Thudo Posted January 22, 2011 Share Posted January 22, 2011 To the Community.. we're in the advanced stages of the massive Dark Angels mod for Dawn of War 1 but have recently decided to extend the builder options and throw in a Techmarine Master of the Forge so we need someone to write some lines for it so the Techmarine is appropriate to the Dark Angels chapter. *UPDATE* Its complete.. Techmarine Notes: Voiced as Metallic. Completely tonally flat. Unit_Complete1: The Lion too was a great craftsman Unit_Complete2: It has been long since I labored beneath the Rock Unit_Complete3: Speak no more of resublimated thiotimoline [pronounced "ree-sub-li-mate-ed theo-timo-lean"] Unit_Complete4: For ten thousands years, the Mechanicus have been with us Unit_Complete5: I have meditated on the factual and the recursive Unit_Complete6: It is said no Techmarine ever ascended to the Inner Circle Unit_Complete7: Sensation is a small sacrifice for understanding Unit_Complete8: You have need of the the supreme Artificer? Unit_Complete9: For the Lion I live, for the Emperor I die! Selection1: Loyalty is the strongest sanctuary Selection2: Speak to me of glories past Selection3: Victory comes to the prepared Selection4: We are the powered sword and fist Selection5: The Machine serves the Angels Selection6: I, Techmarine Selection7: Iron One-Ten-Eight-Thirteen Selection8: I hear the Lion's roar in every machine spirit. Selection9: How may I best serve the Lion? Move1: Clad in technology, fired by faith Move2: Glory to the forge of the Unforgiven Move3: Ours is a different quest Move4: The most worthy odysseys are through the fires of battle Move5: Even the greatest heroes may be rebuilt in metal Move6: Austerity of mind, indomitable of faith Move7: The distance is not substantial Move8: As the Lion wills it Move9: Will these actions secure my position in the chapter's conclave? Move10: Without hesitation, my Lord. Move11: By the sons of the Lion Attack1: Thus the baptism of the machine Attack2: We shall sing of glory after this day Attack3: The Chapter turns my hands to combat once more Attack4: Heed well the wrath of Machine and Angel Attack5: We are steel and we are doom Attack6: Purity in combat Attack7: Emperor, Lion, Mars Build1: Not all fortresses are raised by faith alone Build2: Such wonders are cast from the lore of ancients Build3: Deployed on location Build4: Output has holiness all its own Build5: May it be a foundation for greater things Build6: It is the Martian way Build7: This alchemy is reserved to the Techmarines Build8: The Omnissiah guides my hand Build9: (sarcastic tone) I see you have deemed me worthy of this menial task. Capture1: The best efforts of a Marine seldom fail Capture2: The probability is promising Capture3: Failure is blasphemy Capture4: Bind that cur for the Interrogator! Capped1: Scanning strong and clear Capped2: It functions under our control Capped3: We control the area Lay_Mines1: The misfeasor comes this way at his peril Lay_Mines2: Little servants of the Chapters Lay_Mines3: Sacrifice yourself, that the enemy will perish Load_Transport1: Carry me well Load_Transport2: I take shelter at your order Unload_Transport1: I stand ready Unload_Transport2: I am optimal, master Morale_Break1: Withdraw me, or I will die Morale_Break2: My armor is compromised Morale_Break3: I am losing power Morale_Restored1: Not one deci-second has my faith wavered Morale_Restored2: An Angel’s mistress is unending devotion Morale_Restored3: No shadow hangs over me Charge1: Wrath of the machine Charge2: Break before my sanction Charge3: Into the baptism of combat Ability1: Deus ex mechanicus Ability2: As the fire of the atom, we smite them Ability3: We call forces beyond their comprehension Ability4: Ceramite is our skin and loyalty is our soul Ability5: In the machine… immortality Repair1: This will be most painful to its spirit Repair2: It’s performance is acceptable Repair3: It’s spirit is strong Repair4: The machine roars like the lion once more. Combat1: I destroy just as I create Combat2: I am the last answer. The final alliance of metal and flesh. Combat3: I can predict your every move. Combat4: The Lion will protect! Combat5: Death to the Xenos! Combat6: Into the enemy! Under_Fire1: I have engaged the enemy Under_Fire2: The enemy are too bold Under_Fire3: I am under attack Under_Fire4: Emperor's hairy ass! Damage1: I no longer feel pain. Damage2: My death only goes to His greater glory. Damage3: I will not break so easily. Death1: I die not in vain Death2: It grows dim… Death3: For the Chapter… Death4: My death is not in vain Death5: What happened? Death6: The Lion's spirit lives on within! Death7: Did anyone get the license plate of that truck? As an example of how we script builder units here is a Blood Angels Servitor (used only as a reference) Servitor (Helot / Machine-Helot) Notes: vanilla servitor voice Unit_Complete1: I have value only by your command Unit_Complete2: Your attention commands me Unit_Complete3: Chapter Servitor operational Unit_Complete4: Helot is yours to command Unit_Complete5: Deployment transport successful Unit_Complete6: Servitor serves the Chapter forge Unit_Complete7: How show