Kelborn Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 That one was good, I must admit ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chief Captain Redd Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 Also guys, we've got time we still like six books now to sort through first before we get to this fight. I'm sure it'll play out perfectly when we get there.Wrong thread, Chief. Though seeing as you're higher, could I point you to the question above with regard to Solomon Grimm? How did that even post in this thread? I don't remember that at all. Anywho, I'd never really thought of their relationship I'd just assumed it was like most Bears with Daer'dd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raktra Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 "Get me some men! I can't punch everyone at once." - Raktra Akarro, Primarch of punching :cuss. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Bad Squig Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 Had a thought. How paternal are our various Primarchs? Obviously Alex, Gwal and Daer'dd are very much so, while I assume Raktra's attitude remains, and I quote, "got me some prison bitches" Koschei is very paternal, (but we already knew that), and Azus I'd imagine would care deeply about a select few and have absolutely no affection for the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifftofer Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 K'awil would be more possessive than paternal. He might bestow favours upon some and seek revenge on those who hurt them, but equally he will kill them out of hand should he wish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skalpynock Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 Let it be known that writing of the first segment of Unificator has begun. It'll be Kozja's version of The Second Son and Mycenean, and my own exercise in visualizing how grimdark pre-Imperial Strela was. Doctor Perils, Kelborn, simison and 1 other 4 Back to top Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted September 11, 2016 Author Share Posted September 11, 2016 Blunt, the relationship between Irvin and Alex is more like the kind between a father and an adopted son. Despite his experience and age, Irvin is never treated as a brother, but as a son with a different upbringing. And yes, Alex is very much the father figure in private, much like he's the brother figure to the other Primarchs. But like Hughes of Full Metal Alchemist, it never ends well for the family man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 Did i just read Full Metal Alchemist??? Yay simison 1 Back to top Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Drakzilla~ Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 I think Jade would always seem very distant from his sons, mainly interacting through his officers and preferring to keep to himself and his work. His relationship to his legion is more like that of a Master and his disciples rather than a father and sons. And his sons would see it that way as well, not really bothered that they aren't getting much fatherly attention. simison 1 Back to top Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demus Ragnok Posted September 11, 2016 Share Posted September 11, 2016 Had a thought. How paternal are our various Primarchs? Niklaas is a deeply emotional character. Though he keeps this shut away from the vast majority of the universe. Those people he does build relationships with he is very close to. He is an intuitive personality. He just understands how machines and walls and even people work. What makes them tick. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted September 12, 2016 Share Posted September 12, 2016 Blunt, the relationship between Irvin and Alex is more like the kind between a father and an adopted son. Despite his experience and age, Irvin is never treated as a brother, but as a son with a different upbringing. And yes, Alex is very much the father figure in private, much like he's the brother figure to the other Primarchs. But like Hughes of Full Metal Alchemist, it never ends well for the family man. That figures, as the two meet one another quite early on in the Crusade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted September 12, 2016 Share Posted September 12, 2016 By the way, as I am actually revising my chaotic notes about the wardens origin amd the reunion, who wants to be there, when gwal is found? Travier is there amd the emperor and one spot is open. Short description of the scene: Marines of that unknown legion arrive on caerbannog. Are welcomed by the local population and were led to the main island/ city. There they see withered paintings depicting darkness and light ( darkness swept over the lands the avatar of darkness vanksjed but darkness ruled on. Avatar of light appears, gives power back to the people but then vanishes. Legend has it he returned to avalon. The isle in the mist) Well the captain in command thinks that the avatar of light is a primarch and they sent word to the emperor) After long search they find avalon and emp plus 2 primarchs enter the island. There they find a single figure meditating. Figure wears a mask, bare chested. Strange cloths ( no bling) emp wants to tell his story, that he is his father. Mask man replies that the last man who said that used him as a tool for destruction and had no love for his son.what makes him different? He will not join. Travier approaches him and says put the mask off if you speak to the wmperor. Mask man doesn't react. Travier rips the mask from his face. White glowing eyes. Other primarch cries out in pain. Emperor shouts not to look into the mans eyes and charges in front of his son protecting him, although he has big pain himself. Travier ( thx to split personality) is not affected. Gwal is dumbfounded: how? Travier knocks him out. Later gwal awakes. The emp in front of him. Emp again tells his story. This time gwal listens, the emperor tells him that he will use him as a weapon, but not for personal gain but to unite the galaxy so that humanity can live in peace. Gwal thinks on that and replies that the wmperor is a man of courage and sacrifice. That he realized this when big e rushed in front of his son. He will joim. So who is this other son? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted September 12, 2016 Share Posted September 12, 2016 I'd suggest Icarion. We need more evidence of him being the older brother to the rest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted September 12, 2016 Share Posted September 12, 2016 O had Icariom in mind first. But as Athrawes is seldom jere O don't know if it is okay for him if his promarch withers in pain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted September 12, 2016 Share Posted September 12, 2016 (edited) For the sake of the storyline, Icarion should be prominent. And anyway, I'm sure he can handle a bit of pain Edited September 12, 2016 by bluntblade Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted September 12, 2016 Share Posted September 12, 2016 Looking at Helterskelter's remark about just how much lore we have to sift through, could we add an index to the first post in Stories? With title, time, Legions and maybe characters too? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kelborn Posted September 12, 2016 Share Posted September 12, 2016 Sure, but give me some time, ok? I can probably start to do that on Wednesday. During the day, I will make a list of all stories, sort them and add links in the evening... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted September 12, 2016 Share Posted September 12, 2016 Sure, but give me some time, ok? I can probably start to do that on Wednesday. During the day, I will make a list of all stories, sort them and add links in the evening... Of course. That wasn't meant to be a command - I can compile it myself and send it to you to edit in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kelborn Posted September 12, 2016 Share Posted September 12, 2016 Whoever got it first finished ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted September 12, 2016 Share Posted September 12, 2016 I've got the day off, so it's something I can do later whilst waiting for my photos to upload. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 (edited) So here's what I have so far. Sorry to be a pain, but could we maybe get the multi-story posts fragmented? Otherwise I'm just not sure how to organise them. The Great Crusade Conquest of Albyon - the future Halcyon Wardens Little Brother - Icarion, Alexandros and Daer'dd The Hunt - Daer'dd and Pionus A Cordial Welcome - Koschei, Daer'dd and the Emperor The Diplomat - Alexandros Reunion - the Shepherds of Eden and Berserkers of Uran Ghost Crusade - the Lightning Bearers Liberators - the Godslayers A Difference of Opinion - Niklaas, Raktra and Alexandros Judgement - the Godslayers and Void Eagles Inwit - the Shepherds of Eden and Berserkers of Uran, part 1 of 2 Shepherd - the Shepherds of Eden and Berserkers of Uran, part 2 of 2 In the Arms of Valkyries - the Crimson Lions Feral - the Berserkers of Uran The Eagles Hunt - the Eagle Warriors Painful Observations - Alexandros and the Jade General Mechanised - the Halcyon Wardens, Shepherds of Eden and Iron Bears Circumvallation - the Fire Keepers A Message - the Dune Serpents The Beheading - the Scions Hospitalier Captain Sarrin - the Iron Bears A Siege At Dusk - the Crimson Lions, part 1 of 2 Hive - the Grave Stalkers and Crimson Lions, part 2 of 2 A Proper Depiction - Daer'dd and the Iron Bears Laeran - the Iron Bears and Scions Hospitalier Lineage - Lotara Sarrin and Ellen Temeter Koloss - the Lightning Bearers, Halcyon Wardens and the Emperor The Jackals and Prey - the Stygian Jackals and Lightning Bearers Death World - the Fire Keepers A New Order Ascencion - Alexandros at the Qarith Triumph Whispers and Worries - the Iron Bears and Scions Hospitalier Dinner for Eleven - the Scions Hospitalier Gift of Fire - Alexandros and Niklaas Once More, With Feeling - the Scions Hospitalier Ritual Union - the Iron Bears A Family Dinner - every Primarch Marek - the Shepherds of Eden The Great Games - every Legion A Lone Wolf's Burden - Ellen Temeter and Ancient Ærrion of the Crimson Lions Adjusting - the Lightning Bearers, Halcyon Wardens and Dune Serpents Uneasy Allies - the Iron Bears and the Warbringers Treat It Like A Duel - the Scions Hospitalier and Shepherds of Eden Tea Time - Icarion and the Jade General Day of Revelation The First Strike Upon the Eagles - the Void Eagles and Stygian Jackals Treachery in the Depths - the Scions Hospitalier and The Drowned Insurrection Scavengers, Hunters - Fire Keepers and Odyssalas Fracture - Raktra, Malcador and Alexandros Requiem for Legio Mortis - Alexandros Blood Takers - renegade Dune Serpents and the Morning Stars If... - the Crimson Lions Shoulder Breaker - Imperial Army Dead Dreams - the Berserkers of Uran For the Living, for the Dead - the Halcyon Wardens and Iron Bears Inferno The Fall - the Godslayers Never Give Up, Never Give In - the Crimson Lions Edited September 13, 2016 by bluntblade Kelborn 1 Back to top Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 We're missing the Death of the Bear, and I think there are a few others which haven't made it to the Stories thread yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikhalLeNoir Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 OhOh, there is the story of Travier and Gwalior meeting during the siege of terra. But it must be revised because Travier changed his looks^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 Indeed. Also, I am going to add spoilers bits just to save space, so you can click and then view the ones for, say, the Day of Revelation. I'll also pop the blurb for each section atop each. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doctor Perils Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 Gwalior?You haven't changed your primarch's name without me noticing have you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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