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Inspiration Friday 2016: Thousand Sons (until 1/13)


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I thank you for your entries in Retro Chaos over the last week.

Not a lot of entries, I guess some of you didn’t start the hobby back in the 80s and 90s! biggrin.png At the very least I hope the topic got members to search for old fluff. It got me to crack open my copy of Rogue Trader and Slaves to Darkness, which is always a good thing, though I regret not being able to work Catachan brain-leaves and face-eaters, Cthellean cudbears, ferro-beasts, sunworms, crotalids, ambulls or pterra-squirrels into my entries. Nor a Stegatank. Or a Hellbore. Aaaah!

Thanks to Teetengee for his entry Huntsman featuring everyone’s favourite (now headless) Slaaneshi biker. Truly inspirational.

I hereby vow to make a headless Doomrider within the next year..

And thanks to Carrack for Vehicle To Glory, showing us that Chaos dreadnoughts have never been reliable biggrin.png

Similar to Teetengee, I gave you a doomrider piece with Telling Tales – though whether Cythesai can be believed or not is another question...and Other’s Concerns, based on a random plot generated from the Rogue Trader book, with references to some old minis thrown in.

I hereby close that topic for the purposes of rewards (though as always if you have more entries on the topic please post them at any time, with a suitable note in the post’s title).

Here begins our twenty third challenge of Inspirational Friday 2016:

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On Monday the 15th of August 2016 E Tenebrae Lux V will finish (hopefully with a glorious third straight win for Chaos). The 23rd challenge of IF is to give us a fluff piece about one or more of the models you completed (or failed to complete) for this year’s ETL.

If you did not take part in the ETL then why the bloody hell not?! Leave your head at the door give us a write-up about a recently completed model.

Inspirational Friday: ETL Model runs until the 19th of August

Let us be inspired.

And who shall judge this new challenge? That decision lies with our current judge: KrautScientist. To the chosen victor: step forward and claim your Octed Amulet:

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Alright, guys, this has been very enjoyable indeed! Great job all around! I've been part of the hobby since the early 90s myself (and tentatively got into 40k proper around the mid-90s, I would say), so most of the stuff I read did make sense to me and gave me delicious nostalgia goosebumps msn-wink.gif

As for the stories themselves:

Kierdale's Telling Tales is very well written and really really brings Doomrider into the current style of the lore without sacrificing some of the character's inherent corniness, which is key! There's also a dash of Mad Max: Fury Road in the closing paragraphs (you almost expect Doomrider to go all like "You shall ride eternal, shiny and chrome!). Anyway, an excellent read all around!

The Doomrider extravaganza continues with Teetengee's Huntsman. The story injects a bit of dark humour that really suits the character and certainly made me giggle! The story's one minor shortcoming is that it really kinda relies on knowledge of the short story that inspired it for the full payoff -- especially that bit about Doomrider launching an attack on the alabaster armoured opponent in the last parapgraph. That's a particularly nice shout out to the story that inspired this piece!

Carrack's "Vehicle to Glory" channels a part of the lore (and the rules!) every long time chaos player will be intimately familiar with: A Chaos Dreadnought blowing a fuse has ruined more than one of my personal battle plans. What I really loved about the story was the stream of consciousness we get from the Dreadnought himself. Nit an easy part to get right, but Carrack really nailed it!

And lastly, there is Kierdale once again, with Other's Concerns: I can't believe the lenghts he has gone to to truly achieve a retro effect by actually using the old plot tables! Nuts! Even more astonishing is the fact that he has managed to create a well-crafted tail out of it all once more. The reveal with the Striking Scorpions wiping out the poor Imperials really beautifully channels the "Only War" feeling of the soundbites that would appear all over the various sourcebooks and Codices in days of yore -- and the guest role for the old Space Crusade Dreadnought has been well and duly noted msn-wink.gif

So whom to choose....hmmm...

