antique_nova Posted April 21, 2009 Share Posted April 21, 2009 For honour, for glory and for the sake of mankind.. YOU WILL NOT FALTER.. get back here trooper .. or i will repent you myself..bellowed commissar Grunt as he fired shot after shot into the advancing horde of traitorus marines. WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.. was the reply the commissar recieved as the guardsmen on the makeshift barriors of stools and benchs poured fire into the ranks of enemy, prior to the shadows that lurked the commissars shadow. The shadow rapidly advanced infront of the chaos line as the tratiorus marines ran hungry for the blood of their enemies and hungry for revenge on mankind for their sins 10 millenia ago. The shadow continues to advance, until the commissar notices. However at first glance, it isn't the shadow that catches the commissar's attention it is the increasing pain of red that is spreading its way across his uniform. KKKUUUURRRK, the sound of a shirt torn and the sounds of bones breaking and a figure appearing from it, as the limp form of the man quickly slumps to the ground. Only for the corpse of the commissar to fall into the shadow in front of him ..forever, never hitting the ground that it was destined to, that is if it hadn't fallen into the shadow. The figure, pokes its stout like nose into the air surveying all around it, like pirate in a room of treasure... it twists its head towards the makeshift barrior, only to be met with the statues of the men who had once been their fighting for their lives. It then behinds to turn its head...slowly..and painfully, towards the direction of where the guardsmen had been facing. Only to be faced with the shadow of a thousand figures.....small figures... The figure of a squig................. A thousand squigs! just thought of this one randomly.... this style is an attempted replicated of SKIRAX's style but without the assassination well kinda :) but not on one target, but on many ^^. hope you enjoy it. ow and by the way this is a first draft it has been transfered from mind to keyboard. thanks antique_nova Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigismund Himself Posted April 22, 2009 Share Posted April 22, 2009 There really isn't enough Power Armour in this story for it to survive. I suggest changing this or the story will be taken down. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
antique_nova Posted April 22, 2009 Author Share Posted April 22, 2009 it involves chaos marines and ig and a figure and squiggs, i havent read the rules do all stories need power armour in them? if not then just take it down ill just save it on the comp. thanks antique_nova Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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