Algrim Whitefang Posted January 8, 2012 Share Posted January 8, 2012 [font=Trebuchet MS; background-image:url(http://www.bolterandchainsword.com/hq2.gif); background-repeat: no-repeat; background-position: 8px 2px; padding: 12px 8px 12px 8px; border: 1px solid #DDD; margin-left: 0 auto; text-align: left; color: #fff; text-indent:50px; font-size:130%; width:50%;">Excoriators: A Comprehensive History [/font] The Excoriators are a Successor Chapter created during the dark days of the Second Founding from the genestock of the Imperial Fists. This was done in recognition of these Astartes stalwart defence of the Imperial Palace during the Battle of Terra. The ancient tome of knowledge known as the Mythos Angelica Mortis lists the Excoriators as one of the 20 Chapters of Astartes founded to make up the Astartes Praeses, an ever-vigilant Space Marine task force assigned to guard the regions of the Imperium surrounding the Eye of Terror. Their duty of garrisoning the sectors bordering the Eye of Terror is never easy. The servants of the Dark Gods are ever ready to test the mettle of the Excoriators bastions, gauntlets and cordons, and with recent misfortunes the numbers of battle-brothers holding such precarious boundaries were dwindling. Chapter Symbol http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f262/SGM-Daly91/Warhammer%2040K/ExcoriatorsLivery.jpg Chapter Organisation The Excoriators are regarded as a Codex Astartes-compliant Chapter, as their organisation, order of battle and tactical operations adhering closely to the tenets laid down in that most sacred of tomes to the Adeptus Astartes. There are, however, several noteworthy and substantial deviations from the Codex's prescribed doctrine. Most notable among these deviations are the use of certain honourific ranks and titles within the Chapter, including the following: Vanguard or Honoured First (the Veteran 1st Company) Chapter Scourge (Chapter Master’s Champion) Santiarch (Senior Chaplain) Lord Apothecary (Senior Apothecary) Corpus-Captain (Captain) Chief Whip (Senior Veteran Sergeant) Veteran Squad Whip (Veteran Sergeant) Squad Whip (Sergeant)) Chapter Appearance The Excoriators' Power Armour is painted a cream colour with silver Aquila and trim. Each gouge and las-burn in their Power Armour has the dates and locations where these scars of battle were earned meticulously inscribed into the battle-plate in High Gothic script. The battle-plate of the Excoriators' is often covered in such markings. The Chapter's badge is taken from their lost Chapter standard, the Stigmartyr. This adopted emblem is a scarlet gauntleted fist shot through with lightning bolts that protrude both in front and behind the fist like wicked spikes. Chapter Appearance http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f262/SGM-Daly91/Warhammer%2040K/ExcoriatorAstartes.jpg Beliefs their fellow Successor Chapters of the Imperial Fists, the Excoriators have a morbid fascination with pain and ritual scarring. They too, possess their own unique Chapter traditions. Most notable of these are the "Rites of Castigation" and "Donning Dorn’s Mantle," the latter of which involves ritual mortification of the flesh, particularly about the neck and shoulders. The Excoriators take great pride in the scars they earn through self-mutilation, a practice eerily similar to the World Eaters Traitor Legion's practice of the "Triumph Rope," or Lucius the Eternal's early ritual scarification of his face. However, the Excoriators take this practice to a whole new level, in that they do not concern themselves with just the wounds of the flesh. Scratched in High Gothic lettering, adorning each nick, sword slash and bullet hole on their Power Armour are inscriptions. Their battle-plate is often covered in such markings, with each gouge and las-burn bearing its own notation, dates and location where these battle honours were earned in glorious combat. The ebon-coloured script stands out boldy on the Chapter’s cream-coloured Power Armor. The Exoriators are pious, zealous and uncompromising Astartes who have a deep and abiding faith in the Emperor of Mankind and their Primarch Rogal Dorn. When saluting a fellow Battle-Brother or before going into battle, an Excoriator often recites the ritual prayer Dextera Dornami, which loosely translates as the "right hand of Dorn." Then they form a fist with their right gauntlet before touching their forehead with one knuckle, then their lips and then their breastplate -- one Astartes heart, then the other. As an Imperial Fists Successor Chapter, the Excoriators are known to take part in the Feast of Blades. This tradition was established and first presided over by Rogal Dorn himself, immediately after the Battle of the Iron Cage with their mortal enemies, the Iron Warriors Traitor Legion, on the world of Sebastus IV. Dorn wanted to foster brotherhood between the various Imperial Fists Successor Chapters that resulted from dividing his Legion during the Second Founding. To maintain Chapter relations, the bonds of brotherhood were to be strengthened and tempered through routine competition. Tradition has it that the Feast is a centennial tournament where each of the participating Chapters presents ten of their finest champions. A series of individual fights are scheduled and fought, until only one clear winner remains. The Chapter that claims victory in the Feast is allowed to schedule another one before a hundred Terran years has passed, in order to further capitalise on their previous success. The Feast of Blades serves its purpose. Many pacts are created and obligations honoured amongst the Sons of Dorn – but all Astartes are bred for victory. Reigning Chapters want to build on past triumphs so that their success will echo through eternity and catch Dorn’s approving eye or ear, wherever the Primarch might be. They call the Feast to best complement their advantage – the prowess of their champions and the perceived weaknesses of their opponent Chapters. Like any Space Marine Chapter, they want to win. The recent trials the Excoriators experienced may have been a factor in the Feast’s most recent calling. On occasion a Chapter could request another take its place due to unforeseen circumstances, but a fellow Chapter’s respect is hard won. The Feast of Blades is not, however, an empty exercise. Chapter relations often bear real fruit for Imperial security. During the 816th Feast, the Fire Lords Chapter sent some of their forces to relieve the Excoriators’ beleaguered 2nd Company at Celator-Primus. Combat Doctrine The Excoriators are a fairly pragmatic Chapter of Astartes, for they seek to cause maximum attrition amongst the foe while minimising their own casualties by any means necessary. Fluidity, timing and technique are all subservient to the Excoriators' simple, primordial desire to be the last men standing in any fight. To them, survival is everything. Magnificence with a Bolter or blade is worth little to the dead. Not for them the Imperial Fists’ bombastic last stands or the Black Templars’ relentless advance and indiscriminate purges. Given that their Chapter has managed to survive and thrive in such close proximity to the Eye of Terror, this approach to warfare has seemed to work for them for the last ten millennia.Gene-Seed The Excoriators believe themselves to be pure of heart but not of blood. As former parts of the Imperial Fists Legion and now as a Chapter, they are not alone in their experience of genetic deficiency. The Space Wolves and the Blood Angels, as well as the brethren of other Foundings, carry the flaws of their blood heritage on to new generations. The Excoriators are afflicted by a genetic curse known as Dorn's Darkness. When Dorn's Darkness takes one of their number it might appear to the untrained eye as merely a wretched palsy: slackness of the jaw, a tremor of the limb, the blankness of the eye. But those who survive it report the experience as a living nightmare, a sleeping wakefulness in which they relive the bottomless woe of Dorn’s most trying time – the grievous loss of the Emperor during the Battle of Terra, at least as the ancient Astartes once knew him. This is both their Primarch's genetic blessing and a curse to his sons. It is to know the possibility – for even a second – of an Imperium without the Emperor. To feel what Dorn felt. The profound misery of a Primarch. The paralysing fear that even one as great as Dorn experienced, for himself and for humanity, over the Emperor’s broken body after the end of his battle with Horus. Whilst enthralled by the Darkness, its victims cannot speak or communicate. They cannot feed themselves or take water and seem feverishly insensible to everything