They were all great and worthy contenders, that much is certain! In the end, it was really a neck and neck between "Telling Tales" and "Vehicle to Glory", and after much consideration, I'll have to hand the octed amulet to Carrack: The soundbite from the Dreadnought's own perspective was what really sealed the deal for me, and the story also beautifully encapsulated the fickle nature of chaos that will lead to its followers turning on each other as often as not. Congratulations, Carrack! And thanks for the excellent reads, guys!

+ I AM KHARFUS! +

Regarding the next subject, I make a point of writing a piece of fluff for pretty much each of my characters, so this one was easy. Meet Apothecary Dumah:

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I also have a 30k version of this guy, and as soon as the model is painted, I think there will be a short piece of fiction describing how Dumah sought to save his company, even while the Betrayal of the early Horus Heresy turned Isstvan III into a blasted hellscape...

I'm glad to hear you have more planned for Dumah as 'Interview with a Chaos Apothecary' is planned for a future IF ;)

 

And now I might have to write 'Ride Eternal' on my kitbashed Doomrider when I make him :tu:

I'm honored about winning, thanks. I'm also looking forward to this week's challenge, not just to write it and read everybody's stories, but to get me out of my hobby funk and finish up at least vow 1 of ETL. Good timing on this challenge.

And I'm back. I decided to write about this guy from my first ETL vow this year:

 

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And so, here's the story for him:

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Battle Wounds


The vermin were scratching again. Scratching and scratching. Little claws tearing away at his brain, eager to tear apart and feast upon his frailing consciousness. There were less of them by the minute. His brothers were slaughtering the pests all around him, making the rats quiet. But those that survived or slowly died clung to their lies, swearing pointless promises to higher powers that don’t exist or reciting oaths to loved ones that no longer lived. Dead and dying, the vermin never ceased to torment.


He needed to free his mind. Clear the thoughts. Bash away the vermin. Pain makes them silent. Rattle the skull and scare the mice away. The helmet, it needed to come off. It needed to beat on his skull. It needed to leave him dizzy and ringing but clear of the pests. He reached for the helm but wasted his effort. The left arm was pinned. He tried to free it, but the heavy burden holding it down - remnants of some building, no doubt - would not budge. But his right was free. He moved it, but everything was wrong. He couldn’t grab the latches on the horned helm. He couldn’t bend at the elbow. Hah, of course - the arm was but a bloody stump now, impotently flailing as he slowly died.


It was the vermin’s machines of war. They did this. Curse those disgusting rats! The behemoth belching ammunition exploded in the midst of his melee, engulfing him with concussive flames and throwing him countless meters away from the fight. He was stuck here now, at the mercy of the mind-rats. They chewed and chewed, getting closer to devouring his sanity. Lost in some ruins, armor devoid of power, in-helmet HUD black and blind, limbs severed. Dying. A carrion feast for the mind-rants.


Zankar always survived. Always. Until today. Today Zankar will die.


***


He felt the vermin before anything else. Still they scratched, weaker now, but the little paws and claws gave him no respite. Their lying teeth still chewed at his weakened consciousness. Soon enough other senses returned, vying for dominance in Zankar’s mind. His body was light - armor gone. No more pressure on his left arm and legs - cleared from the rubble. Breathing was easier - the chest wound had healed. Hearing and sight returned on his right side - head and face damaged, but functional. Finally aware of his surroundings, he could see he was safely aboard Deception’s Call once again.


Zankar had survived. He would never die!


He moved to rise from whatever flat surface he was resting upon, but that was immediately found to be a mistake. Pain. Lots of it. In every inch of his broken body. He howled with an anguished rage. Alive he may be, but barely. At least it made the vermin in his brain scurry away for a bit. He could finally think.


Med bay. That’s where he was. The warband found him and brought him back, kept him alive. Yes, good! Zankar could recover, recruit, and be back on the hunt in no time. But his body still felt irregular. It must be the augmentics. Yes. Of course. No doubt they would outfit a warrior of Zankar’s ability with the finest of new limbs. Time to test them, get a feel for his new immortal shell.


No. Wrong. They augmetics were not responding. He could not feel his fingers and arms flexing at his commands. The auto-senses and lenses for his eye and ear were still switched to off. His legs and feet did not respond to his mental commands. Wait, nothing below the ribs were responding to his thoughts. How much of him was machine now? And why didn’t it function? Biding himself through the pain, Zankar forced himself to diagnose the malfunctioning hardware.


