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So far I only have a few ideas in which I jogged down in my notepad. I know that the White Scars Chapter and their successors(too a extend) has a "Belief" where their Gene-father, Jaghatai Khan, is still alive. However, we have no mention that the White Scars are searching for him in any way. What would happen if the new training cadre led a new chapter into searching for him. Going for whatever means is available. Inspired in part by Philip Sibbering and his Blood Sharks DIY and re-imaged Space Shark Chapters. Without further ado, here it is: Chapter name: Abyssal Sharks "Eaters of the Void; Eldar Slayers" Cold and mysterious are the Abyssal Sharks that their names are only whispered in fear. Their stories are twisted on every world they encounter, spoken of as stories to hush the children. Some even goes so far as to think they are renegade marines. Their deeds are legendary beyond reason but their methods are heartless beyond doubt. The Abyssal Sharks are crazy and ruthless bastards in every way. Wielding fear as their weapon, the chapter has struck terror into the hearts of many and created fables among others. Their victories are grim however undeniably affective – Crushing the Dark Eldars’ resolves at the battle of Quitus Primus, overthrowing WAAAAAGH! Gorbskinna in a few months, Stopped a rebellion in the Razen sector with the mention of their name, and many more. The people of the Imperium calls them “The Forgotten Ones” or “The Forsaken Ones”. http://i39.tinypic.com/5butle.jpg Main Idea: A Chapter that believes their gene-father is not dead but still alive and well, just wandering around in the webway. The chapter keeps to itself. Even on the battlefield, there is this eerie silent coming from them. Geneseed: White Scars; 3rd Founding; Have the Larraman's organ that is almost/completely non-functional anymore making the chapter prone to get wounds that are not healing fast enough to keep up with them. This is cause by the marines abusing the Larraman's Organ like crazy that it can't sustain their purpose. Combat Doctrine: Use of Fear and Hit and Run Tactics (changed from lightning strikes when attacking an eldar craftworld) Breaking the eldar's soulstones causing the eldar to flinch a little and becoming uneasy for them. Recruitment: Children taken from war zones or has been abducted from other worlds(mainly that of hive and death worlds) using hypnotherapy on them so they would for get their past and to making them lost their emotions. They go through a series of mental tests. Those that pass to be a space marines are placed in a squad allowing them to learn from their elder peers. Those that fail the test are still kept as human soldiers that does all the scouting and even doing infiltration and sabotage missions Organization: Fleet based each operating as a mini chapter. Human soldiers operates in cells but most of them are on board ships as maintenance officers, commanding officers, etc... At first chapter master's death, the chapter separated. Forming the Brethren Court known as the Shadow Council ruled by the high officials of the chapters(which include the human soldiers?). The Fleets are ruled by Shadow Masters(Captains) Librarians known as Shadowmares; Honor Guards known as NightMarchers; Apothecary known as Torturers Name: From first chapter master announcing, "They will be like the mighty predator of the sea of ancient Terra, prowling in the darkness. The void, our sea and home. Let our weapons be our teeth and HIS vengeance upon all the Chaos". Equipment: The chapter salvage for equipment since they do not have a world they call home Quotes: "Make them fear the shadows, my brothers. The very shadows, that protects them, shall be their own downfall."-Sergeant Kalus Balius "Their animals, commander! Savage and untamable. We must stir clear of their way lest we are eaten alive".-Imperial guard Sergeant to his higher ranking commanders "The Eldar? Their cunning and their lies. All creatures since their birth has a fear, so too does the eldars. Destroy their spirit stones and see what they would do next. They coward in fear, like all should against us".-Captain Julius Q'zeil to his troops attacking Craftworld Na'shil S: Soldier C: Commander S: "Commander, there's something not right with these space marines". C: "What do you mean, Soldier?" S: "I don't know how to explain it. They...just look so...unnatural. Like they are already dead." -A soldier explaingin the uneasiness of the Abyssal Shark Chapter

-Disclosure: This is a non-canon attempt to create the story of the Exsanguinators. A chapter of the Blood Angels having been labeled as fatally flawed", this is their story. Please understand that this is purely for creative purposes and to be taken into consideration that this is non- canon material and would be in the realm of "what if GW actually had their act together to create some kind of fluff on a chapter they list in their own codex" universe - Thanks Chapter Name:Exsanguinators Founding: 3rd Chapter World/Deployment: Arterius Fortress Monastery: Capulus Gene-seed (Predecessor): Blood Angels Known Descendants: None Thought of the day: Our blood flows with the last sacrifice of our father. We will use his blessing to make our enemies bleed. Created in the wake of the Horus Heresy the Exsanguinators were created in the third founding when the rage and thirst was not yet heard of. They were created as a vanguard force to push back advancing Dark Eldar aliens in the Segmentum Pacificus sector. Their goal was to create a offensive line for the planetary system Arterius. This planet is an industrial hive world in the shipping lane known as the life line of the sector. Arteriuss main aspect was churning out mining goods use to create the weapons, and armor of the Imperium. This sectors constant strife of living would only worsen when the black web ways would open up and the foul xenos would pour forth onto humanity to reap its harvest. Origins of the Exsanguinators