happening about them.Unique Relics, Wargear and Abilities Dornsblade - The Dornsblade is an ancient and highly revered artefact of all of the Sons of Dorn. At the end of the Horus Heresy, Rogal Dorn purposely broke the blade he jad used aboard Horus' flagship the Vengeful Spirit after it had failed to protect his beloved father, the Emperor. His second sword, the weapon which is referred to as the Sword of Sebastus or the Dornsblade, emerged with the Primarch from the Iron Cage. It is one of the Sons of Dorns' most revered artefacts, a weapon carried and used by the Primarch himself. The Chapter that wins the Feast of Blades has the honour of retaining the blade and the solemn duty of presenting it at the next Feast – the contest they will host one hundred years later. The Stigmartyr - The Stigmartyr was the Exocoriators' sacred Chapter standard. Rogal Dorn himself entrusted his sons – the Excoriators' ancient predecessors – with the standard over ten thousand years ago during the Second Founding. It displayed the Second Founding’s decree and was threaded with the honours of every battle fought in the Chapter's long, bloody history. It carried the distinction of the Astartes Praeses and the Excoriators' service in garrisoning the Eye of Terror. It bore the Stigmartyr – the emblem that the Chapter adopted as its own - a scarlet gauntleted fist clenching the length of a thunderbolt-shaped scar. The standard was lost upon the world of Ignis Prime, when the Excoriators' Chapter Master Ichabod came to inspect the Excoriators' garrison there. The Alpha Legion waited in ambush and attacked the outnumbered Exocoriators. In the ensuing melee, nearly the entirety of the Honoured 1st (the Chapter's Veteran 1st Company) was destroyed, with the sole exception of Brother Tiberias, as well as the entirety of Ichabod's inner circle, with the exceptions of Santiarch Balshazar and the Chapter Scourge Zachariah Kersh. Ichabod was severely injured, leaving him envenomed by an unknown poison. About the Author Algrim Whitefang (aka Zach Wooten) has been involved with the Warhammer 40K universe since 1989. He is a long time Space Wolves and Angels of Vengeance player, but hasn't been an active player since the mid-90's, but that hasn't stop his love for acquiring as much fluff and artwork as possible. He is a very active contributor to the Warhammer 40K Wiki and is also an avid reader of all things 40K, owning practically every novel ever written, his first being Inquisitor by Ian Watson. Algrim is also fascinated with writing short-stories, creating artwork and trolling the various 40K forums. His DIY Chapters include the Sons of Odin and the Blood Seekers. Chapter Fleet This is a short list of known Excoriator vessels operating within the Imperium: Angelica Mortis (Strike Cruiser) Cerberus (Battle Barge) Scarifica (Frigate) Notable Campaigns The Defence of Certus-Minor (Unknown Date.M41) -The entirety of the Excoriators' 5th Company was lost in garrisoning the Imperial Cemetery World of Certus-Minor against the predations of the Cholercaust Blood Crusade. Certius-Minor lay directly in the path of the Keeler Comet, an ancient blood-red comet whose strange path embodied the will of the Chaos God Khorne, leading the Cholercaust across the stars in a celebration of slaughter for the Blood God. That was until the comet appeared in the skies of the tiny Cemetary World in the Praga Sub-sector. The 5th Company did request reinforcement from the rest of the Chapter but had little expectation of its arrival in time to make a difference. The 5th Company sent long-range astrotelepathic requests to the regiments of the Imperial Guard's Viper Legion at Hellionii Reticuli, the 2nd Company of the Novamarines Space Marine Chapter stationed at Belis Quora and the Angels Eradicant Chapter at Port Kreel. They even sent a message to the Vanaheim Cordon, in full knowledge of its futility, for the Imperial Fists, Exorcists and Grey Knights Astartes stationed there would not leave the line of defence for fear that the Keeler Comet and the trailing Cholercaust Crusade might resume its progress on towards Terra. The Adeptus Astartes contingents stationed at Vanaheim would never leave the sacred soil of Terra open to attack to help defend a tiny Ecclesiarchy Cemetery World. The Excoriators' Battle Barge Certius attempted to reach