Ah-a-nothepsis Posted January 4, 2012 Share Posted January 4, 2012 What a fun read!!! You guys would enjoy my Black Crusade campaign. Prometheus anyone? ;) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2958123 Share on other sites More sharing options...
b1soul Posted January 4, 2012 Author Share Posted January 4, 2012 Prometheus anyone? ;) yes please also I've heard that a third AvP movie will be made, and it's finally going to be set in space, where the franchise belongs the first and second AvP films were disappointing to say the least Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2958456 Share on other sites More sharing options...
luckymutt Posted January 13, 2012 Share Posted January 13, 2012 Great work! I agree with the selective use of source material. An experianced Predator would be a worthy fight for the Astartes. Keep up the work and I'll be sure to read. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2966052 Share on other sites More sharing options...
fivepointedstar Posted January 13, 2012 Share Posted January 13, 2012 You sir, are a genius. Taking two of my favorite sci-fi comics/ games and brought them together. I'm looking forward to new chapters, I cannot wait is there more written elsewhere? And One more question when does the book get released? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2966406 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother_Dan'l Posted January 13, 2012 Share Posted January 13, 2012 Well that was an easy choice to subscribe to this. Really great story thus far. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2966697 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pulse Posted January 14, 2012 Share Posted January 14, 2012 Can't praise this story highly enough, loved every bit of it so far! Ah predators... so awesome. :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2967123 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Calgar 2.0 Posted January 14, 2012 Share Posted January 14, 2012 I would like to say also, you didn't have to make Warkha go through a worm hole. You could have easily included Yaujta in the 40k universe if you assume that all the other fluff for predators occurs in early human space travel, WAY before 40k. In fact in the Amicus forum there's a discussion listing films that could be considered ancient human history vidlogs. What thread is this? B) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2967436 Share on other sites More sharing options...
b1soul Posted January 15, 2012 Author Share Posted January 15, 2012 Thanks a lot for the support guys, it's really appreciated I've already typed more than a chapter's worth of additional material...I might as well polish it and post it. I was thinking of completing several chapters before posting again, but that would probably take a bit too long (as I'm currently preparing for some very important exams) I'm definitely basing the predator in the story on some of the more impressive portrayals of the character. One of the predators I had in mind while writing was the predator in the game Predator Concrete Jungle. It's an old game but fellow predator fans might be interested. A few Youtube links: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2967589 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew J Posted January 16, 2012 Share Posted January 16, 2012 b1soul I am loving this. You are a very good writer. I thought I might have been a decent amateur writer but you blow me away. It seems very professional. I cant wait for the next few chapters either. Random thought: Once you finish it you could easily have it published on amazon.com on your own and sell it for a dollar or two as a digital only copy for the kindle. I was perusing on there recently and noticed quite a few unknown authors selling books on the cheap then saw a news special on how a couple people had made thousands or hundreds of thousands just by selling a bunch of copies. I am not going to say that you will do that but you might be able to make a decent bit if you link it through your signature here on B&C. Just a thought. Keep it up and good luck on the exams! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2968835 Share on other sites More sharing options...
b1soul Posted January 18, 2012 Author Share Posted January 18, 2012 b1soul I am loving this. You are a very good writer. I thought I might have been a decent amateur writer but you blow me away. It seems very professional. I cant wait for the next few chapters either. Thanks a lot! You could IM me some of your fanfiction. I'm always interested in reading the works of others. You might be a lot better than you think (most people tend to be most critical of their own work) Random thought: Once you finish it you could easily have it published on amazon.com on your own and sell it for a dollar or two as a digital only copy for the kindle. I was perusing on there recently and noticed quite a few unknown authors selling books on the cheap then saw a news special on how a couple people had made thousands or hundreds of thousands just by selling a bunch of copies. I am not going to say that you will do that but you might be able to make a decent bit if you link it through your signature here on B&C. Just a thought. I'm afraid that 20th Century Fox would end up suing me for using their IP, but I'm flattered that you think my story would actually sell :) Keep it up and good luck on the exams! Thanks! Exams and other busy stuff in life really do slow down my writing process because 1) I'm a perfectionist who agonises over all the little details and 2) I'm a slow writer to begin with. Actually right now, the biggest issue for me is to plot out the first encounter between predator and SM I've outlined several ideas, fleshed one out, and ended up rewriting half of it...I guess I just want to strike that perfect balance :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2970493 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew J Posted January 19, 2012 Share Posted January 19, 2012 b1soul I really havent written anything other than IA's in a long time... it might be time to start something up again. You know I didnt think about them suing you for IP infringement... good thought. Are you in law school? haha I guess I will have to wait for the next installment! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2971497 Share on other sites More sharing options...