Created on the morning of the M32 a chapter created from the legendary Blood Angels legion. A chapter created to strike back at the pirates, and rogues that raid the shipping lanes of the industrial moons, and planets. Recruits were pulled from the hive cities that littered the planet. The Astartes began taking from the planets penal population,and gangers to use as inducted recruits. Sanguinary Priests would give these potential marines the chalice of Sanguinius to drink from; transforming the bodies into their super human forms. While under deep slumber Sanguinary Priest would begin to surgical alter the marines adding in vital organs to assist in their warrior prowess. During the battle of Drexel it was discovered that marines of the new chapter suffered unexplained losses. Sanguinary Priests found out due to a dying marine stuck with fragment grenade the bleeding would not stop. Not able to cease the bleeding they traced this back to the Larramans organ. A vital blessing that if not properly working would surely make the marine bleed out due to the secondary heart, and Haemastamen organs working together to increase blood flow. Every attempt to re grow the flawed organ failed. Priests worked frantically to fix an issue that could not be fixed. The chapter took on the name Exsanguinators taking the flawed organ as a badge of pride. Their honor is to fight on when death is quicker should the marine not carry out his duties correctly. Marines of the Exsanguinators are also not the most accommodating ally on the battle field as they care not for human life. Their mentality is that they must kill or be killed, and only the mission is important. Marines of the chapter harbor their flaw with pride, and with a doomed attitude. Knowing full well a simple mistake could forever eradicate this fragile chapter. Imperial commanders often refuse to fight alongside this blood thirsty chapter. Often Imperial scholars talking about the chapter are words spoken of pending excommunication and other common words heard are blood taker Organization The chapter strength of the Exsanguinators is diminished from what it was in its founding days. Having marines die quicker than normal has increased their recruiting process to replenish their companies. Each company stands at half strength and battle brothers would be selected out of each company to fight in a battle. The chapters scout companies are increased due to the rapid deployment of the Exsanguinators. This over stock of recruits keeps plenty of marine in power armor available should a large war break out. Scouts transition into the larger battle companies if they survive their initial training. The Exsanguinators have three scout companies in their organization. This is needed due to the rapid deployment of scout into their main companies to replenish initiate marines. The use of so many scouts does have its advantage as the scouts are constantly being used in enemy engagements. The scout gain valuable battle knowledge in the short time they are in that company. This knowledge they carry on into the battle brother companies. Thou having a high mortality rate this process somewhat keeps the chapter active in the theater of war. Command of the Exsanguinators is lead by the High Chaplains. As the current chapter master Ivan is only let out of statis during greater times of need. Most battles are lead via the company Captains, or honored by one of the Reclusiams Chaplains. All battles are controlled from the battle counsel of the high Chaplain, the chief Librarian, and High Sanguinary priest; along with the six company Captains. When war begins, this counsel mandates what companies will attend this battle and what resources to use. Only in direst of needs, or when the counsel of their chapter master is necessary do they wake Ivan. Having Ivan awoken means the marines of the Exsanguinators are treading on the end of their existence. Without a cure to their flaw their gene-seed curse will surely consume them. Driven insane from black rage, and doomed to die a bloody death. Marines of the Exsanguinators have but one thing to look for... and that is combat. Death companies in the Exsanguinators force exceed over 100 marines inflicted with the black rage. Transported via the use of statis fields these marines are constantly being utilized for line breaker unit. Once the scout units take out the enemies squad leaders, and supply lines. Death company transports drive forward ready to unleash death upon the enemy. If the death company succeeds then they are locked in statis for the next battle. In a chapter with so few, and less and less every day, killing an inflicted brother is not necessary as they are still a resource to be used until they meet their end the only way Exsanguinators meet their end; bloody with a pile or enemy corpses around them. a. Tac Marine b. Death Co. Homeworld The battle brothers of the Exsanguinators have home base operations on the planet Arterius. Arterius is found in the Segmentum Pacificus sector of the galaxy. Having rich deposits of minerals and location make this planet prime for strife. The large hive cities serve the planets a labor force. The Exsanguinators primarily recruit subjects from the penal camps from the three major hive cities. Capulus is a large underground fortress in a valley far to the south of the planet. From here the training grounds exist in dense tunnels. Marines recruited are not permitted to see the light of day until their training is over, this process is known as the rising. Once a recruit has been trained into the scout company then are they allow seeing the light of day. Emplacement into the standard companies requires the marines to fulfill their duties and be inducted into the initiate ranks.The Exsanguinators do not interact with the population of Arterius. Only in time of dire need to they show their existence. But none so far has dared attack the hive world of Arterius, yet... Combat Doctrine Marines of the Exsanguinators utilize