Loyalty Until Death

[tyirshkid]

This is my first attempt at posting fanfiction here, this is actaully the first story I've really tried to write and plan on continuing, please give an honest opinion if you think it's good or bad. This is the first paragraph.

 

The opening shots of the heresy would be heard throughout the Galaxy. From the civilized worlds near Terra, to the frontier worlds being brought back into the folds of the Imperium. The cry of war and the song of blood rang true throughout space, millions of bodies danced to the tune of chaos brought forth into the realm of reality, not through daemons, but through the actions of man and actions of sons against fathers. Brother fought brother, fleets turned and fired salvos of destruction in their midst, worlds vanished in hellish warp storms, not being freed for centuries. People wept as their worlds burned, Astartes drenched themselves in blood, whether their cries were for the Emperor or the Primordial Gods they loved it mattered not, it fed the growing fire of chaos. All while darkness grew and grew, threatening to swallow the known space in terror and bloodshed unseen since the dark age of technology. Worlds shake under the boots, treads, and metal feet of Astartes, Tanks, and Titans of war. Planets turned into mires of blood, dirt, spent shell casings, and bodies. But still the siren song of chaos, spoke and whispered its honeyed words into the souls of men and women, and withdrew power from chants and prayers back to its smiling form. Ships clung to warlords as they fled, following the apocalypse around Terra, where the earth shook from explosions, where walls fell under the never ending march of armies, and the streets became the killing floor of gods of war till they ran as deep with blood as any river in the world. One such ship fled with its damned cargo, disgraced marines, sorrow filled it withdrew silently back into orbit, following the great ship their forebear led them from as it jumped to the closest place one could be to the darkness of chaos, the Eye of Terror.