Oh. That’s why.


“Fleshmoulder! What in the True Master’s gaze have you done to my body?!”


The Astartes wielding the narthecium wandered over, the little mutated assistants and familiars at his side as always. The Fleshmoulder. He should have put new limbs on to him, not removed what few he had left!


“I really wouldn’t move, Zankar; it would not doubt cause a considerable amount of pain in your condition. You should relax.”


“No, Fleshmoulder, I won’t relax! Why am I not wired to augmetics?”


The little mutants were laughing at his question. What could possibly be so funny about it?


“Zankar… oh, Zankar… no amount of artificial limbs or senses could repair what damage has been done to you. Frankly it’s… well… let me just show you.”


The chirurgeon grabbed a long mirror and hoisted it above is prone form. The sight was a nightmare. The only limb that was left was the stub of his right arm from the explosion. The left arm, shoulder, and half of his face were gone, cauterized and scarred to roughly heal the wounds. He had no legs, or hips, or part of his lower spine. Part of his fused rib cage was missing as well. Carved into his chest was an open hole - large enough for his head - that left his lungs and hearts exposed to the open air, letting Zankar watch them expand and contract at an increased rate with his growing rage.


“See? Far too much damage for any kind of bionics to fix. Still, Zankar, count your blessings. Against all odds, you have survived. It seems you have been blessed, and will not die.”


“Blessed? Blessed?! I am a stub of an Astartes. I can see my own hearts beating, Thamda’ul! What damned reason could you have to leave me in shambles like this? I have served this warband for centuries, and this is how my life is repaid - with your inept ministrations?!”


In a flash, the narthecium was pointed directly at Zankar’s temple, all manner of surgical tool and injector came to life, teasing the surface of his skin. The pleasant lilt in the apothecary’s face and voice faded, leaving an expression of pure mirth and a speaking tone that rang with the cold certainty of a man accustomed to ending lives with the flick of a wrist.


“You are alive. Continue berating my skills that kept you this way, and I will correct the perceived error in my work, Zankar.”


He shut up. The Fleshmoulder made a very good point. The little mutants were bouncing all over now, chittering and cheering at their master’s bravado. To the best of his ability, Zankar relaxed on the operating slab beneath him to put himself and the apothecary at ease. So be it.


“Besides, immortal one - I can make better use of you than any series of surgeries could. You’ll be joining me from now on.”


The new voice came from the doorway. It was another Astartes - Zankar knew that from his voice alone - but he was not devoid of his armor as Thamda’ul was. The new attendant stood in full service plate, the marks a collaboration of older models. Behind him all manner of tendril and mechadendrite twirled and slithered, the semi-sentient minds of the harness scanning the room for data as their wielder stood still. He stood calm and at ease, but with his trademark cog-shaped power axe at the ready.


No. Oh, for the love of the Ever-Changing Master, no! Not him. Not that way. No the Iron Monger. Not Khan’tu.


“Quick, Fleshmoulder: kill me!”


***


The rats were back again. They wouldn’t leave him alone anymore. Their scratching had become a terrible burden to him, tearing away at his mind hour after hour. He wanted freedom from them. He would beat them away, as he always had.


But Zankar’s arms didn’t move. His head didn’t move. Nothing moved. He was trapped, forever drowning in his tomb of amnio fluid. Wires and cables tored throughout his already ruined body, connecting him to the vast hulk that now surrounded him indefinitely.


This was how he stayed all days now. This was his never-ending life. And the vermin knew it. Their little lies shredded away at his mind, hoping to open enough holes to flood him with the eternal torment he knew would come. No more could he beat them away. No more could he crack his skull on ceramite to make the mind-rats flee. They were always there, now. Always there. Always biting. Always scratching. Always.


This was the price of immortality. Zankar had survived. He always survived. Despite the odds forever stacked against him in every battle, and the countless members of the Hunters lost throughout the years, Zankar had survived. No matter what, he would not die. That had been his Fate. And until now, Zankar loved every minute of it. It was a glorious burden. Not any longer.