assault strikes just in the similar fashion of their primogenitors the Blood Angels. They employ one tactic not usually used by scions of Sanguinius and that is stealth. The Exsanguinators are notorious for guerrilla ambush fighting and the use of stealth to get into grips with their enemies. Using the darkness to conceal their movements Exsanguinators utilize in sabotage tactics to cripple their enemy. Then their assault warriors embark on blitzkrieg style warfare decimating everyone in their wake. Enemies of the Exsanguinators fear the warriors in the shadows and they are infamous for using their guile to knife an enemy in the back whilst their not looking. Having a multitude of war machines due to the gifts granted to them from their primogenitors. The Exsanguinators utilize in all types of ground assault tactics, relying on Land Raider tanks to bring forth their warriors in walls of Adamantium, and Ceremite. Columns of mechanized vehicles dredge forward once the enemy supply lines are destroyed via the use of scouts. Ready to unleash the blood seeking warriors bend on destruction or death for their chapter and Sanguinius. They wear black cloaks to aid in their stealth-like tactics only leaving their heraldry visible to their enemy. Death Companies paint their armor pure white and marked with great red satires. In the end their armor ends up looking more like their primogenitors. The Exsanguinators rely on the shadows to hunt forward to positions worthy of a surprise attack. Their heavy use of scouts helps shut down enemy supply trains, and ammo depots. Without the supply network to help the opposition the Exsanguinators quickly swoop in to execute the enemy. Chapter Master Lord Ivan Vladimir Ivan was made lord of the Exsanguinators around M32.3. He is infamous for his unorthodox approach to warfare. Ivan has been known to fight with unconstrained fury creating massive diversions whilst directing his marines to ambush and attack from unknown positions. Ivan carries with him the ideals of the chapter heavily upon his shoulders. Great wounds inflicted from past battle still pour copious amount of blood. With each battle Ivan is ushered in with chapter servitors each soaking up the bloody wounds and tending to his lesions. He still is a stern warrior capable of quick thinking tactics. He will use any means to annihilate his enemies caring not for collateral damage. Never has a leader been so brutal in his attacks, his eternal wounds dripping of blood. Went not in battle his body stands still in the shiver of his statis field. Only when the mad-counsel of Lord Ivan is required does the statis field dissipate. Requiring vast amount of blood to rejuvenate the immortal warrior, knowing well this ancient warrior counsel come at a price. But none can recount for Ivans tactical knowledge. Until Ivan is killed in combat will the counsel of captains choose another to become their chapter master. No enemy yet has been so lucky to create a wound to grievous for Ivan not to sustain. Geneseed Astartes of the Exsanguinator's were doomed from the start since the gene implants came with a defective Larramans organ. The Larraman's organ does not clot the wound site like other Astartes. The secondary heart and Haemastamen simultaneously affect the wounded marine by rushing the blood to the injury site only to not get the clotting power of the Larraman's organ to back it up. Battle field triage would only subdue the bleeding, but without proper wound care the marine would depending on severity of inflicted injury; would bleed out. The flaw is more part of who they are now, and are too stubborn to try to replace the organ all together. Apothecaries have attempted to correct this severe case of hemophilia, but all attempts have been unsuccessful. Pale in comparison even to the other scion of Sanguinius, They have all have gaunt demeanor and stern looks. Later after implantation something occurs within the failed Larramans organ creating marines with larger pronounced incisor teeth very similar to those Astartes on Fenris. Subjects become over whelmed with the hunger for blood. The red thirst takes over at any point of injury, marines will kill, and drain an enemies blood in attempt to replenish his own lost vital fluids. Black rage is constant strife within the chapter, marines fall to the curse more often because of the constant strain on their will power to sustain mental fortitude. Mortally wounded marines often succumb to the black rage at the peak of their onslaught creating a raging beast hell bend on going down in a bloody whirlwind of destruction. Marines of the Exsanguinators live out their existence in one vicious cycle of either falling to the black rage, or dying due to loss of blood. At the rate from which the marines are dying there wont be enough battle brothers to keep the chapter alive. Even with the over stock of recruits, and with the scouts coming in the issue is once the initiate companies fall there would be no one to train the aspirants into power armored roles within the chapter. Blood loss was the damned nature of the Exsanguinators each marine fully aware of his nature to die a bloody death. Marines of the Exsanguinator's know their dying out, and their chances to repair the flawed Larramens organ are coming to an end. The brutal acts of a dying brother echo in the minds of every marine. Doomed to die they would chant the rights of mortis every battle knowing full well this could be there last act as marines. Battle attrition caused the marines to seek blood more so than any other son of Sanguinius. The blood they take only quells their thirst, it stops the loss, and it damns them with a greater urge. The doomed marines often fall victim to the black rage, the mental wear cracking his mental fortitude and releasing internal monster. Battle cry LET THE BLOOD FLOW! * Special thanks goes to Midnight Runner on helping with the creation of this Index Astartes. Without his assistance I may have never succeeded. Thanks ** C&C welcome.

