Brother Emund

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Taking inspiration from the Confederates of the American Civil War? With such role models, one would expect the Chapter to turn renegade, even towards Chaos. Would they be created using gene-seed of the Traitor Legions, during the 13th or 21st Foundings? I would consider it an honour to have a Confederate soldier as a role model. Why would you think they would turn renegade or turn to Chaos?

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How about 'The Sons of Quantrill' with their first Chapter master... Chapter Master 'Bloody Bill' Anderson. Quantrill's Raiders were the best-known of the pro-Confederate partisan rangers ("bushwhackers") who fought in the American Civil War. Their leader was William Quantrill and they included Jesse James and his brother Frank. Your Marines could be experts in lightning raids. They could be a Scars Successor???

Sorry guys, I cannot enter either. I look forward to the results of those who do though.

Despite my misgivings, I managed it with 15mins to spare!

How many Veterans do you have in your Chapter? What makes a veteran? Do you mean that they only use Terminators in forest fighting? This confused me... but that is not difficult to do!

Lovely piece so far. What is the 'Gladius pattern'. I have no idea what this is?

I, Brother Emund, of the Emperor’s Vengeance Chapter take up your Challenges. I vow, before my brothers and sisters of the B&C to complete the First (Bronze)Challenge and The Final Challenge and submit them to the Liber before the deadline. I vow to support my fellow challengers to the best of my ability. May the Emperor himself curse me if I fail.

Emperor's teeth! This will be tough for me to do with only a few days left. 7 days, nope, I cannot do it. I will have to wait until it comes around again methinks!

First thing first.... I love your lay out and the colours. Unfortunately, for some reason I cannot see one of them because the image will not load ^_^ Was there a reason why they were formed, or a purpose? Was it to hold back the Tau? I am glad that they are taught to destroy their foes without mercy... cos they would be sort of pointless really!! ;) Not such a good idea! Why have this in your intro, it shows a lack of disapline and respect and does not show your guys in a good light. Punching a Chaos Leader... now that's more like it (an Ultra... at a stretch) Do they have to keep coming back to teach the art of blending metals, wouldn't a tribe have its own smithy? Or, are they just training the potential recruits? I like this part, it links the people to the Marines and gives them something to remember their lost sons by. Yep, that's their job!! . Wow, that's a lot of Marines doing hard manual labour and not out there cracking skulls!! B) A wee bit confusing here... these are the 2 Companies that are out 'Crusading' or offering their services to other sectors??? What happened to the 2 'Crusading' companies? Is there a reason for this, do your marines show a higher level of psykic ability than normal? I take it that this is one of your crusading Companies? Why arn't the rest of the Chapter out there assisting their brothers who are obviously in peril... confusing? Yep, again, that is one of their prime directives (excuse the pun) Heresy! Call for the Inquisition!!! How do they view the beloved Emperor? Someone can correct me on this, but I believe that during the process of making the recruits into marines, they lose most of their memories of their past lives and families, and tend to harden up their emotions. Not many (if any) ever return home to visit the relatives... so-to-speak! :no: Could it be because they are from an ice planet so their skin is likely to be fair anyway? No, no! It was all going fine until they all decided to become Roman soldiers!!! :D Very minor points for you to have a look at... but apart from that it's OK. Good luck!

The Emperor's Vengeance (loyal) Space Marine Chapter http://www.bolterandchainsword.com/index.p...p;#entry1738866 I thank you