call it Termie Armour, he's so friggin Huge <_< Very nice convertion, I like it :cry: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87627-searing-dragons-force-commander-wip/#findComment-1012058 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retribution Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 Seems like the Archaon models are peoples favourites for converting! Looks very nice, like the continuation of the split theme that I saw on the Predator. Perhaps add some more detail/interest on the eagles on the backpack, seem rather bland poking out the top of the model. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87627-searing-dragons-force-commander-wip/#findComment-1012066 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sisko11 Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 i gotta give you an honest criticism here, i think youhave too much going on on the back and shoulders... you have eagle heads on the backpack, dragon scale on the shoulders, and then a wolf pelt hanging down the back. birds dogs and lizards all over that area... i think it would be a really good idea to replace the eagle heads with chaos weapon nozzles to get a dragon look, then putty over the wolf pelt with more dragon scales to keep the same feeling. overall it looks pretty cool but i just find that particular area a little all over the place. good luck! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87627-searing-dragons-force-commander-wip/#findComment-1012134 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starks333 Posted May 22, 2006 Share Posted May 22, 2006 i gotta give you an honest criticism here, i think youhave too much going on on the back and shoulders... you have eagle heads on the backpack, dragon scale on the shoulders, and then a wolf pelt hanging down the back. birds dogs and lizards all over that area... i think it would be a really good idea to replace the eagle heads with chaos weapon nozzles to get a dragon look, then putty over the wolf pelt with more dragon scales to keep the same feeling. overall it looks pretty cool but i just find that particular area a little all over the place. good luck! ***i have to agree, its a themed model that seems to have an abundance of themes...i really dont like the wolf pelt-lizard pelt? i think it needs change to look right i also dont like the backpack, the model is bigger so why wouldnt the backpack? it just looks so tiny right now, and the eagle heads do NOT in my opinion suit the model whatsoever...if they were dragon heads then MAYBE i liked the rest of your stuff, and the painting is interesting Starks Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87627-searing-dragons-force-commander-wip/#findComment-1012147 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunburner Posted May 23, 2006 Author Share Posted May 23, 2006 One thing to answer...there is NO wolf pelt on it....it's ALL dragon scale. I left the claws on cuz Dragons also have claws :lol: IF you looked at it properly...I can easily agree with the backpack part...you have to remember this is the imperium no matter what chapter the eagle head WILL show up. I'll remove the backpack and change it but some of you have to look closer before jumping the gun on comments.. make sure next time ;) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87627-searing-dragons-force-commander-wip/#findComment-1012425 Share on other sites More sharing options...
VtrAxX Posted May 23, 2006 Share Posted May 23, 2006 I hope to see this model at CDN GD Vtraxx Out Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87627-searing-dragons-force-commander-wip/#findComment-1012433 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sisko11 Posted May 23, 2006 Share Posted May 23, 2006 im not trying to antagonize you or start a flame war, but i looked again, and to me, thats fur texture on his back, not scales at all. obviously a few peeps agreed with as to the nature of the texture. as to the eagles, thats for codex chapters specifically, its kinda optionals on the marines who sit in back of the class. salamanders? space wolves? given your textured colorscheme and armor style youve already broken a bit with codex markings so i just figured dragonheads on the backpack wouldnt be much of a stretch... again, it wasnt meant to upset you or put you down, just giving an honest crit on how to improve a good model, you want to put it in a comp so im just rootin for you and trying to help. if you disagree thats ok it was only advice, taken or left as you see fit. good luck with the mini no matter what! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87627-searing-dragons-force-commander-wip/#findComment-1012659 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CRasterImage Posted May 23, 2006 Share Posted May 23, 2006 Nice self-control there Sisko. Two thumbs up. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87627-searing-dragons-force-commander-wip/#findComment-1012926 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Draxalus Posted May 23, 2006 Share Posted May 23, 2006 Actually, I whipped out my GD04 Archaon model to try and end this. There is definatley scales on Sunburner's models back, compared to the (bear?) manlte on Archaon. You need to look very close to see it. It looks to me like in one of the folds of the pelt, it is missing some scales, but that might be eye tricks. I think the way Sunburner highlights combined with the slight-fuzz camera shot makes it seem like its all fur. I can say with confidence though, it is mostly scales. Just look closer. What threw me off at first (because I thought it was an animal pelt also before closer examination), was the claws on the pelt. The arms usually slim down to where the hands/paws/claws meet on lizards. I think you should really shave the arms down a bit, at least near the wrists, and then scale over them. Might help a bit. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87627-searing-dragons-force-commander-wip/#findComment-1013062 Share on other sites More sharing options...
sisko11 Posted May 23, 2006 Share Posted May 23, 2006 now thats looking good! that paintjob looks like its coming along nicely, and those are def scales on the back now, no doubt about it. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87627-searing-dragons-force-commander-wip/#findComment-1013208 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Solid Posted May 24, 2006 Share Posted May 24, 2006 Hes looking great, but when I clicked the Sheild side link, I thought I was looking at THE THING. SISKO your post is 666 , I just noticed that. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/87627-searing-dragons-force-commander-wip/#findComment-1013352 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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