Artein Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Free extract: http://www.blacklibrary.com/downloads/prod...f/1-9/20000.pdf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkchild130 Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 That starts well! I cant seem to find any more info on this on BL website tho... Darkchild Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pulse Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Loving the start of this. A D-B is the master of writing Primarch/Astartes/Space Marines (whatevz) - he captures them brilliantly. I have to say i very much like the way A D-B depicted Alpharius and Angron, not sure about Perturabo - power cables directly into his head? Hmmm, still makes a great mental image though. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frater Uriah Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Fantastic! Another excellent AD-B cliffhanger, courtesy of the Black Library! When is this coming out? I'm not having any luck finding it on BL, either. Is it from Age of Darkness? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artein Posted April 1, 2011 Author Share Posted April 1, 2011 No idea. I just hope it's not brilliantly executed April's Fool joke.... edit: nope, it's not from Age of Darkness, it'll be a limited edition novella Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verrix Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 ...that was awesome. An awesome cliff hanger. Though, doesn't Horus also know that Fulgrim is possessed by a daemon? Either way, can't wait to read the rest. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Memnoch Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Theres something about it not quite right I cant put my finger on.......wheres all the normal stuff like contact details and other info thats on every other BL extract? (Have a look at the Age of Darkness and Blood Reaver Extracts for a comparison) And wasnt aware that Istvann V happened the same time as Prospero being attacked by the Space Wolves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legio Draconis Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Hourus does Lorgar does not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verrix Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Hourus does Lorgar does not. Ah. Presumably, this upsets Lorgar... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artein Posted April 1, 2011 Author Share Posted April 1, 2011 And wasnt aware that Istvann V happened the same time as Prospero being attacked by the Space Wolves. More or less.... at the same time as Istvann III or V? In Galaxy in Flames or Fulgrim (don't remember right now) there was a bit after the battle that there was incoming message from Magnus to Horus.... or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Memnoch Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 And wasnt aware that Istvann V happened the same time as Prospero being attacked by the Space Wolves. More or less.... at the same time as Istvann III or V? In Galaxy in Flames or Fulgrim (don't remember right now) there was a bit after the battle that there was incoming message from Magnus to Horus.... or something like that. Ahh yes I remember now-thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pulse Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Aye, no doubt Horus will step in to save Lorgar crushing Fulgrim/daemon with his mace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A D-B Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Theres something about it not quite right I cant put my finger on.......wheres all the normal stuff like contact details and other info thats on every other BL extract? (Have a look at the Age of Darkness and Blood Reaver Extracts for a comparison) This was a .pdf of something I handed in a few days ago. Editorial haven't made it into a print copy yet. It's not even named. My Word.doc is called LOLELDAR.doc., in a moment of astonishing maturity. Was a bit of a surprise to see it show up so fast, actually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yogi Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Wow that is awesome.. I'll look out for LOLELDAR. Like seriously awesome. Need more data. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ragnarok Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Good stuff. Darn cliffhangers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brannick Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Tantalising tid-bits teasing tremendously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kamehameha! Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Tantalising is the word for it all right! (Nice alliteration by the way!) My favourite phrase in the whole thing: 'Curze's chuckle was a vulture's caw'. I love the NL, and the few appearances of them in TFH and this excerpt have been awesome. Great stuff! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Tharand Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 I <3 sneaky Alpharius. The first three pages are looking good ADB. It's good to see the series moving forward past the drop site now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artein Posted April 1, 2011 Author Share Posted April 1, 2011 I <3 sneaky Alpharius. You sure it was Alpharius? :ermm: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Tharand Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 I <3 sneaky Alpharius. You sure it was Alpharius? :yes: Nope! But thats why I love those Alphas. :tu: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artein Posted April 1, 2011 Author Share Posted April 1, 2011 After thinking about it.... It was Alpharius. They're all Alpharius. :yes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dinks Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 A read extract from A B-D, very nice! On a side note; I am Alpharius! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Tharand Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 After thinking about it....It was Alpharius. They're all Alpharius. :wub: And they're probably up to no good. :tu: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 13th Goat Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 No, I am Alpharius! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2000AD Posted April 1, 2011 Share Posted April 1, 2011 Theres something about it not quite right I cant put my finger on.......wheres all the normal stuff like contact details and other info thats on every other BL extract? (Have a look at the Age of Darkness and Blood Reaver Extracts for a comparison) This was a .pdf of something I handed in a few days ago. Editorial haven't made it into a print copy yet. It's not even named. My Word.doc is called LOLELDAR.doc., in a moment of astonishing maturity. Was a bit of a surprise to see it show up so fast, actually. Quite brilliant..... Kudos sir..... Kudos My favourite bits... "Alpharius, almost a head shorter than his brothers, stood scaled in crocodilian resplendence, his reptile-skin armour plating glinting in the false light of his manifestation. His salute was the sign of the Aquila, the Emperor’s own symbol, made with both hands across his breastplate." Great touch..... "Lorgar slowly, slowly reached for the ornate crozius mace on his back. As he drew the weapon in the company of his closest kin, his eyes remained locked on one of them, and all physically present felt the deepening chill of psychic frost riming along their armour. The Word Bearer’s voice left his lips in an awed, vicious whisper. ‘You. You are not Fulgrim.’" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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