Terminatorinhell Posted September 3, 2008 Share Posted September 3, 2008 Here is ayame in her chair that she charges in, I tried to give a decent metallic look to her so you guys thell me how it turned out :) http://i183.photobucket.com/albums/x127/TerminatorOfHellsing/ayamecharging.jpg (and yes the top is uneven its part of the design) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nurglespuss Posted September 4, 2008 Share Posted September 4, 2008 Yes she looks made out of metal :> adding some flat (soft pencil sideways) shading, and them some hardlining would help distinguish her from her chair a little more :> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lord_bunny Posted September 4, 2008 Share Posted September 4, 2008 She looks a bit out of proportion, her bodys a bit too long, as are her arms, but her legs are a bit too short. The lips looks a bit weird too. Other than that she's pretty cool. I'm not a fan of the whole anime/manga style (mainly due to westernised ones, my only interest is Hellsing) but she looks alrighty. With drawing, its always just practice (thats why I hate it, I'm lazy...) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terminatorinhell Posted September 4, 2008 Author Share Posted September 4, 2008 yeah, i need to work on anatomy and shading but i like it but it will get better and better :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HJL Posted September 4, 2008 Share Posted September 4, 2008 is this 40k? maybe SoB? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terminatorinhell Posted September 4, 2008 Author Share Posted September 4, 2008 no it is a secret within my chapter , an android that has a brain and organs with a adamantium body. when she isn't charging she wears a synthskin or a robe in order to hide her true form. If the =][= found out they really wouldn't know what to do.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liltom Posted September 4, 2008 Share Posted September 4, 2008 I'm not a huge fan of the fluff idea, nor the drawing in general. That's just me. However, you seem to have alot of basics down with the art that other people don't get at all, and now you just have to improve upon that, I would think. And improving on something is always easier than "getting" something in the first place. Here's a few points I notice. -Her right hip is all odd... -She has fingers like a fat bloke. -Lips are a bit thick. -Shoulders are very odd. They should be much more a part of the body. -You need to be more certain with some lines. They need more definition. -As with alot of your models, you need to take your time alot more. Things like messy, inconsistent cables aren't a matter of skill at all, just a matter of effort and time. Hope this helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Montuhotep Posted September 4, 2008 Share Posted September 4, 2008 If the =][= found out they really wouldn't know what to do.... Oh, I'm pretty sure they would.... and the rest of your chapter would get to find out too. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrotherAtrox Posted September 4, 2008 Share Posted September 4, 2008 If the =][= found out they really wouldn't know what to do.... Oh, I'm pretty sure they would.... and the rest of your chapter would get to find out too. :P Heresy tends to have a generally universal response. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terminatorinhell Posted September 4, 2008 Author Share Posted September 4, 2008 yeah but its a long story. I may redraw her over the weekend (her fingers were actually really thin, the comp makes them fade and look big) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucifer Fellblade Posted September 5, 2008 Share Posted September 5, 2008 If you're just starting out with drawing a character, something I find useful is to find a real photograph of somebody similar to the character in a pose you like and pretty much copy it. This kinda thing really helps with anatomy, proportions and perspective, probably the three most important thing when drawing humanoids. If that's too much try practicing on drawing just a hand in lots of different positions until you can pretty much draw a hand that looks real without having the reference picture. As for the background, it's a starting point (the present state of the character), but something that would help with the drawing would be background details, where was it built? who was it built by? all the things that could have an effect on the looks and materials of the character, and again research into similar things. The body is adamantium, is it smooth? is it real hair or wiring? is the face hard metal or can it show expressions? are the workings showing? go look at other mechanoid characters in popular culture, terminator, general grevious, even predator etc. It's aaalllll about the preperation and research if you're drawing something specific, otherwise you can make things up as you go along and not have it come back and bite you when it goes against the background material. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terminatorinhell Posted September 5, 2008 Author Share Posted September 5, 2008 yeah the face is synthetic soit makes expressions as is the hair the body is adamantium and some sort of gel based padding. i have a big background on her (she was created by the chaptermaster, the head techmarine and the head apoth) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lord_bunny Posted September 5, 2008 Share Posted September 5, 2008 Oh, I'm pretty sure they would.... and the rest of your chapter would get to find out too. tongue.gif cake party? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Metal Fingered Villain Posted September 5, 2008 Share Posted September 5, 2008 You really need to spend more time on your proportions and anatomy. Really try and figure out how a body works and what goes where when someone is in a specific pose. But proportions seem to be the thing most needed. Her arms seem to stretch down to here knees, one leg is longer than the other, her torso is about twice as tall as it should be. I suggest finding some reference photos, draw from those, it helps volumes. Google PoseManiacs as well, great drawing practice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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