The mind-rats were in full force today. It was worse than usual. The devious little voices were assailing him with a new strength. They could sense his weakness now. Zankar wanted to thrash and fight them away, but his new body would never move without the Iron Monger’s permission. Nothing would ever move until it was time for war once more. Zankar needed that war. It would let him fight. It would let him destroy. It would free him from the mind-rats, if only for moments.

 

Author's notes: So, this guy is a character from my ongoing Ophiuchi campaign. If you're curious about his exploits in that fight, I've included them below.

 

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  • 2 weeks later...

Falx Horrificus

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The Ocularis Terribus. The Eye of Terror. The galaxy’s greatest rift in space, where the very stuff of the warp bled through from that otherworld into this. Truly a realm of Chaos, the laws of physics -nay of reality- did not apply there. Time was meaningless. Matter, thought and energy were indistinct, mutable.

It was the lord primarch of the IV legion who named it the Eye of Terror, though such had been stricken from Imperial records by the time events took the Psychopomps there.

While a great many renegades found themselves driven there, pursued by Imperial retribution as had the legions upon their great loss at the Siege of Terra some ten millennia earlier, it was a vision which led the fallen Stygian Guard to the birthplace of their patron.

Their fall to the worship of Slaanesh freed the chapter from the shackles of duty, of loyalty to the Lords of Terra, with which they had bound themselves. They saw the Imperium not as many of their renegade kin did: as a tyrannical empire to be torn down, but perhaps more as a bloated corpse to be fed upon when needs must and they saw no shame in avoiding confrontation unless their needs dictated it (but matters were different when the opportunity came for vengeance against the despised Templars). What focused the Psychopomps was their thirst for the souls of those who had in their hubris given birth to the Dark Prince of Chaos.

The Eldar.

As captives, strapped into the chapter’s Infernal Engine, the xenos allowed the Psychopomps to experience sensations far beyond the ken of humankind. And in those fallen astartes possessed of the sharpest minds, those who felt the tides of the sea of souls, these experiences allowed them to hear an echo embedded in the Eldar’s psyche. A race memory, perhaps. An echo of the birth of the god named She Who Must Not Be Named.

“We have arrived,” the lord of Chaos announced.

Floating in the hololithic display was a world shrouded in pale clouds. Lord Sophusar’s visions had brought them here to this nameless planet within the Eye, and the journey had not been easy. Perhaps smelling new meat, scavengers had been drawn to the gaudily painted Psychopomp fleet as soon as it had decanted into realspace. What had once been astartes, their original chapter or legion now undiscernible, had immediately demanded fealty broadcasting their demands from battered, twisted and warped battleships forming a picket at the rim of the Eye. But the Psychopomps had taken much time plotting their course, burning out half a dozen of their finest navigators, Sophusar pushing them until their minds unravelled, avoiding the vast buildup of Imperial forces surrounding the fortress world of Cadia. Having come so far they would not give up so easily. Would not bend their knees so readily.

And so they had turned their weapons upon fellow renegades for the first time. Not long having passed since the raid on Alceforge, the Psychopomps vessels were well armed and stocked, while those of the renegades proved desperate, though forgemaster Thenaros looked with great interest upon the unorthodox weapons the enemy used even as those weapons were fired upon the ship he was aboard. Bestially-muzzled cannons vomiting forth something akin to plasma yet fundamentally different, lasers which seemed to scream as they tore though the void, and more. He cried out in anguish as the Psychopomps pummeled the raiders and his calls for boarding parties and the capture of the enemy vessels were ignored.

Tarrying no longer, lord Sophusar had ordered them onward into the Eye, he guiding the vessels himself now, stopping only when they had come to this seemingly lifeless, unremarkable world.

“Master, our ships inexplicably struggle to hold anchor. It is as if even orbital space is as turbulent as the Sea of Souls here,” Angra, once the chapter’s master of sanctity, pointed out. The right hand of the master of the Psychopomps, he had been lain low by the Templar chaplain Caedmon, slain as his body was split from crown to crotch. Rewarded for his sins Angra had been restored, a full half of his being now daemonette. “Tell us why you have brought us hither.” Sometimes the dark apostle spoke as Angra but other times, like this, it seemed more as if the daemon half of him was in control and now it appeared to tease the astartes stood about it, asking yet by its tone Sophusar knew it already understood his purpose.

“And quickly,” this came from Dophesia, once the captain of the eighth company, missing the intricacies of the daemon’s speech. The peacock rested one hand upon the hilt of his sheathed sword, the other rapped impatiently upon the edge of the holoprojector. “I am told more marauders and renegades are inbound.”

“Nervous?” his rival captain Castor of the second, as cool as the other was taut, stared at his across the briefing room.

“Keen to see combat, be it in the void or upon this planet. Not all of us are content to wait and watch.”

While Dophesia was always in the thickest of the fighting it was not so much that he led his men from the front rather he wished to earn the lions’ share of the glory and trophies. Castor on the other hand was the cold tactician. While his rival would take your head with a flourish of his sword, Castor would slide an envenomed dagger betwixt your ribs without your knowledge, having had his men – his Reapers – infiltrate in advanced and slay your men in their sleep.

“Timing, captain Dophesia.”

“Timing is indeed vital. In the duel, for example. Perhaps I could teach you a lesson sometime, captain Castor?”

“This was an Eldar world.” These words from lord Sophusar ceased his minions’ verbal sparring. This drew their attention back to he who had once been chapter master of the Stygian Guard. That he was clad not in his robes or his powered armour but in his huge terminator plate indicated that for whatever reason he had led them into the Eye, the most perilous place in the galaxy, bloodshed was likely.

“The Eye itself was once the center of their empire,” he went on to explain. Surprised expressions appeared on the faces of all but for Angra – the mouth of the daemonette half of his face tugged upwards – and the naga sorcerer Holusiax, first blessed of the chapter.

“How do you know this?” Semoru, captain of the 9th. As befitted his position directing the fire of the chapter’s heaviest weapons, he checked and rechecked everything, from intel to ammunition supplies. His bionic eye whirred as its focus moved from the ghostly green orb floating above the table, to their leader, clad in his ornate armour: the right side of which was pastel pink adorned with glyphs and sigils of white, trimmed in purple, the left side being light blue trimmed with green. Pink tentacles appeared to writhe upon the surface of the blue plates. And atop his armour was a great brass organ the likes of which one might more commonly see in chapels of the Imperial Cult rather than atop armour which made one as a walking tank.

“While some revel in just the excesses hidden deep within the souls of the Children of Isha,” he looked over his assembled captains, advisors and cult leaders, “I have pieced together fragment upon fragment of memories, buried deep within them. Memories of the Fall of the Eldar. The birth of our lord Slaanesh.”

At the mention of their patron’s name some bowed their heads, others raised them and loosed cries at the ceiling high above, one of the attending noise marines pulled hard on chains which pierced his exposed flesh, anchored not merely in his skin but in the nerves deep inside.

“This world, and those like it throughout the Eye, comprised the Eldar empire.”

Even to the barbaric eye of a human there was something distinctly wrong with the architecture of the ruins. One could only suppose that to an Eldar the difference would be more shocking. Though built for naught but war, the astartes were not completely incapable of aesthetic appreciation – perhaps it had been something ignite by their devouring of Eldar souls – and there was something attractive in the graceful sweep of the towers, bridges and halls they had torn down upon the maiden world of Mesusid years before. Yet here on this world those aspects, that beauty was twisted and wicked, more reminiscent of the raider base the Stygians had assaulted along with their Templar cousins decades earlier on Berolar XII, yet different once again.

It was exquisite, and as the Psychopomps made their way through the ruined city they could feel the gravity of what had happened here in ages past. The roads and halls were littered with debris and dust, the corpses of those who had once lived here having long decayed away, leaving warped yet intricate jewelry scattered about, weathered by the winds which howled through empty chambers like the ghosts of the departed, wailing in despair as the pawns of She Who Must Not Be Named trod upon their world, bringing back the memories of the atrocities they had committed and the doom they brought upon themselves.