I proceed? Selection1: Your eminence? Selection2: How may I assist you? Selection3: At your discretion Selection4: Loyal servant Selection5: Confirm, signal Selection6: Lord? Selection7: Key code valid Move1: Your will Move2: As your orders command Move3: Be it your decree Move4: By your leave Move5: To your glory Move6: Confirm Move7: Datum acknowledged Attack1: As you explain, lord Attack2: Yes, lord Attack3: As you command Attack4: Weapon mode activation Attack5: Aggression protocols Attack6: Attack order given Attack7: I obey Build1: With your permission Build2: Overseeing Build3: Confirmed Build4: Vox traffic concur Build5: I bow to your will Build6: My task lies undone Build7: Permit to serve Capture1: Setting up position Capture2: As you order it Capture3: Objective is input Capped1: Task is complete Capped2: It is complete Capped3: Servitor requires new instruction Lay_Mines1: Deploying mines Lay_Mines2: Mines in Baal pattern spread Lay_Mines3: Laying Proximity mines Load_Transport1: Stowing servitor unit Load_Transport2: Helot unit to hibernation Unload_Transport1: Reactivate Unload_Transport2: Helot activated Morale_Break1: Unit damaged Morale_Break2: Helot nearing shutdown Morale_Break3: Servitor requires maintenance Morale_Restored1: Servitor online Morale_Restored2: Helot power levels within tolerance Morale_Restored3: Helot structural failure postponed Charge1: Moving forward Charge2: Disassembling Charge3: Moving Ability1: [offensive] So ordered Ability2: [offensive] At your command Ability3: [offensive] Yes, lord Ability4: [defensive] Assessing damage Ability5: [defensive] Preventing power failure Repair1: Repairing Repair2: Isolating malfunction Repair3: Restoring damage Combat1: Deconstructing Combat2: Task set Combat3: Demolition Under_Fire1: Multiple discharges detected Under_Fire2: Small-arms fire detected Under_Fire3: Medium-yield tactical detonations detected Damage1: Helot damaged Damage2: Systems offline Damage3: Cortex damaged Death1: *thunk of falling over* Death2: Power failure Death3: Unit lost Death4: Maintenance required Of course, a Techmarine would be far more expressive so we're looking for a custom Dark Angels Techmarine with lines that would suit it being stationed with the chapter. 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rusty1109 Posted January 22, 2011 Share Posted January 22, 2011 Not sure how useful one entry is, but then if everyone on here did one you'd be sorted lol. Build1: The Omnissiah guides my hand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Styphus Posted January 22, 2011 Share Posted January 22, 2011 Unit_Complete1: You have need of the the supreme Artificer? Selection1: I hear the Lion's roar in every machine spirit. Move2:Will these actions secure my position in the chapter's conclave? Build7:(sarcastic tone) I see you have deemed me worthy of this menial task. I avoided going with the first line on some, as they are rather wordy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thudo Posted January 22, 2011 Author Share Posted January 22, 2011 Thats a good start, gents.. please keep filling them all in. :cry: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pueriexdeus Posted January 22, 2011 Share Posted January 22, 2011 Capture1: Bind that cur for the Interrogator! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thudo Posted January 22, 2011 Author Share Posted January 22, 2011 Ok updating first post as we go along. Keep em coming... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thudo Posted January 27, 2011 Author Share Posted January 27, 2011 Update -- still looking for contributors to the DA Techmarine/Master of the Forge to fill in the list in the first post. As a gift I present to you our Techmarine Builder as it moves towards being a Master of the Forge. Standard Techmarine with Adapetus Power Axe and Combi Bolter http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii44/thudmeizer/Dawn%20of%20War%201/Space%20Marines/Dark%20Angels/TechmarineBuilder01.jpg Enhanced Techmarine with Thunderhammer and Stormbolter http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii44/thudmeizer/Dawn%20of%20War%201/Space%20Marines/Dark%20Angels/TechmarineBuilder02.jpg Master of the Forge with full servo-harness, plasma cutter, and flamer. http://i261.photobucket.com/albums/ii44/thudmeizer/Dawn%20of%20War%201/Space%20Marines/Dark%20Angels/Techmarine_Master_Of_The_Forge.jpg There are other options like Combi-Melta, Combi-Plasma, and Combi-Flamer but haven't decided if we are adding those. Any scripting help to fill in the first post is MOST appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Styphus Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 I haven't played the original in a while. Do characters say anything when upgraded? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thudo Posted January 27, 2011 Author Share Posted January 27, 2011 Hey Styphus.. they say the same lines as when first created so they use the exact speech as throughout. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Styphus Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 Do you have a voice actor yet? If so, could you please post up a snipped of the edited marine voice so we could hear it? The tone of the voice may inspire some quotes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thudo Posted January 27, 2011 Author Share Posted January 27, 2011 Not yet until all TM script lines are written. Don't worry: we'll have some one VERY suitable but also a good part is what we choose to add the post-processing marine vox. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thudo Posted February 1, 2011 Author Share Posted February 1, 2011 Any takers? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thudo Posted February 9, 2011 Author Share Posted February 9, 2011 No one? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand Master Neo Posted February 9, 2011 Share Posted February 9, 2011 repair 1: the machine roars like the lion once more i'll add some more once i dig out my books Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thudo Posted February 9, 2011 Author Share Posted February 9, 2011 Thanks Neo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand Master Neo Posted February 9, 2011 Share Posted February 9, 2011 no worries. love DoW and have spent years in college and uni doing computer programming and such so i know how hard it can be at times. just hope we get too see the mod some time soon there's some really good expletives in the purging of kadillus book that will warrant a gander. i'll dig it out when i get 2 minutes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thudo Posted February 9, 2011 Author Share Posted February 9, 2011 Marvelous man! Very much appreciate this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand Master Neo Posted February 9, 2011 Share Posted February 9, 2011 so long as i get a mention in the credits and i get it before it goes public :-P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thudo Posted February 9, 2011 Author Share Posted February 9, 2011 heheh you bet! ;) We'll need some serious Dark Angels testers... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand Master Neo Posted February 9, 2011 Share Posted February 9, 2011 will certainly help out where i can (in between work and personal life obviously) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thudo Posted February 9, 2011 Author Share Posted February 9, 2011 You can always PM your scripts for the DA Techmarine based on the template in the first post. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand Master Neo Posted February 9, 2011 Share Posted February 9, 2011 would probably be easier Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand Master Neo Posted February 10, 2011 Share Posted February 10, 2011 here are a few more though Unit_Complete1: You have need of the the supreme Artificer? Unit_Complete2:For the Lion I live, for the Emperor I die! Unit_Complete3: Unit_Complete4: Unit_Complete5: Unit_Complete6: Unit_Complete7: Selection1: I hear the Lion's roar in every machine spirit. Selection2: How may I best serve the Lion? Selection3: Selection4: Selection5: Selection6: Selection7: Move1:As the Lion wills it Move2: Will these actions secure my position in the chapter's conclave? Move3:Without hesitation, my Lord. Move4:By the sons of the Lion Move5: Move6: Move7: Attack1: Attack2: Attack3: Attack4: Attack5: Attack6: Attack7: Build1: The Omnissiah guides my hand Build2: Build3: Build4: Build5: Build6: Build7:(sarcastic tone) I see you have deemed me worthy of this menial task. Capture1: Bind that cur for the Interrogator! Capture2: Capture3: Capped1: Capped2: Capped3: Lay_Mines1: Lay_Mines2: Lay_Mines3: Load_Transport1: Load_Transport2: Unload_Transport1: Unload_Transport2: Morale_Break1: Morale_Break2: Morale_Break3: Morale_Restored1: Morale_Restored2: Morale_Restored3: Charge1: Charge2: Charge3: Ability1: Ability2: [voice script what unit would say when using a targeted ability to damage enemy units] Ability3: [voice script what unit would say when using a targeted ability to damage enemy units] Ability4: [voice script what unit would say when using a self-use ability to protect self or nearby fellow/allied units] Ability5: [voice script what unit would say when using a self-use ability to protect self or nearby fellow/allied units] Repair1: The machine roars like the lion once more. Repair2: Repair3: Combat1: The Lion will protect! Combat2:Death to the Xenos! Combat3:Into the enemy! Under_Fire1: Emperor's hairy ass! Under_Fire2: Under_Fire3: Damage1: Damage2: Damage3: Death1:What happened? Death2: The Lion's spirit lives on within! Death3: Death4:Did anyone get the license plate of that truck? not sure how much i can come up with. hopefully more brothers will join the cause soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thudo Posted February 11, 2011 Author Share Posted February 11, 2011 Keep going, Neo! Well done on these new submissions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thudo Posted February 14, 2011 Author Share Posted February 14, 2011 Still looking for DA Techmarine lines, gents.. check first post for whats missing! Appreciate the support! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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