T hey vilify us for our methods, yet nobody questions the results. We are the chosen Scions of Sanguinius, tempered weapon of the Emperor Himself. Our enemies quake with fear even before we strike first blood. They will soon know it is a fear well founded! Let them fear the Angels’s of Death, let them fear what is left of their short future; let them pray for death. Brothers, we will answer those prayers….. Commander Isiah, Chapter Master of the Flesh Eaters Greetings Brothers, Let me introduce to my first project log in the WIP forum, my take on the infamous 3rd founding Chapter, the Flesh Eaters. Now I’ve always been a Blood Angel, ever since I was a fresh faced 14 year old when Angel’s of Death came out. After dropping out of the hobby for a good while I returned to it a couple of years ago and picked up my beloved BA during the pdf.codex. I have currently got around 1500-1700 fully painted army with other stuff built. At this point it was either carry on building/painting more BA or have a change of direction with something different and a more hard core successor while it is still possible. It’s something that was always niggling at the back of my mind during the build of my Angels, and I finally took the plunge towards the end of the year. I looked at the more common bad-ass poster boys the Flesh Tearers, the hardcore Knights of Blood who have appeared in the new codex, and the equally hardcore Flesh Eaters; the latter described in the codex as being “fatally undone by their geenseed” a theme I think I could definitely work with. “How could GW destroy one of their original Rogue Trader Chapters in one sentence?” I here you cry! Tut-tut http://bolterandchainsword.com//public/style_emoticons/#EMO_DIR#/dry.png . Also helping with the decision were a few other more practical reasons; including a uniform colour scheme that I can easily apply to my existing marines (I dislike all the different coloured heads and the rise of Assault Squads over Tacs has meant my BA look like a yellow headed successor nowadays!), anybody who knows of my work will know I like a heavy vampire theme, to the point of more so than the standard BA. I also like to cover my dudes in blood, guts for a gritty look instead of bling-bling showroom fresh shine http://bolterandchainsword.com//public/style_emoticons/#EMO_DIR#/devil.gif meaning the time has come for the change, so here I am repainting my BA army lol. Check out my Flesh Eater test marine HERE, it shouldn’t be too difficult to convert my BA to FE. I want them to look border line Loyalist/Traitor – a sort of are they or aren’t they, so expect a hard core look with lots of trophies, and I’ll be using the old RT era colour scheme with the current Chapter symbol of a monstrous fanged maw. Once I start making new models, I plan to use a lot of Corvus armour (esp for the Veterans) as this is ideal with the 3rd founding history. Anyways, enough boring stuff, pictures are much more fun, yes? All only my old stuff repackaged and re-badged so you must bare with me if you are familiar with my BA army for the time being. Enter the Flesh Eaters……. Tactical Squad Gabriel http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00910.jpg http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00917.jpg Sgt Gabriel himself:- http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00912.jpg http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00913.jpg http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00915.jpg Some of my fave Battle Brothers:- http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00920.jpg http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00919.jpg http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00911.jpg Assault Squad Orlok http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00921.jpg http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00935.jpg Sgt Orlok:- http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00926.jpg http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00927.jpg Magnetized back pack/jump pack:- http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00933.jpg And right arm:- http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00928.jpg http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00929.jpg http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00931.jpg ^Flesh Eaters have a habit of taking heads and flaying them for trophy's http://bolterandchainsword.com//public/style_emoticons/#EMO_DIR#/devil.gif ^ In fact they are all magnetized:- http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00923.jpg http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00925.jpg http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00940.jpg http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00943.jpg This guy has shaved down Berzerker legs:- http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00939.jpg http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00938.jpg Group shot awaiting pie plate:- http://i256.photobucket.com/albums/hh190/MidnightRunner81/DSC00936.jpg