Terminatus Posted June 4, 2006 Share Posted June 4, 2006 Conscripted from the survivors of worlds that were the victim of a warp storm that caused magma overflow beneath the planets Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/88977-phoenix-legion/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Race Bannon Posted June 5, 2006 Share Posted June 5, 2006 Not bad :blush: Very "epic-like" descriptions which is a style I enjoy to read. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/88977-phoenix-legion/#findComment-1023783 Share on other sites More sharing options...
schoon Posted June 5, 2006 Share Posted June 5, 2006 So far, as chapter details go, this is a bit scant. If you haven't already, I'd suggest taking some time to read The Ultimate DIY guide. Now as to what's there: Warp storms don't typically affect tectonic activity, though it's certainly a possibility. What about that storm caused such a specific effect over such a wide area? Another idea would be to have an area of space that had been under the thumb of a chaos fleet, and the battles to retake the systems involved planetary bombardment of such magnitude that it caused crust to rupture and thus the lava flows. While it's always entertaining to create "the best of the best," often more limited personalities make for better fluff, as they really have to strive and grow to pull victories from the jaws of uncertainty. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/88977-phoenix-legion/#findComment-1023925 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terminatus Posted June 6, 2006 Author Share Posted June 6, 2006 This is the first part in a 5 part series that I am working up Part I: Attack on the Munitorum Shortly after the twenty-sixth founding, the Black Legion decided to make their presence known in the Eye of Terror once again. The soldiers of the Ruinous Powers exited the warp and decided to Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/88977-phoenix-legion/#findComment-1024286 Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoxI Posted June 9, 2006 Share Posted June 9, 2006 That's pretty cool. I especially like the concept for the librarian's sword. That'll be fun to model. Speaking of which, do you already have the chapter painted? If you do, post it in the PC&A (Painting, Converting and Artwork Forum)! I want to see! (especially if they're orange, I need inspiration) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/88977-phoenix-legion/#findComment-1027188 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tech-Priest Tjorvi Posted June 9, 2006 Share Posted June 9, 2006 I love how one of your characters is named after a Mexican beer, "Corona" :P other than that though it seems interesting in itself, should be fun to see what the final outcome is :P Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/88977-phoenix-legion/#findComment-1027305 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keyoz Devastrius Posted June 10, 2006 Share Posted June 10, 2006 Chief Librarian giving advice or asking for help is ok, but yours is giving orders to Chapter Master - he is answering Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/88977-phoenix-legion/#findComment-1027484 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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