the Cemetary World to answer their Battle-Brothers' call and halt the progress of the Cholercaust, but they were delayed by strange Warp currents in the wake of the crimson Keeler Comet. The doomed 5th Company faced their inevitable deaths at the hands of the Forces of Chaos, and in desperation sent a last, prayerful plea to the Emperor of Mankind for assistance of any kind. For a miracle. Beyond all hope, their prayers were answered. The Blood God's butchers soon became the butchered as they were completely wiped out by the timely intervention of the mysterious Astartes revenants known only as the Legion of the Damned, though the entirety of the 5th Company was lost in the effort. 13th Black Crusade (999.M41) -The Excoriators fielded 8 companies against Abaddon the Despoiler and his Forces of Chaos during the infamous 13th Black Crusade. Known Characters Demetrius Katafalque (First Chapter Master) –A former Captain of the Imperial Fists Legion, Demetrius had once fought at Rogal Dorn’s side during the Great Crusade and the Horus Heresy that followed. During the Battle of Terra, it was Katafalque who bled with his men before the walls of the Imperial Palace, under the horrific onslaught of the Warmaster’s siege, putting his body between the enemy and his Emperor. He made them pay in blood for every treasonous step. Rogal Dorn designated Demetrius to become the first Excoriator; the first Chapter Master of a Successor Chapter of the Imperial Fists. He also took part in the post-Heresy Crusades of penitence against the Traitor Legions during the Great Scouring. Katafalque scribed the sacred tome, The Architecture of Agony, a treatise dedicated to devotional suffering. Demetrius favoured their Primarch’s practice for his brother Excoriators. On their Primarch’s foster world of Inwit, the winters were cold and the lash was hot. Such instruction was adopted across Dorn’s early empire and was favoured by the Primarch personally as a form of martial communion and as purification for the soul. Quesiah Ichabod (Former Chapter Master) –The direct predecessor of the Excoriators' current Chapter Master Zachariah Kersh, Chapter Master Ichabod was known as the greatest Excoriator to have ever lived. When Chapter Master Ichabod had come to the world of Ignis Prime to inspect the Excoriators’ mountaintop garrison of Kruger Ridge, he found a slaughterhouse rather than a Chapterhouse, and a waiting ambush in the form of heretic Alpha Legionaries. It was there, barricaded in the oratorium, that Chapter Scourge Zachariah Kersh had fallen to the Darkness, failing both his Master and his Chapter, and allowing the Alpha Legion’s victory to become complete. Ichabod was severely injured during the failed assassination attempt. Though strong, the Chapter Master’s wounds were grievous, leaving him writhing in envenomed agony. The Alpha Legion’s assassination had ultimately failed, but they had employed a virulent toxin for which the Excoriators' Chapter Apothecarion had no record, nor antidote. Zachariah Kersh (Chapter Master) –As Chapter Scourge, Zachariah Kersh (known as "the Scourge") had spent a lifetime at his Chapter Master Quesiah Ichabod’s side, fighting experienced warriors of all creeds and species, defeating the best sent at him. It had been his singular honour to slay them before they could slay his master. Until the day Kersh failed to stop the Alpha Legion’s nearly-successful assassination attempt and crippling of Ichabod, and their theft of the Stigmartyr, the ancient and revered Chapter standard of the Excoriators dating back to the days of the Second Founding. This was a devastating blow to the Excoriators' morale, and the cause of many problems for the Chapter. These tragic events marked Kersh as persona non grata in the eyes of his Battle-Brothers. To make matters worse, Kersh continually finds himself afflicted by Dorn’s Darkness – a condition in which he constantly relives Dorn’s darkest hour, when he finds the mortally wounded Emperor on the bridge of Warmaster Horus’ Battle-Barge, the Vengeful Spirit. While it is not clear whether the Darkness caused Kersh’s recent failures or was triggered by them, the implication is that this is not a unique occurrence, although far from the inevitable Black Rage or Red Thirst of the Blood Angels. As punishment ‘the Scourge’ is placed in stasis, only to