Cpt Ultio Posted October 5, 2008 Share Posted October 5, 2008 He's very much WIP right now, and I apologise for the picture quallity... but what do you think so far? and what could I do to improve it? http://www.gothic-valentine.net/bolter/1.jpg http://www.gothic-valentine.net/bolter/2.jpg http://www.gothic-valentine.net/bolter/3.jpg http://www.gothic-valentine.net/bolter/4.jpg http://www.gothic-valentine.net/bolter/5.jpg http://www.gothic-valentine.net/bolter/6.jpg http://www.gothic-valentine.net/bolter/7.jpg http://www.gothic-valentine.net/bolter/8.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vassakov Posted October 5, 2008 Share Posted October 5, 2008 Needs highlights/shading really - at the moment the colours are very flat. Still, looking good for an early WIP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cpt Ultio Posted October 5, 2008 Author Share Posted October 5, 2008 the cape/tabard are the only things that have highlighting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ompfris Posted October 5, 2008 Share Posted October 5, 2008 Personally I think you should whip off the storm bolter... looks like he is struggling to hold it, maybe the combi Plasma or a pistol .... or maybe even just raise the arm from the elbow, just a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cpt Ultio Posted October 5, 2008 Author Share Posted October 5, 2008 Personally I think you should whip off the storm bolter... looks like he is struggling to hold it, maybe the combi Plasma or a pistol .... or maybe even just raise the arm from the elbow, just a little why does he look like he's struggling to hold it? Also, it's semi-pinned in that position. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilnar Posted October 5, 2008 Share Posted October 5, 2008 the shoulders a little high., makes him look like its diffiult to lift, try lifting a wieght like that and see what it does to you:P drop the shoulder a little, and swing it forward Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ompfris Posted October 5, 2008 Share Posted October 5, 2008 I have the same problem with one of my marines, im not sire if its the stormbolter or just the straight arm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cpt Ultio Posted October 5, 2008 Author Share Posted October 5, 2008 the shoulder pad is inline with the other one hight wise Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Malachi Posted October 5, 2008 Share Posted October 5, 2008 One other problem with the stormbolter is that the strap is floating sideways in the air, doesn't look right, the model is kinda let down by that arm, sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cpt Ultio Posted October 5, 2008 Author Share Posted October 5, 2008 I was going to have the arm pointing straight forward, but it doesn't quite fit. http://www.gothic-valentine.net/bolter/posetwo-1.jpg http://www.gothic-valentine.net/bolter/posetwo-2.jpg http://www.gothic-valentine.net/bolter/posetwo-3.jpg http://www.gothic-valentine.net/bolter/posetwo-4.jpg That was the original pose I had him in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlexCrute Posted October 5, 2008 Share Posted October 5, 2008 I think if you lean his head forward, toward his target, he'll look great. Kinda targeting the enemy through furrowed eyebrows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cpt Ultio Posted October 5, 2008 Author Share Posted October 5, 2008 his head has already been super glued on >.< and can't really tilt his head forward more than it is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AlexCrute Posted October 5, 2008 Share Posted October 5, 2008 It's a question of your attitude to brute force. :D I don't think you'll damage the model at all, unless english superglue is WAY stronger that aussie superglue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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