And these fell acts were writ large all about. Carved bas-reliefs upon walls, stained glass windows worn until their wanton images were blurred, entwined lascivious and wicked statues lining boulevards.

As was the Psychopomp way those of the landing party set about the city, felling sculptures and smashing off faces with which to decorate their armour and vehicles. Others sifted through the scattered finery, seeking baubles and treasures which tickled their own twisted fancies.

But lord Sophusar was not stalled by these trinkets, pushing on deeper into the city, yet wandering seemingly at random. His captains kept close and silent, trusting their lord’s vision. At his side strode Angra, his daemonette’s eye focused on the lord as if watching and waiting.

The roar of racing Black Stallion engines echoed away as the commanders strode through one of the myriad dens. The Fall of the Eldar was all about them. It was not as if they could feel the pressure of the souls of the dead about them, rather the opposite: a complete absence of the haunting they might have expected to feel. A vacuum, the debauched denizens of this world having had their souls torn from them, the very life from their world stolen away, as Slaanesh had been born.

When Sophusar finally came to a halt upon the threshold of huge fane, it was Dophesia who first came to his side, his jump pack carrying him over his rivals and granting him the first glance into the desecrated temple.

“Stones!” he breathed as he looked upon the sea of green gems which carpeted the floor. It was only by strength of will that he managed to remember himself and step aside for his lord to enter the temple first, the heavy tread of his terminator armour crushing soulstones beneath his feet.

And in that moment they knew that they had been deceived.

There was no exhilarating release. No howl of torment as a soul was ravenously devoured by the Dark Prince.

Castor spat a low curse, eclipsed by the wail of Dophesia’s anguish as Sophusar strode deeper into the temple, waystones splintering under his feet as if he trod upon a mass of dead beetles. Inert, empty stones. Vacant phylacteries.

As the others fanned out, some checking each stone they could find for the merest glint of some sentience within, others cursing the ill fate which had guided them here, their lord continued his steady stride toward the altar at the building’s center. A respectful distance behind him strode Angra in his blossom-decorated black armour.

The altar itself was of wraithbone, Eldar runes carved into it, but upon it stood an artefact of what appeared to be roseate marble, veins winding through its surface of hues from pearly white through greys to faint reds. But it was the shape of the sculpture which held the Chaos lord’s gaze.

From a ring shot forth a spur which ended in a tight crescent, its wings almost joining. A second, larger crescent reached back to embrace the ring.

The icon of Slaanesh.

At first the sight of it sent warning signals throughout his brain for how could such a symbol be found upon this world, seemingly untouched in a hundred centuries? Yet the layer of dust upon it was as upon all about them. The altar, the flagstones, the statuary, the stones beneath their feet.

He shifted his great axe to his left hand and reached out as if to touch the icon with his right. Had it been a focus of worship here by the fallen Eldar?

He paused before laying a finger upon it and turned to find Angra watching him, the astates half of his face calm, the daemonette half taught with anticipation.

“Is this what I was brought here to find?”

“Our master works in mysterious ways,” the daemon replied, the last word drowned out by the bark of Castor’s bolt gun.

“AMBUSH!”

Sophusar’s eyes did not leave his apostle’s until he was satisfied he saw surprise in both the human and daemonic sides of the face, and he wheeled about to find ghosts setting about his commanders.

Castor and his Reapers had quickly moved to stand next to Semoru and his bodyguard of Havocs, the two captains and their men carefully blasting at their attackers while Dophesia darted about, sword drawn, dancing between the rotten cushions and the stones which littered the floor. Holusiax had his scarlet daggers drawn in his lower arms while with his upper arms he steadily fired his bolt pistol at the wraiths.

Colourful wraiths they were too, flowing with far more grace than the captain of the 8th, leaving trails of scintillating colour in their wake.

