LucasLAD Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 He looks great, just a little too stiff like he's a statue more than a person. *shrug* Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1659868 Share on other sites More sharing options...
40kChrista Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 i think it's a great scuplt. the only thing that nags me a little is the length of the arms. they seem too long, it would seem that the gauntlets would stop just before the elbow plating. i think that would make him more in proportion. weapons look good. cape looks good. maybe make the shoulder pads thicker and a touch wider? lol, with marines it almost seems the bigger the shoulder pads the higher the rank! don't like the head, in the Flight of the Einstein he's bare headed with a high gorget form the breastplate... but that's a nit picky and personal thing. :angry: still a great scuplt, stellar work for so much green stuff!! Grim Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1659955 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DiStudios Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 Great sculpt, I really like the smoothness of the Gs work. Looking forward to more. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1660508 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dorns Padawan Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 Honestly, i don't think the gun suits him. Love the other weapon though. Can't think off the top of my head any suggestions but it just looks like he had an elongated arm? Maybe once he is all painted up it will change my opinion? Btw, i can't believe you sculpted them arms all out og GS!!!! Kudos to you mate, must have taken time and patience in abundance!!!!! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1660531 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Fingered Villain Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 between the gun, and the armour where its at right now, I'm getting a weird vibe of gigantor mixed with astro boy. I think the gun should either resemble more of a plasma pistol, or a straight lantern. It's much to smoothe and alien looking. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1660536 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdmchaos Posted August 12, 2008 Author Share Posted August 12, 2008 http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee86/jdmchaos/1captain-garro.jpg wip captain nathaniel garro.i will be making him in his ornament armour that has the one head eagle on chest and back. this is just a rough start at him sure if i dig it so far.im starting with the well known deathguard first cause the rest will be rank and file because of the number of marines i will need.comments please. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1661567 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Nipples Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Looks good so far, the head looks barren it will need some detail. Is that scibor style armor I see? Using plates and making molds of it? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1661575 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdmchaos Posted August 12, 2008 Author Share Posted August 12, 2008 well kind of.to tell you the truth i like his ideas but im not trying to copy him.i just wanted the easy way of putting the star skull on his legs.he will be the only one with that style.i think i will switch the head you are right it is bland. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1661625 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terminatorinhell Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 i like the leg designs, how exactly do you put it on the model/shape it to fit? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1661631 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdmchaos Posted August 12, 2008 Author Share Posted August 12, 2008 use a piece of paper to size and get it how you want it make the piece than i use a tube witch is close to the size of the leg then put it on let it dry. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1661636 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pandora Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 http://www.sciborminiatures.com/en_,sculpting.php?id=571 That's Scibor's tutorial if anyone's interested, I like his style as well, but so many models with take away a little bit of the effect. Anyway, enough thread hijacking, I like the mortarion, looks quite nice but not what I picture him like in my head, but that's just personal preference and nothing to worry about. Keep it up buddy.:confused: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1661794 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DuskRaider Posted August 13, 2008 Share Posted August 13, 2008 Awesome work so far, but I agree. Garro's head doesn't look too good, but it's WIP so I'm sure it'll turn out great. Don't forget Mortarion's Deathshroud! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1661876 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdmchaos Posted August 13, 2008 Author Share Posted August 13, 2008 yeh his head is kinda hard to do for me.this is the photo im working withhttp://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee86/jdmchaos/250px-Garro.jpg the shroud and typhon will be next but ive got to get more terminator parts. :lol: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1661930 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdmchaos Posted August 13, 2008 Author Share Posted August 13, 2008 oh yeh,and just for reference this is the mortarion photo i based mine on,just changed it littlehttp://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee86/jdmchaos/mortarion.jpg Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1661933 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jigglyplums Posted August 13, 2008 Share Posted August 13, 2008 Very nice work from the concept art. Congratulations, because the step from art to GSing never works out the way I want it to for me.You are doing wonderfully. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1662383 Share on other sites More sharing options...
krystalmesh Posted August 13, 2008 Share Posted August 13, 2008 i cant wait to see the figure complete. definately an incredible piece. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1662685 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdmchaos Posted August 17, 2008 Author Share Posted August 17, 2008 http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee86/jdmchaos/wip/1wip-garro.jpg new work,80% done garro with housecarl.ive been working alot so not much time for myself ;) kaleb is all greenstuff but his head.im trying to sculpt a different head for captain garro right now. i am allso working on a rhino.i will post that soon.i allso hasve more shots of this photo. this might be the longest wip ever,lol ;) but i think i have about 5 more big name people and then rank troops. question to those who read this,do you think i should make a chaplian? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1665998 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdmchaos Posted August 17, 2008 Author Share Posted August 17, 2008 http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee86/jdmchaos/wip/11wip-garro.jpg closeup. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1666000 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Khrangar Posted August 17, 2008 Share Posted August 17, 2008 Looks great and gives me some ideas for my soon to be highly eagled marines. One question, where's the sword from? Khrangar Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1666015 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdmchaos Posted August 17, 2008 Author Share Posted August 17, 2008 it was a sculpted sword i got with some eemperor medels i bought. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1666022 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdmchaos Posted August 17, 2008 Author Share Posted August 17, 2008 http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee86/jdmchaos/wip/1wip-garro.jpg ok,what do you think of this head for garro?no ears yet i wait till it drys. http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee86/jdmchaos/wip/1h.jpg woops this is photo for last question do you like head for gsrro,has to dry before i can do ears Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1666062 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abbadons Chosen Posted August 17, 2008 Share Posted August 17, 2008 i personally think that these fantastic models would look really good with gw heads (im not trying 2 get at ur sculpting its just they use 3 up and such like and the detail is much better) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1666152 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdmchaos Posted August 18, 2008 Author Share Posted August 18, 2008 our right that head looks like poop on this photo so i found a head that will do. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1666878 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dyp100 Posted August 18, 2008 Share Posted August 18, 2008 I have to say, your sculpting is great, you have great skill! I really loved your Mort, it really kept with the HH artwork. Good job, man. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1667270 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Curcius Arcanus Posted August 19, 2008 Share Posted August 19, 2008 do you mind making a tutorial for the face? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/143055-motarion-wip/page/2/#findComment-1668276 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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