Demus Ragnok Posted February 23, 2017 Author Share Posted February 23, 2017 (edited) As far as Pionus a primarch is a primarch so Anath would defer to him so long as he saw no hints of treachery. Anath would treat Odyssales as a guest. Giving him the respect a fellow legionary deserves but being suspicious of him as well. Ever watching for weakness chaplains are. A child could easily fall through the cracks. Someone is most likely keeping an eye on her from a distance though. Edited February 23, 2017 by Demus Ragnok Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4664115 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted February 23, 2017 Share Posted February 23, 2017 I think Thirgen could start to befriend Odyssalas quite quickly, but I agree on Anath. Odyssalas' impulse is to basically hand her over to the Daughters of Daer'dd, touched by her spirit (and oddly melancholic with the thought of however many thousands of people came, went and ultimately died with the Scions' ships with him taking little interest in them) reasoning that if she is going to fight, she might as well learn from the best. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4664177 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted March 1, 2017 Share Posted March 1, 2017 Finally making a start on that exemplary battle, and I need the name of Niklaas' ship. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4669106 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demus Ragnok Posted March 1, 2017 Author Share Posted March 1, 2017 Treads Upon the Night Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4669109 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted March 1, 2017 Share Posted March 1, 2017 More poetic than I expected. Now, is Jehu's waveblade a sword, axe or something else? Niklaas' strategy here, because he's basically up against an army of Lootas, is essentially "hey Orks, want this shiny thing with lots of guns? Well, all you've got to do is run through this wall of bolter rounds, lance and las-fire, torpedoes..." Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4669141 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demus Ragnok Posted March 1, 2017 Author Share Posted March 1, 2017 Jehu's blade is a sword. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4669149 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted March 1, 2017 Share Posted March 1, 2017 (edited) Fandabidozi. And now:The Breaking of the BodgespireIn 952 M30, Niklaas’ aid was requested by Captain Galen of the Scions Hospitalier. Galen, at the head of a 10,000-strong detachment of Scions, had been investigating signs of an Ork Waagh! moving ahead of the Great Crusade’s advance and swiftly summoned that it would require many more Astartes to wipe it out. Moreover, they appeared to be in possession of something akin to a star fort, but far larger. Galen’s later reports likened it to the vast, derelict structure found in the Inwit system several decades earlier.Upon linking up with the Scions, Niklaas mounted a series of reconnaissance missions and raids. He swiftly identified the greeskins as an offshoot of the Deathskullz Klan, notorious even among their own kind as rapacious looters. Where these differed, it seemed, was that where Deathskullz typically stockpiled items for “lata”, these Orks worked any weapons they took into the mobile fortress, which they called the Bodgespire.The combined fleet descended upon the Orks in the Lothindren System, where the Orks had overrun an Eldar Craftworld and, with an industriousness uncommon among their species, were appropriating anything that looked as though it could be salvaged. After the initial charge, Niklaas deployed several ships around the Craftworld, keeping the Ork ships between them and the Bodgespire and banking on the Orks’ unwillingness to risk their assets and potential loot by using their long-range weaponry. This proved entirely correct, and many of the Orkish vessels were destroyed even as they rushed to engage the Imperials at close quarters. As the battle unfolded, Niklaas realised that he had actually underestimated the enemy’s compulsion. The Treads Upon the Night represented a prize beyond anything the Orks had imagined, and soon their every ship was racing to launch boarding torpedoes, gunships or even Orks with rudimentary breathing gear and jetpacks.Niklaas exploited this by ordering the ships that stood between his and the Orks to get clear. Ostensibly placing the Treads Upon the Night in the open, he directed the fleet to create a corridor of space that the Orks would have to enter in their efforts to reach the flagship. They then loosed interceptor wings and frightful quantities of las-fire and torpedoes at the oncomers. Of the estimated hundreds of thousands, perhaps two thousand successfully ran the gauntlet and managed to get aboard the flagship, only to be met by the Fire Keepers aboard, their numbers bolstered by warriors teleported aboard from other vessels.Eventually, some sort of sense prevailed among the Orks as they numbers dwindled, but by then their under-manned and overexposed fleet was ripe for the taking, and led by the XIXth Legion ships the Imperials went on the offensive, enveloping and destroying the enemy ships before beginning an artillery duel with the Bodgespire itself. The Orks had armed their fortress with a truly bewildering array of technology, later traced to six species and eight human cultures. None, however, had been conceived by a mind with Niklaas’ genius for design and destruction. The Fire Keepers’ guns gouged vast wounds in the metal skin of the Bodgespire, and the Astartes sallied forth into the breaches.No officer had any illusions as to the dangers of this offensive. Screened by Xiphon squadrons and accompanied by Fire Raptors, Thunderhawks were used to rapidly deploy squads and then companies of Fire Keepers. Alongside the veterans and Terminator squads were Cybernetica detachments and Rapier turrets, which were used to establish beachheads before the main forces arrived. Niklaas deployed personally to the largest, taking with him the two elite companies of the Legion. The lethality of the Triakonta Terminators in the melee was complimented by the talents and weapons of their brothers in the Maveshalak.While heavy support or “Devastator” marines were an integral part of every Legion, none served as prominently as those in the Xth Legion. Within a few years of taking command, a specialised elite formation had been created by the Primarch, tasked with breaking enemy defences with peerless firepower. Niklaas had carefully optimised their weaponry and training for siege warfare, and the result was a company adept both at sweeping away infantry with heavy flamers and bolters, and wrecking fortifications and armour with meltas and volkite culverins. As in the void, Ork boyz were funnelled into the path of the Triakota’s blades, and the Deff Dreads that barred their way were broken by heavy weapons fire, often before Niklaas and his guards had to land a blow.The Warboss, however, was not waiting for the Primarch to breach his sanctum. With a great deal of what passes for thought among greenskins, he reasoned that the Treads Upon the Night was plainly a better piece of loot than his own fortress. Now, with the Astartes attacking, he concluded that it was vulnerable and ripe for the taking. So he gathered his most loyal fighters and, without telling the rest, swiftly made his way along a hidden passageway to the nearest hangar. It was the kind of aggressively counter-intuitive Orkish move that had inflicted quite unamusing damage on many Imperial forces over the years, but this one was foiled when Chief Jehu, fighting alongside Galen, detected a lessening of the Orkish defence.Swiftly, the two pursued the Warboss to the hangar, and there Jehu duelled and slew the loathsome creature, putting out its eyes and throttling it when his sword snapped in the beast’s chest. For this he was honoured both by his Primarch and by Galen, who deemed it one of the finest feats of arms he had ever seen and ordered the forging of a waveblade on Iona, to replace Jehu’s broken weapon. Edited August 25, 2017 by bluntblade Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4669150 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demus Ragnok Posted March 1, 2017 Author Share Posted March 1, 2017 One little detail the triakonta are armed with pole axes, save for one who has great sword. