Firepower Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 Neat. A bit of a fail on the perspective regarding of the arms. Never mind that you don't do any foreshortening, the background hand is somehow larger than the foreground hand (by a slim margin, but still). The flamer arm meets the torso a bit too high, too. I don't care if it's hidden by chainmail, I can still tell The fire is delicious. I like the shoulder blade design to...I mean, the blades rising from the shoulders. And of course, dynamic posing is always nice...it helps that you hid his left ankle which he would have snapped in half behind the flames Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3884858 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greyall Posted December 10, 2014 Author Share Posted December 10, 2014 You're getting too good at this...*sharpens kitchen knife* ;) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3884860 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nemisor Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 looking pretty good as usual man. I like the chainmail on the shoulder. I always like the little extras you throw in, like the legion symbol on the flamer. the one thing that that I can see that bugs me a little is the lack of detail on the inside of the cape. its a little hard to pick out from the back ground and the flames. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3884862 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firepower Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 You're getting too good at this...*sharpens kitchen knife* I am the downward mover of pegs, the kicker of pedestals and the coffee stain on blue ribbons! I am every corner you cut, coming out from behind the veils of last minute adjustments to poke you in the butt with my jagged edges! I am also a very lackluster wordsmith. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3884865 Share on other sites More sharing options...
depthcharge12 Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 Â You're getting too good at this...*sharpens kitchen knife* ;) Â Â I am the downward mover of pegs, the kicker of pedestals and the coffee stain on blue ribbons! Â I am every corner you cut, coming out from behind the veils of last minute adjustments to poke you in the butt with my jagged edges! Â I am also a very lackluster wordsmith. :lol: Bro... Â Do you even haiku? :P Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3884893 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Heinrich Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 He looks amazing Greyall! I think this accurately sums up my current feelings: Â http://hirsit.org/samuli/blogikuvat/rammstein03.jpg.gif Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3884905 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firepower Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 You're getting too good at this...*sharpens kitchen knife* I am the downward mover of pegs, the kicker of pedestals and the coffee stain on blue ribbons! I am every corner you cut, coming out from behind the veils of last minute adjustments to poke you in the butt with my jagged edges! I am also a very lackluster wordsmith. Bro... Do you even haiku? Not in threads that still have a reason to live ;) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3884915 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nomus Sardauk Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 Kurze's claws, Greyall, Hashec looks freaking insane. Your skills leave me in awestruck wonder yet again. I can't help but imagine Hashec doing this to reveal himself as he ambushes his helpless foe from the darkness. Â At first there's nothing but the suffocating dark, then suddenly, a veil of fire flares into life. But wait, no, not fire, something far far worse. These flames are sickly green, phosphex, and there, now revealed by the horrible emerald glow, is a titanic beast with burning crimson eyes, a nightmare made flesh and ceramite. Â Beneath his helm, Hashec Tor smiles. "Scream for me." Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3884918 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaosRaptor Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 Beneath his helm, Hashec Tor smiles. "Scream for me." Whoa, man. Shivers. This piece is fantastic Greyall, he just looks like everyone who stands in front of him is going to die screaming. But then, Night Lords wouldn't have it any other way I suppose Of course mad props to Brother Heinrich as well for creating such a suitable model! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3884936 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slips Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 Couldn't choose a single One-Liner so I'll just leave this here : Â Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3884939 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Nameless Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 I just realized how much that portrait looks like a space marine, Adeptus Astartes that is. Â That aside, Man, does Hashec Tor look intimidating. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3884946 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrotherCaptainArkhan Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 I think the criticism may be getting a bit overzealous there, Firepower... ;)Looks great for a traitor and very dynamic too. I'd like to see this one coloured in. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3885116 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quixus Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 Very nice night lord. Is it just me or do the flamer barrels look like multi-melta barrels. A multimelta on a relentless model would be awesome. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3885122 Share on other sites More sharing options...
KrautScientist Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 That is just crazy awesome! A perfect representation of Hashec Tor! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3885282 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firepower Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 I think the criticism may be getting a bit overzealous there, Firepower... I don't understand the meaning of this word. It sounds like some nonsensical oxymoron, like "excessive firepower" or "unnecessary force." Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3885998 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BLOODSAINT Posted December 10, 2014 Share Posted December 10, 2014 Ok. This makes me want to pick up the pen and draw a Marine again. Need...more...time...in...the....day!!! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3886140 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostMalone Posted December 11, 2014 Share Posted December 11, 2014 Looks great brother keep it up Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3886228 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greyall Posted December 11, 2014 Author Share Posted December 11, 2014 Many thanks, all. I just want to stress the main hardship of drawing this guy: Â I hadn't realized at first, but as I went into the task of drawing Hashec full of ideas on how to warp his armor and make it super-ornate, something became clearer: Heinrich, he who converted most of his special characters to no end, had managed to make a very majestic lord out of the quite simple Termie Chaos Lord kit. When I noticed it, I was already drawing the chestplate, so it took me a bit of willpower to erase it and go for simplicity. It ended up paying off, I think, the end result is close to Heinrich's vision and the greatness of its mini version (or so I hope). He definitely looks like more than a "simple" Terminator, but Heinrich's feat of combining pretty regular parts to make this beast cannot be overstated :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3886243 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Marshal Ragnrok Posted December 11, 2014 Share Posted December 11, 2014 deviantart really should have an 'auto-fav' button specifically for your deviations Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3886357 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greyall Posted December 17, 2014 Author Share Posted December 17, 2014 And now, a gift for a fellow who loves his World Eaters...plus the 16 other legions.  A while ago, I asked Jaspcat to put up a WE with shield and axe. And here he is:  http://i1279.photobucket.com/albums/y524/Taron_James_Beer/Mobile%20Uploads/2014-11-30151536_zpsd82c1652.jpg   To which I tried to do justice :)  http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2014/350/a/8/world_eaters___assault_marine_by_greyall-d8a40d8.jpg   Very fun to draw, in spite of the darn Jump Pack...  Next one...is eternal.  Hope you like him, guys. Many cheers =) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3892307 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother-Chaplain Kage Posted December 17, 2014 Share Posted December 17, 2014 Ooooh, l like the split armor on the leg you drew compared to the regular MkII on the figure. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3892325 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firepower Posted December 17, 2014 Share Posted December 17, 2014 The curve of his left pauldron is pretty severe, and may or may not allow the arm to actually hold that shield. Â But of course, the shield doesn't let you see that...what a coincidence ;) Â It may or may not make sense for his entire left leg to be hidden behind the right. Â Kinda depends. Â I'm also not entirely sure the musculature of his upper arm makes sense. Â That's a very pronounced tricep... Â Anywho, very cool design, but I feel like you could embellished the shield just a tiny bit, like you did he ax. Â Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3892339 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Nameless Posted December 17, 2014 Share Posted December 17, 2014 Interesting. I really like the helmet and he seems almost......knightly. Not something you usually see in World Eaters. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3892348 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostMalone Posted December 17, 2014 Share Posted December 17, 2014 Im gobsmacked you have no idea how much I love this! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3892371 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Marshal Ragnrok Posted December 17, 2014 Share Posted December 17, 2014 wow i like the angle alot - its just adds so much Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240161-clever-girl-wink-wink-nudge-nudge/page/102/#findComment-3892862 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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