Greyall Posted February 24, 2015 Author Share Posted February 24, 2015 Hmm...the vambrace is supposed to follow the curvatura of the arm, and reason the protective plate seems shorter was to convey an angle...but I see what you mean, Tee, thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noctus Cornix Posted February 25, 2015 Share Posted February 25, 2015 Oh Gods. Oh Gods. Oh Gods. I love this guy so much, man. Really I do. He's the very picture of how I truly imagined Nihil. I must admit that at first, I wasn't the biggest fan of the face mask because it sort of seemed unfinished, but honestly, it's really grown on me. Now I have to remember adjust Nihil's model to look more like this! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BassWave Posted February 25, 2015 Share Posted February 25, 2015 My only problem is that you drew his face on his back pack instead of on his head. Oh wait.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greyall Posted February 25, 2015 Author Share Posted February 25, 2015 How do you know his face isn't one of those on his kneepad? ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fivepointedstar Posted February 25, 2015 Share Posted February 25, 2015 The amount of detail Nihil has is incredible. I don't see an issue with the perspective of the right arm like others stated, but maybe as an added bonus pencil in some kind of warp fire / spell he's conjuring up. That way it would make it flow with the way the other arm is posed and the way the body is positioned. Other that that added nugget of an idea I think this guy really bad ass. Nice work with this one Greyall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother-Chaplain Kage Posted February 25, 2015 Share Posted February 25, 2015 Wonderfully chaotic. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firepower Posted February 25, 2015 Share Posted February 25, 2015 His right arm does seem a tad swollen around the elbow. Also, the hand seems to be awkwardly angled inward while the wrist is front-facing the viewer. My main beef is he ax. It's an interesting design, but line art doesn't agree with a shape like that. A few subtle shading hash marks would have helped I think. You went through the trouble on the interior edge of he hood after all, and rightly so. The cloth around his legs and waist strikes me as an odd place for negative space. That was already going to be mostly blank page, anyway. It adds an interesting parallel to the angle of the ax, but I think you may have actually been better off without it. Not every marine needs some sort of flowing detail like fire or cloth in the wind ;) I think my favorite detail is one that I didn't even notice for some time: the mutant eye over his shoulder. That thing is repulsively Chaos. The blending of muscle, sinew, teeth and armor across the board is well done, but that one detail, even smothered by a very concentrated area of detail (man, the things you could accomplish if you could color these), is my favorite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Castiel Posted February 25, 2015 Share Posted February 25, 2015 Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greyall Posted February 27, 2015 Author Share Posted February 27, 2015 Guys, do check out the great colouring job Shadow Engine has done on my Flesh Tearer vs Plague Champion piece :) http://th09.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2015/056/4/6/flesh_tearer_vs_plague_champion_in_color_by_shadowengine-d8jjyp3.png And here's his Deviant page http://shadowengine.deviantart.com/ I'll post the whole stuff correctly when I get to the laptop. Cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrotherCaptainArkhan Posted February 27, 2015 Share Posted February 27, 2015 Disease is gonna lose it when he sees that colouring job. Awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
disease Posted February 27, 2015 Share Posted February 27, 2015 Guys, do check out the great colouring job Shadow Engine has done on my Flesh Tearer vs Plague Champion piece http://th09.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2015/056/4/6/flesh_tearer_vs_plague_champion_in_color_by_shadowengine-d8jjyp3.png And here's his Deviant page http://shadowengine.deviantart.com/ I'll post the whole stuff correctly when I get to the laptop. Cheers I feel so special Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greyall Posted February 28, 2015 Author Share Posted February 28, 2015 Ha, I knew it! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firepower Posted February 28, 2015 Share Posted February 28, 2015 With how complex some spaces in your drawings get, have you ever thought of having a laugh and sneaking in tiny bits of hidden, cheeky stuff? I ask because at a second glance, I noticed the vial behind his athame, and for just a split second I thought he had a 12 sided die hanging from his belt. I was actually disappointed when I realized it wasn't one. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greyall Posted February 28, 2015 Author Share Posted February 28, 2015 That's a great ideia. I'll try and incorporate more in My drawing. Thanks, mate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Marshal Ragnrok Posted February 28, 2015 Share Posted February 28, 2015 so awesome dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_son_of_Dorn Posted February 28, 2015 Share Posted February 28, 2015 .................... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mcme Posted May 3, 2015 Share Posted May 3, 2015 when will we see an update???? the suspence is killing me XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greyall Posted May 5, 2015 Author Share Posted May 5, 2015 Ask and ye shall receive =) Poom, mate, come get yours: http://img11.deviantart.net/66f1/i/2015/125/0/8/horus_heresy___world_eaters_chaplain_by_greyall-d8sad5x.jpg This is poom's Skull Champion: http://i420.photobucket.com/albums/pp282/PoomW/Skullchampion104.jpg It came out wellish, I think, a little more blingish, but I absolutely wanted to preserve the balance between the rawness of the WE and his status that Poom nailed spot-on. Hope you like it, mates, now on to finish the current one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aqui Posted May 5, 2015 Share Posted May 5, 2015 Definitely captured the malevolence Poom's model has! Good to see your work again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firepower Posted May 5, 2015 Share Posted May 5, 2015 Hahahahaa! Mashed Terminator. Awesome. :lol: Some slightly confused perspective with the mace versus the character, but it's a step in the right direction. The angles of the maul's spikes are a bit more awkward. The crinkled talons are kind weird. There's no visible explanation for them in the pic, like some shallow gouges on the Champion's armor or something. The most forward skull on his pauldron, the one with the cables coming out of the aw, looks really odd. It looks flat like a decal or crest, but everything else around it is three dimensional. That's all I got. Keep up the good work :tu: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soldier of Dorn Posted May 5, 2015 Share Posted May 5, 2015 What... no right-minded champion of the Blood God would smash an enemy's skull in, But then again, the whole point of the Twelfth is that they're not in their right minds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slipknotzim Posted May 6, 2015 Share Posted May 6, 2015 this may well be the best one yet i truly enjoy this thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noctus Cornix Posted May 6, 2015 Share Posted May 6, 2015 Wow... Just wow. You've really outdone yourself on this one, Greyall. Phenomenal work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gizur Posted May 6, 2015 Share Posted May 6, 2015 Wow!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostMalone Posted May 6, 2015 Share Posted May 6, 2015 God I love it when you do anything related to the XIITH Legion I think you capture the simple brutality better than anyone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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