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4669160 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted March 1, 2017 Share Posted March 1, 2017 Damn, I thought they had hammers when I did Martian Soil. Oh well. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4669215 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted March 1, 2017 Share Posted March 1, 2017 Fixed Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4669875 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigismund229 Posted March 10, 2017 Share Posted March 10, 2017 How many Fire Keepers would show up to take part in the Martian Civil War during the opening years of the Insurrection? In the current Section I'm writing for Book 2 I've written that in the region of 68,000 show up at Terra led by Niklaas. Would this fit? Incidentaly, just had an idea for a piece of art of Niklaas. Standing holding his hammer at waist height with his legs braced looking down at you, with sparks blowing in front of him like they do in front of Mortarion in Conquest ~Drakzilla~ 1 Back to top Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4679985 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demus Ragnok Posted March 10, 2017 Author Share Posted March 10, 2017 68000 can work. Love the art idea. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4680032 Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Drakzilla~ Posted March 10, 2017 Share Posted March 10, 2017 Yeah, I think it's about time I got cracking on Niklaas, and that sounds like a good a way to tackle him. simison 1 Back to top Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4680049 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted March 18, 2017 Share Posted March 18, 2017 Given the Legio Tonarum's frequent emphasis on fast movement, maybe their secutarii units should include dunestrider units Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4688276 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demus Ragnok Posted March 18, 2017 Author Share Posted March 18, 2017 After a bit of research I discovered that, at least from a rules perspective, secutarrii are an elite unit within the skitarrii. So it seems perfecticly logical that Dunestriders and secutarrii would fight side by side. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4688292 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted March 19, 2017 Share Posted March 19, 2017 A need to contrast the Void Eagles with their cousins led me to thinking about what Niklaas might do for a fortress-monastery. So I'm tentatively dubbing it the Ebensagab, and I suggest it be carved from three mountains. It's not the Aett, and therefore the most fortified levels would be deep down at the roots of the mountains, although Niklaas might keep a chamber at one peak. Thoughts? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4689440 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demus Ragnok Posted March 21, 2017 Author Share Posted March 21, 2017 A need to contrast the Void Eagles with their cousins led me to thinking about what Niklaas might do for a fortress-monastery. So I'm tentatively dubbing it the Ebensagab, and I suggest it be carved from three mountains. It's not the Aett, and therefore the most fortified levels would be deep down at the roots of the mountains, although Niklaas might keep a chamber at one peak. Thoughts? What's the etemology of that name ? I like it. Just curious. Doctor Perils 1 Back to top Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4690673 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demus Ragnok Posted March 21, 2017 Author Share Posted March 21, 2017 Also anyone have any ideas as to what the Ember Host ( traitor Fire Keepers) get up to? I had this idea of them starting out with noble ideas but end up a bit to "by any means necessary" and get bitten by chaos. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4690679 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted March 21, 2017 Share Posted March 21, 2017 Stone and stronghold. Hopefully I'll more imaginative name for it soon. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4691478 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted March 21, 2017 Share Posted March 21, 2017 Burning entire populations alive to satisfy some unknown aspect of chaos. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4691491 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted March 21, 2017 Share Posted March 21, 2017 Would Icarion try and bolster their numbers as well? With the unhappy cooperation of Jade, as masses of the Fire Keepers' gene-seed will be there for the taking after the ambush Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4691493 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demus Ragnok Posted March 24, 2017 Author Share Posted March 24, 2017 The vision I had of the ambush has jade making a tactical retreat with a scorched earth action, so there won't be much of anything left. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4694226 Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted March 24, 2017 Share Posted March 24, 2017 (edited) Or have some kind of braveheart situation where they sinply leave while the keepers fight against a far too big orc army..... Or xenos psyker army and the pariahs of the wop where vital to the firekeepers battleplans. Edited March 24, 2017 by MikhalLeNoir Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4694260 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skalpynock Posted March 25, 2017 Share Posted March 25, 2017 Morning drawing, without taking reference and based mostly on vaguely-remembered stuff about silver arms. I'm having way too much fun with that tablet/laptop. Demus Ragnok and simison 2 Back to top Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4695153 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted April 11, 2017 Share Posted April 11, 2017 I might write up something about the building of the Ebensagab for Book 2. Does Jehu need a banner, and has Demus designated another character for the third slot? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/309945-il-x-the-fire-keepers/page/9/#findComment-4708830 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts