The Saga of Sister Kathryn (Video Battle reports)

[Anjetto]

Hey guys, been lurking on here a while. Did some battle reports, decided to do a narrative fable following the life and exploits of Sister Kathryn. A Sister Superior for the battle sisters.

 

I'd like to do more of these so I'd appreciate the feedback.

 

Thanks

 

Episode 1) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c24EIgAWr_k]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c24EIgAWr_k

 

Episode 2) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x9c1b5cgpo8]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x9c1b5cgpo8

 

I also can't figure out how to embed these for onsite viewing. Help would be appreciated there too. Thanks.

 

Slante

[*Furyou Miko]

It's deceptively simple. You want Youtube tags.

I've edited them into your post, so if you hit the 'edit' button you'll see what I mean.

You could do with slowing down a bit during your narrative segments. You ran out of breath a few times mid-sentence, and it was a little hard to follow. It didn't happen so much while you were talking during the game 'cause you were mostly playing the game!

Also, I can't quite place your accent. It keeps swinging between Irish and American... were these recorded from a tournament?

[theodoris]

it`s nice to see an battle report, i watch them very often.

But this was just pure chaos to watch, you need to explain at the end of an turn what happened.

I realy couldn`t understand what was going on.

Show the turn, without narretive, then when you have had an turn explain what happened.

[Duke Danse Macabre]

Liking the fluff of it mate, shame you had to rush it but it was awesome to listen to. 

[Marshal Mattias]

I enjoyed these, and didnt find it hard to follow. It was nice to be able to see how it plays out without a lot of tedious recording-every-dice-roll etc. I understand why some peeps might want a more in-depth review, but I don't always have 30 mins to watch a video ;)

Keep up the good work and keep the faith :)

[Anjetto]

Thanks guys, I appreciate the feedback. I'm working on uploading episode 3 soon. 

 

@Marshall Mattias

Thanks, I like having a shorter video to watch. I know I rarely have the time for an hour long movie.

 

@Duke Danse Macabre

I'll take the narratives a bit slower, I wasn't sure how much people would like it so I didn't want it to take too long. Plus I'd like to keep these under 15 mins for easier viewing. Still, should take my time though. 

 

@Furyou Miko

Thanks, I'll check out the edit when I upload the next one.    

It's weird that I run out of breath, considering I used to be a recording artist for a while. lol. I'm from Ireland but I've lived in the states for a long time so it comes and goes. 

 

So, I figured out how to record in HD so the next video will have HD pictures and sound. I'm working on the leveling as I know the music can be a bit too loud at times. I'm also working on video stabilization as I can be a bit shaky. Thanks again for everything guys.