find himself begrudgingly awoken by his peers as their last chance to win the famous Feast of Blades, in a desperate bid to restore some of the Chapter’s rapidly declining morale. So it is under these circumstances that, with a heavy heart, the chapter decides to risk waking the Scourge, as a desperate bid to salvage some honor, after seven of their competitors have been defeated early in the tournament, and the other two are hopelessly outclassed by their upcoming match-ups. It takes a risky intervention to the catalepsean node in order to bring Kersh out of the Darkness, and into something resembling a functional state. Shortly after, the Scourge begins to see things – a revenant in midnight black power armour that shadows him at every step – and questions the effectiveness of the procedure. Still, despite all his concerns and protests, the reluctant Kersh is pressured into fighting in the Feast by the very brothers that despise him. His performance in the tournament causes the Excoriators to win the Feast of Blades for the first time, despite a debatable move that pits him in a three-way duel with the Black Templars and Imperial Fists champions. The victorious Kersh is scheduled to return to Eschara with the prized Dornsblade to show for their triumph. However, new orders from Chapter Master Ichabod change things for Zachariah, when he is given Captaincy of the recently devastated Fifth Company which is now at half-strength and lacking a captain, after a mission to retrieve the Stigmartyr turned out to be a carefully planned Alpha Legion ambush. Kersh is now in charge of the battered remains of a company that hates him, with only Apothecary Ezrachi, who brought him back from the brink of madness, as an ally. To make matters worse, he is constantly questioning his sanity – due to the constant haunting by a revenant Astartes – as well as his suitability for a command position. His first mission as Corpus-Captain is not the revenge against the Alpha Legion that every battle-brother longs for, but a distress call from the obscure High Lords of Terrarld]] of Certus-Minor, where a pyramid of skulls has just emerged from the lake. The world held no strategic importance whatsoever. However, ancient oaths between this world and the Imperium, as well as the fact that a tomb of a very important Ecclesiarch and High Lord of Terra was located there, contributed to Chapter Master Ichabod's decision of deploying the Fifth to such an ignominious goal. Not to mention 'the Scourge' had every intention of not failing his Chapter Master again. This strange phenomenon leads Kersh to postpone revenge even further, when word reaches him that a sizeable Khornate Crusade, known as the Cholerchaust, is making its way to the grave-world trailing a blood-red comet emerging from the Eye of Terror after ten millennia. Much to the Fifth Company’s dismay, he orders a defiant last stand against the invaders, and strands his forces on the world by sending their Apothecary and their crippled Strike Cruiser the Angelica Mortis to a nearby Forge World out of the comet’s path. The weight of the Khornate assault far exceeds Kersh’s estimates, and things start looking grim, until the mysterious Legion of the Damned makes an unexpected appearance stopping the Cholercaust's Blood Crusade dead in its tracks. Kersh was the sole survivor of the slaughter on Certus-Minor. He later succeeded Ichabod as Chapter Master of the Excoriators.Tiberias (‘Honoured First’ - First Company Veteran) -The only surviving member of the Veteran First Company that was slaughtered by the Alpha Legion on the world of Ignis Prime. Santiarch Balshazar (‘Santiarch’ - Chapter Chaplain) –Chaplain Balshazar managed those battle-brothers afflicted with the Darkness; a sort of spiritual treatment that those suffering the Darkness survive, or they do not. He had the afflicted interred within a decorative stasis casket, transported from the Chapter’s Holy Reclusiam on distant Eschara. The casket was beaten from dull adamantium, the box had the dimensions of a sarcophagus and the extravagant garniture to match. Its frontispiece featured a raised depiction of the Emperor-of-All; despite the casket standing upright, it represented him as prone, maimed and broken, following his confrontation with the beast Horus. Balshazar’s solution to the affliction of the Darkness; a