Octavulg Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 Really? All you have to do is stick a line in at the end: "By the way, Octavulg is Batman. Just so you know." Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560500 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ecritter Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 Really? All you have to do is stick a line in at the end: "By the way, Octavulg is Batman. Just so you know." That's completely insane ... everyone know I am batman !!! :lol: http://www.kip3d.net/3DImagesDEF/18ManBatDEF/ManBat_03.jpg Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560502 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heru Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 But that is a picture of Manbat! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560538 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinzaren Posted November 12, 2010 Author Share Posted November 12, 2010 (edited) Really? All you have to do is stick a line in at the end: "By the way, Octavulg is Batman. Just so you know." No. :lol: Edited November 12, 2010 by Shinzaren Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560542 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octavulg Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 Alright. Maybe we could work it into dialogue. 'By the way, that good looking Marine over there? The one with the groupies? Batman." Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560551 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ecritter Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 How about the Marine just picks up a piece of damaged armor, "Holy rusted metal?" Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560553 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octavulg Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 (edited) No. There's a time and place for subtlety. Assuring people that I'm the real terror that flaps in the night isn't one of them. Edited November 12, 2010 by Octavulg Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560557 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinzaren Posted November 12, 2010 Author Share Posted November 12, 2010 Alright. Maybe we could work it into dialogue. 'By the way, that good looking Marine over there? The one with the groupies? Batman." No. :rolleyes: How about the Marine just picks up a piece of damaged armor, "Holy rusted metal?" No. :down: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560559 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octavulg Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 Alternative: make it from Batman's perspective. Then, at the end, reveal that it's me! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560561 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ecritter Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 Alright. Maybe we could work it into dialogue. 'By the way, that good looking Marine over there? The one with the groupies? Batman." No. :rolleyes: How about the Marine just picks up a piece of damaged armor, "Holy rusted metal?" No. :down: Whatever you do, don't use Batman !!! Manbat is much better for this story. ;) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560562 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinzaren Posted November 12, 2010 Author Share Posted November 12, 2010 (edited) I hate you both. EDIT: Alternative: make it from Batman's perspective. Then, at the end, reveal that it's me! No. :rolleyes: Edited November 12, 2010 by Shinzaren Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560564 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octavulg Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 (edited) Whatever you do, don't use Batman !!! Manbat is much better for this story. msn-wink.gif No. This story calls for the subtle wordplay and devilish good looks that only I (as Batman) can provide. Edited November 12, 2010 by Octavulg Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560566 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinzaren Posted November 12, 2010 Author Share Posted November 12, 2010 Whatever you do, don't use Batman !!! Manbat is much better for this story. msn-wink.gif No. This story calls for the subtle wordplay and devilish good looks that only I (as Batman) can provide. No. :rolleyes: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560567 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octavulg Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 Had you considered a subplot about a prolonged search for Batman, only for the shocking twist ending to reveal that it was me all along? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560580 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrus Manus Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 (edited) In Shinzaren's defence, Oct, he has written you in as Batman - you just haven't noticed the metaphors :rolleyes: P.S Top story btw. Edited November 12, 2010 by Ferrus Manus Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560584 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinzaren Posted November 12, 2010 Author Share Posted November 12, 2010 (edited) Had you considered a subplot about a prolonged search for Batman, only for the shocking twist ending to reveal that it was me all along? Octavulg, I am going to take you out of the piece entirely, and replace you with Sigismund Himself. Therefore there would be no need to further the Batman discussion, as you aren't in the story at all :rolleyes: Edited November 12, 2010 by Shinzaren Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560585 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octavulg Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 (edited) You can't. Sigismund is a Librarian and a Black Templar. Think of the example such a contradiction would set. EDIT: Actually, never mind! I just realized how much more surprising this will make the revelation that I'm Batman! Edited November 12, 2010 by Octavulg Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560589 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinzaren Posted November 12, 2010 Author Share Posted November 12, 2010 You can't. Sigismund is a Librarian and a Black Templar. Think of the example such a contradiction would set. That is a risk I may be forced to take, as the only alternative is declaring that you are Batman. And I promise you, I will have Horus himself come back from the dead and announce he is Batman, before I tell the Liber that you are. :rolleyes: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560592 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octavulg Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 (edited) It's OK. They already know. I just thought it would make it more obvious for new people. EDIT: I guess people will just have to work it out from the obvious subtext. All those shadows and stuff make it pretty obvious as it is. Edited November 12, 2010 by Octavulg Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560594 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinzaren Posted November 12, 2010 Author Share Posted November 12, 2010 Thank the Emperor this thread had no real purpose, or the derailing that has gone on here would just be ridiculous. Seriously Octavulg, did you eat too much sugar this morning or something? No more coffee for you... Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560599 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octavulg Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 Don't be silly. Batman doesn't eat sugar... Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560601 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinzaren Posted November 12, 2010 Author Share Posted November 12, 2010 :cry: How do I make you stop? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560602 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octavulg Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 (edited) :cry: Edited November 12, 2010 by Octavulg Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560603 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shinzaren Posted November 12, 2010 Author Share Posted November 12, 2010 (edited) :cry: Edited November 12, 2010 by Shinzaren Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560607 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hubernator Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 Young padawan, you cannot stop Octy when he gets going. He's like a runaway train that you left in full power without a driver. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214866-this-is-the-liber-astartes-part-ii/page/2/#findComment-2560609 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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