Night Runner Posted September 15, 2009 Share Posted September 15, 2009 Hey That is truly an impressive piece of work. If you really want me to constructively critisize your work I will, but I don't have to enjoy it, because I think its really cool. Well the first thing that catches my eye is that the legs are a bit too short compared with the torso, and secondly the eagle on top has a rather comic looking head despite its excellent detail, and tends to pull the admirer away from Dorn's face which should be the focal point of the figure (in my opinion). Maybe if it was sculpted a bit smaller overall it would have less intrusive in the overall presentation. I hope this helps you in your next magnus opum. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND KEEP POSTING THE PICS!!! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/176403-rogal-dorn-wip/page/2/#findComment-2113027 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Loring Posted September 23, 2009 Share Posted September 23, 2009 Congratulations, an awesome creation. I came across this thread whilst searching for some inspiration for an imperial fist alliied unit for my Black Templar Crusade. I agree with the point about the leg/torso length ratio. The eagle wing on his chainsword probably would look better the other way (as per DeSnifter's comment). The other thing is the colour of his chest plate. I only know this as I've just started reading the HH books but at the bottom of page 130 of Horus Rising it states Dorn wears a dark red and copper gold case of armour. I have only just started reading the novels and maybe this changes or something. The eagle wing on his chainsword probably would look better the other way (as per DeSnifter's comment). Anyway, you are obviously incredibly talented, congratulations on the model! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/176403-rogal-dorn-wip/page/2/#findComment-2122168 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Loring Posted September 23, 2009 Share Posted September 23, 2009 Congratulations, an awesome creation. I came across this thread whilst searching for some inspiration for an imperial fist allied unit for my Black Templar Crusade. I agree with the point about the leg/torso length ratio. The eagle wing on his chainsword probably would look better the other way (as per DeSnifter's comment). The other thing is the colour of his chest plate. I only know this as I've just started reading the HH books but at the bottom of page 130 of Horus Rising it states Dorn wears a dark red and copper gold case of armour. I have only just started reading the novels and maybe this changes or something. Anyway, you are obviously incredibly talented, congratulations on the model! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/176403-rogal-dorn-wip/page/2/#findComment-2122169 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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