darkness of his own. The most solitary of confinements, where no self-respecting Excoriator need look upon his weakness and invalidity. Dardarius (Chaplain) Shadrath (Chaplain) –The senior Chaplain attached to the devastated Fifth Company. He is killed defending the Imperial Cemetary World of Certus-Minor from the Khornate host known as the Cholercaust. Melmoch (Epistolary) –Senior Librarian attached to the devastated Fifth Company. He is killed defending the Imperial Cemetary World of Certus Minor from the Khornate host known as the Cholercaust. Absalom (Lord Apothecary) –Absolom was a former Apothecary of the 2nd Company, but was instead promoted to Lord Apothecary and tasked with coordinating the search and formulation of an antidote for their envenomed Chapter Master Ichabod, whom was mortally wounded and poisoned in a failed assassination attempt by the Alpha Legion. Ezrachi (Apothecary) –A veteran battle-brother of the Chapter. The Apothecary’s right leg was a full bionic replacement and almost as old as Ezrachi himself. While robust and powerful, his bionic leg sighed with hydraulic insistence and lagged a millisecond behind its flesh-and-bone equivalent, giving the impression of a slight limp. He was responsible for the experimental procedure to shock Zachariah Kersh from his fugue state, known as the Darkness. He was later assigned to the Fifth Company as the new Apothecary of the decimated Company and survived the slaughter on Certus-Minor when Corpus-Captain Kersh ordered him to take the company's crippled vessel to a nearby Forge World, effectively stranded the Fifth Company on the doomed planet.Shiloh Gideon (‘Corpus-Captain’ - Captain) - Following the failed assassination attempt of Chapter Master Ichabod by the Alpha Legion and the loss of their sacred standard, the Stigmartyr, the Chapter's morale is at an all-time low. Corpus-Captain Gideon is ordered take their chosen champions and still compete in the centennial competition known as the 816th Feast of Blades, and is order by the Chapter Master to win the contest at any cost. Gideon ultimately makes the painful decision to release 'the Scourge' from his prison within a stasis sarcophagus to fight as the Chapter's sole remaining Champion. Against all odds, Kersh manages to win the final three-way duel against champions from the Imperial Fists and Black Templars Chapters, respectively. It is the first time the Excoriators have ever won the Feast of Blades in the Chapter's history. This greatly raises the morale of the battle-brothers within the Chapter. Thaddeus (‘Corpus-Captain’ – Captain) -Former Captain of the Fifth Company, Thaddeus along with half his company, were ambushed and killed by a devious trap set by the Alpha Legion on the world of Veiglehaven. Bartimeus (‘Corpus-Commander’) –Senior commander of the Fifth Company Strike Cruiser the Angelica Mortis. Dancred (Techmarine) –Techmarine assigned to the Fifth Company. It is assumed that he is killed defending the Imperial Cemetary World of Certus Minor from the Khornate host known as the Cholercaust. Hadrach (Techmarine) Uriah Skase (‘Chief Whip’ – Veteran Sergeant) –Skase is a veteran and senior Veteran Sergeant of the Fifth Company. He is described as being a veteran as the torn and mangled flesh of his face testifies. His visible wound sat upon his face like an ugly, snarling mask, seemingly only held together by the staples, stitches and decorative rings that run across it. Skase was a legend within the company. An assault squad whip, he had more combat experience than the rest of his squad added together. He had walked away from the most grievous injuries and heaviest fighting of the Fifth Company’s many victories and had been at the forefront of the Excoriators’ efforts to reclaim the Stigmartyr from the filth Alpha Legion at Veiglehaven. He was loved by his men, who viewed him as an indestructible force. Skase was so unrelenting on the battlefield that on the midnight plains of Menga-Dardra, a Black Legion Land Raider slammed into him with its dozer blade, ran him down and crushed him beneath its tracks, only for the mauled and buckled Skase to get back to his feet and rush back into the heart of the fighting. He had been Corpus-Captain Thaddeus’s right hand and, with Chaplain Shadrath, had held the decimated Fifth Company together in the wake of the