OwlandMoonGuy Posted June 8, 2006 Share Posted June 8, 2006 Note: This isn Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
angel robertson Posted June 8, 2006 Share Posted June 8, 2006 Very cool!! Very strong character you have there! Only thing when you descridbed the lady as having a round head you made her sound like an orange on a toothpick!! Well to me anyway!! LoL! Superb though! Cheers, AR Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1026297 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venerable Jazzman Posted June 8, 2006 Share Posted June 8, 2006 Wow, you write as well as you paint.. :angry: All you need to do now is learn to cuss and we've found a new Mod.. :unsure: Thank you, that was a joy to read. Ever thought of doing a whole book? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1026391 Share on other sites More sharing options...
StratoKhan Posted June 9, 2006 Share Posted June 9, 2006 That was enjoyable. Thank you. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1027016 Share on other sites More sharing options...
OwlandMoonGuy Posted June 9, 2006 Author Share Posted June 9, 2006 More chapters to come if you're interested. -OMG Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1027089 Share on other sites More sharing options...
StratoKhan Posted June 9, 2006 Share Posted June 9, 2006 Definitely. I'll have to remember to check the BA forums more frequently. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1027229 Share on other sites More sharing options...
angel robertson Posted June 9, 2006 Share Posted June 9, 2006 Yeah more chapters spunds good!! How are you finding time to write, paint and play!!?? AR Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1027285 Share on other sites More sharing options...
OwlandMoonGuy Posted June 10, 2006 Author Share Posted June 10, 2006 Playing = 1nce per week. Painting = while the wife and I watch TV after work. Writing= Something I can do while not working at work. :P -OMG Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1027400 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Escaflowne_Z Posted June 10, 2006 Share Posted June 10, 2006 He's a geek, duh! <---- Kettle calls Pot black. :D Pretty good stuff, OMG. Eviglio is a nice character, don't kill him off too quickly! :ph34r: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1027401 Share on other sites More sharing options...
OwlandMoonGuy Posted June 13, 2006 Author Share Posted June 13, 2006 This is still pretty rough but I mentioned more chapters so here you go. There Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1029529 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blindhamster Posted June 13, 2006 Share Posted June 13, 2006 its great! keep it coming, i really should write up some things on my own kill team, maybe Corvinus will get to meet Eviglio some time :D (last stand and they can both die gloriously! :blink: ) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1029548 Share on other sites More sharing options...
angel robertson Posted June 13, 2006 Share Posted June 13, 2006 ~Why do people always need to die gloriously? Can't they find and survive gloriously??!! :blink: AR Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1029613 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blindhamster Posted June 13, 2006 Share Posted June 13, 2006 because we must follow the example of our glorious primarch! die with honour saving everyone else! as I always say.. Blood for the Bl... oh wait no I dont say that! *tries to run off* Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1029655 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commissar Molotov Posted June 13, 2006 Share Posted June 13, 2006 I'm working through this as we discussed, OMG. Check out the OL later. I'm about half-way through Chapter 1, and 2-4 will be done over the week. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1029754 Share on other sites More sharing options...
OwlandMoonGuy Posted June 13, 2006 Author Share Posted June 13, 2006 Thank you sir Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1029793 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venerable Jazzman Posted June 13, 2006 Share Posted June 13, 2006 Oooh, 4 chapters..can't wait :P I'm loving the whole massive Gothicry feel Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1029813 Share on other sites More sharing options...
OwlandMoonGuy Posted June 17, 2006 Author Share Posted June 17, 2006 The chill cold stung his face immediately when he arrived as his breath froze in a white cloud before him. The extreme nausea and disorientation was dismissed with a thought. Bright lights on his suit clicked on and joined the other beams from those set into his brothers Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1033254 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Escaflowne_Z Posted June 18, 2006 Share Posted June 18, 2006 :o Oh no! What happens to Gnaeus?! Keep it coming. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1033345 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Venerable Jazzman Posted June 19, 2006 Share Posted June 19, 2006 Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1034078 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Israfel Posted June 20, 2006 Share Posted June 20, 2006 Great Work!!! :huh: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1034997 Share on other sites More sharing options...
OwlandMoonGuy Posted June 21, 2006 Author Share Posted June 21, 2006 In the dimly lit interior of her stateroom, Har-narsica stole a quick look outside her door and then shut it quietly behind her. Standing stoutly within was a vox-servitor. It was like many others, with the addition of a metal speaker affixed in its mouth and the nearspace transmitter set through its midsection. Encased in a glass bubble, its exposed gray matter was clearly visible, swollen and riddled with wired connections. She knelt down to its eye level though its glazed look did not return her gaze. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1035978 Share on other sites More sharing options...
OwlandMoonGuy Posted June 29, 2006 Author Share Posted June 29, 2006 For those still interested Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1042274 Share on other sites More sharing options...
T14 Posted July 2, 2006 Share Posted July 2, 2006 *standing applause* Bravo... bravo, brother! :tu: a delightful read :) -t14 Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1044481 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nostramo Posted July 8, 2006 Share Posted July 8, 2006 Well done. I must say I am a bit impressed by the tale. Great characters, and very nice job capturing the tone of the setting. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1048852 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blindhamster Posted July 9, 2006 Share Posted July 9, 2006 OMG... sorry but no... you are NOT aloud to stop it there... you WILL write another 100 chapters at least.... then MAYBE we'll let you stop okay? seriously its a great read, really getting to like Eviglio, there was a definate amount of emotion in that last chapter, i really think it would be a shame to stop there... we could have our very one author just like the DA forum has Belial - The Fallen we could have OMG - Angels Sanguine go on... ya know ya want to! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/89237-some-baspace-hulk-fluff/#findComment-1049278 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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