b1soul Posted January 21, 2012 Author Share Posted January 21, 2012 CHAPTER VII MOVED TO ORIGINAL POST Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2973298 Share on other sites More sharing options...
luckymutt Posted January 22, 2012 Share Posted January 22, 2012 Nice ending... When do we get more. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2973643 Share on other sites More sharing options...
b1soul Posted January 22, 2012 Author Share Posted January 22, 2012 Nice ending...When do we get more. In a bit, I'm probably going to edit that last installment. I went through it again after posting, and I think it needs to be modified to flow more smoothly. Also, I think I strayed into bolter p0rn territory :lol: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2973689 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew J Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 It is good. I agree with you that the start did not flow as smoothly as you would have liked , but the combat scene flowed well. Keep it up! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2974772 Share on other sites More sharing options...
b1soul Posted January 23, 2012 Author Share Posted January 23, 2012 It is good. I agree with you that the start did not flow as smoothly as you would have liked , but the combat scene flowed well. Keep it up! I should probably switch up the paragraph order in the beginning. I'd like to streamline some of the sentence structure in the combat scene. The combat with the nob should be shortened. I think it drags a bit. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2974875 Share on other sites More sharing options...
b1soul Posted January 26, 2012 Author Share Posted January 26, 2012 UPDATE: finished much needed edits to chapter VII I think it flows much better now I hope they raise the quality of the latest installment to that of previous chapters :blush: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2977441 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew J Posted January 26, 2012 Share Posted January 26, 2012 Yeah I would agree. i think it works a lot better now. I am going to PM you something I have been working on this week. Let me know what you think! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2977681 Share on other sites More sharing options...
b1soul Posted January 26, 2012 Author Share Posted January 26, 2012 Yeah I would agree. i think it works a lot better now. I am going to PM you something I have been working on this week. Let me know what you think! I just PMed you. Yeah, every time I read something I've written, I always find something that can be improved. I just edited Chapter VII again :P Chapter VIII should be fun to write. Valerian's about to get a surprise Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2977837 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew J Posted January 26, 2012 Share Posted January 26, 2012 Thanks. Your advice was helpful. I am working on it some more today. I dont really see what you changed this time but it is reading very well now! I cant wait for Chapter VIII! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2977952 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lysimachus Posted January 31, 2012 Share Posted January 31, 2012 As usual, really nice work. Really looking forward to the next bit, will we start getting into the full on Marine v. Predator stuff? Maybe another bit from the Pred's POV, following and admiring Valerian's talents, thinking what a great hunt he'll be, etc, etc? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2981797 Share on other sites More sharing options...
b1soul Posted January 31, 2012 Author Share Posted January 31, 2012 As usual, really nice work. Really looking forward to the next bit, will we start getting into the full on Marine v. Predator stuff? Maybe another bit from the Pred's POV, following and admiring Valerian's talents, thinking what a great hunt he'll be, etc, etc? I see you're able to read minds. Indeed, my plan is to provide some predator POV followed by the first actual encounter between the two ;) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2982259 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew J Posted January 31, 2012 Share Posted January 31, 2012 He's a psyker! Alert the nearest inquistor for processing! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2982273 Share on other sites More sharing options...
b1soul Posted February 4, 2012 Author Share Posted February 4, 2012 EDIT: moved to next page Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2985039 Share on other sites More sharing options...
luckymutt Posted February 4, 2012 Share Posted February 4, 2012 ok ;) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238900-predator-yautja-meets-wh40000/page/2/#findComment-2985164 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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