atrocities at Vieglehaven. The surviving battle-brothers of the Fifth have been reorganised by Skase into three full squads. He had taken command of the first squad, Squad Cicatrix. Every Excoriator in the Fifth had fully expected Uriah Skase’s promotion to Corpus-Captain as a given. That was, until Chapter Master Ichabod’s intervention and the promotion of Zachariah Kersh instead. He is killed defending the Imperial Cemetary World of Certus Minor from the Khornate host known as the Cholercaust. Silas Keturah (Veteran ‘Squad Whip’ – Veteran Sergeant) –Keturah was Veteran Squad Whip of the Tenth Company Scout Squads assigned to bolster the decimated Fifth Company. Out of all the Company whips, he was the only battle-brother not under Skase’s influence. Silas Keturah allowed for no other influence upon his neophytes but his own. He clearly did not relish using his young charges to bolster the depleted numbers under recently promoted Corpus-Captain Kersh’s command of the Fifth. He is killed defending the Imperial Cemetary World of Certus Minor from the Khornate host known as the Cholercaust. Ishmael (‘Squad Whip’ – Sergeant) –One of the remaining squad leaders of the decimated Fifth Company. The second squad, Squad Castigir, is led by Skase’s own right hand, Squad Whip Ishmael, an Excoriator crafted of much the same unforgiving brutality as the Chief Whip. He is killed defending the Imperial Cemetary World of Certus Minor from the Khornate host known as the Cholercaust. Joachim (‘Squad Whip’ – Sergeant) –One of the remaining squad leaders of the decimated Fifth Company. Brother Joachim had been recently promoted to whip of the third squad, Squad Censura in the wake of the disaster on Vieglehaven. Joachim was younger and fresher of face, but his devotion to Skase and his ideals was painfully clear, assuming the form of a kind of hero worship. He is killed defending the Imperial Cemetary World of Certus Minor from the Khornate host known as the Cholercaust. Usachar (‘Squad Whip’ - Sergeant) –Squad leader and veteran battle-brother. Loses his match during the 816th Feast of Blades. Basrael (Battle-Brother) Dathan (Battle-Brother) –A young battle-brother who was fast and had a way with a blade. He was severely wounded, losing his match during the 816th Feast of Blades. Occam (Battle-Brother) –During the 816th Feast of Blades he fought well, but not well enough and was killed. Jabez (Battle-Brother) –Jabez was seriously wounded fighting an honorific duel during the 816th Feast of Blades. Non-Astartes Personnel Old Enoch –Kersh’s human seneschal, he was the caretaker of the ceremonial ‘lash’ and overseer of his master’s devotional mortification. Aside from basic servitude, Enoch and his two children were tasked, above all else, to excoriate the flash of their master and purify him of weakness so that he might achieve endorphic communion with the Primarch. Oren -Enoch’s son, is barrel-chested and possess the thick arms of a scud-wrestler. It is Oren’s solemn function to administer ‘the purge’ with all the devotion of which he was capable. His father supervised the ritual, his eyes burning in disappointment that his own son had not been honoured with tissue compatibility for a life beyond mere humanity. Bethesda -Enoch’s elfin waif of a girl who was both gaunt and grim. Bethesda was Kersh’s absterge. She was charged with the routine cleansing and dressing of the Astartes’ ceremonial wounds. Sources Codex: Eye of Terror (3rd Edition) Legion of the Dammed (Novel) by Rob Sanders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucien Eilam Posted January 8, 2012 Share Posted January 8, 2012 Erm, you might want to stick a spoiler warning at the top of that for anyone who hasn't read Legion of the Damned. I'd be pretty pissed off if I hadn't just finished it. Anyone who prefers print won't even get a chance to read it until April. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Tyler Posted January 8, 2012 Share Posted January 8, 2012 How much of that material is official and how much is homegrown? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucien Eilam Posted January 8, 2012 Share Posted January 8, 2012 It's all from the Legion of the Damned novel. If you're thinking specifically of the Second Founding bit, I don't think it's a mistake or oversight on BL's part. It's established at significant, detailed length, several times in the book. It also talks about a "multitude" of Chapters founded after the Iron Cage. I assume it's an intentional retcon to bring things into line with the Legion size established in the Horus Heresy books. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucien Eilam Posted January 8, 2012 Share Posted January 8, 2012 More spoilers below. Scout Omar probably deserves a character entry more than some of those listed. Lots of Tenth Company details from his perspective. Company Champion Micah too. Dancred (Techmarine) –Techmarine assigned to the Fifth Company. It is assumed that he is killed defending the Imperial Cemetary World of Certus Minor from the Khornate host known as the Cholercaust. Dancred dies when his section is overrun in the initial attack. His body is laid out displaying his battle wounds "as custom dictates" with the other casualties in the aftermath. Occam (Battle-Brother) –During the 816th Feast of Blades he fought well, but not well enough and was killed. I don't see any indication that Occam died. The conversation doesn't make sense if he did - it basically goes "we lost three duels; I thought Jabez was dead", "Jabez will live". If either of the other two were dead, I'm sure it would have been mentioned. Somebody almost dying isn't more remarkable than somebody actually dying, in an honour duel that doesn't normally end in death. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Race Bannon Posted January 8, 2012 Share Posted January 8, 2012 If there are spoilers then please use spoiler tags :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucien Eilam Posted January 8, 2012 Share Posted January 8, 2012 You'd have wrap the entire topic. He's got the whole plot of the book up there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Tyler Posted January 8, 2012 Share Posted January 8, 2012 I've edited the topic description to include the spoilers warning. That should (hopefully) prevent anyone from ruining their day by reading stuff they don't want to know until after they read the book. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olis Posted January 9, 2012 Share Posted January 9, 2012 One issue with the provided image in the original post - the description of the chapter's armour is cream with silver trim whereas in the picture the scheme appears to be white with silver trim. I like the details though, with the gothic inscriptions. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vash113 Posted March 19, 2012 Share Posted March 19, 2012 Normally I'm not keen on my formats being copied but it's said imitation is the finest form of flattery and this is particularly well done, nice job! :lol: ... Now I just need to read Legion of the Damned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marshal Rohr Posted March 19, 2012 Share Posted March 19, 2012 Vash, you're alive!!! As for the Exocriators: At first I didn't like them, but they are slowly growing on me. Excellent post, Rob Sanders did an amazing job building a chapter from nothing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaplain belisarius Posted March 19, 2012 Share Posted March 19, 2012 thanks for that-very interesting! I like this chapter a lot...:whistling: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hyaenidae Posted March 19, 2012 Share Posted March 19, 2012 Interesting... which founding are these fellas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother-Sergeant Bohemond Posted March 19, 2012 Share Posted March 19, 2012 2nd Founding I do believe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chaplain belisarius Posted March 20, 2012 Share Posted March 20, 2012 anyone else tempted to do an army of these guys?:D 2 questions- 1-anyone got any pics of painted excoriators? 2-is legion of the damned a good read? thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
securitas Posted February 5, 2014 Share Posted February 5, 2014 anyone else tempted to do an army of these guys?http://image.bolterandchainsword.com//public/style_emoticons/#EMO_DIR#/smile.gif 2 questions- 1-anyone got any pics of painted excoriators? 2-is legion of the damned a good read? thanks! legion is my fave space marines novel kersh is such a bad ass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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