One of Semoru’s former devastators was the first to die, the huge heavy bolter in his hands falling silent and slipping from his grip as something punched clean through his chestplate before being withdrawn in a blink, a spray of liquid gore erupting from the wound. Another fell and then a Reaper and even Dophesia cried out in pain as phantasms made a mockery of his swordsmanship.

Sophusar strode down from the altar, walking back up the aisle toward the melee at the threshold of the fane. When sparks erupted from his armour and he looked to find razor-thin stars imbedded there his suspicions were confirmed: these were no ghosts but rather the Rillietann. Their murderous skill was at stark odds with the foolishness of their clown-like appearance.

There had been no sign of life from orbit. Then had these gaudy phantoms followed them from outside the Eye? Or could it be that they had made their way here via that implausible network of the Eldar which penetrated the warp itself and was said to link worlds across the galaxy itself?

Such mattered little now and could be wrung from any survivors later. He brought up his great axe to parry the blow of a flickering apparition which cartwheeled toward him, only for the enemy’s blade to slide past the haft of his weapon and nearly cut deep into his gut. A quick turn by himself prevented this and the tip of his foe’s blade scored deep into his codpiece.

“You’ll pay for that,” he spat as he briefly saw the hook-nosed mask of his opponent before it dissolved into a mist of colour once again and he fought to bring his axe round to swing about in an arc which would be near impossible to dodge. Yet dodge the harlequin did, flipping over the humming edge of the powered axe only to strike down and sever the great blade with its own weapon. Sparks emitting from the severed cables of his truncated weapon, Sophusar spun the haft in his hands, deflecting the troupe master’s next strike and dealing the Eldar a blow to the temple which sent him staggering backwards, kicking up empty soulstones from the floor. This took the harlequin far enough from Sophusar that the alien noticed the dark apostle who had been stood behind the terminator lord. As soon as the harlequin’s gaze took in the half-daemonette visage of the former chaplain it emitted a fearsome howl – had this warrior nomad once been a banshee? – and as one the troupe members left their individual fights to head straight for Angra.

As they circled about the apostle and that circle began to shrink, there came a deafening blast which shook both the body and the soul, emitted from the great organ atop the lord’s armour. For meters about him the soulstones on the floor shattered, shards tearing through the air. The windows blew out and dancers caught mid-tumble were tossed backwards, weapons dropped as they held their heads and screamed in torment.

It was not merely the amplified war cry of a lord of Chaos, but the reconstituted birth cry of a primordial annihilator, pieced together from those souls the lord had consumed.

When lord Sophusar the Facinorous strode once again from that alien fane, his armour was adorned with the masks of three harlequins, a hook-nosed one upon his crotch, and his fated weapon was complete: the falx horrificus, the great roseate marble icon of Slaanesh chained atop the haft.

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I give you Typhus lord Sophusar the Facinorious of the Psychopomps, the Doom of Carth-Lar, the Piper of Madness.

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And some close-ups...

However that Harlequin died, he died weeping bloody tears.

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Not that this one faired much better...

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The pink marble of the Falx Horrificus

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Not too much blood since, hitting someone with a huge chunk of albeit slightly sharpened stone, its more bludgeoning than anything.

The Templar helm and chain of severed ears.

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And...

The cloak.

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The Sinful Drip

 

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I thank you for your entries in ETL V Model over the last two weeks.

KrautScientist’s entry was about apothecary Dumah, Chooser of the Slain and Keeper of the Seed. I do like a nice long title. I liked the explanation that he not only chooses whom of his own brothers can be saved, but also which of the enemy have earned a (no doubt unwilling) position within the warband. Also the glimmer of hope that his research may yet bear fruit.

Scourged gave us Battle Wounds: the tale of the Scourged warrior Zankar and the apothecary `Fleshmoulder` Thamda’ul’s granting him immortality...by way of incarceration within a helbrute. I think you excellently captured the horror aspect renegades are said to face at the prospect of entombment in a helbrute, and I do so love those titles...Fleshmoulder, Iron Monger...

Carrack gave us The Sinful Drip, taking us back to Calebra hive – the site of many of his IF entries. Firstly I loved the initial description of Calebra’s perfection and beauty (I could picture it easily!) and its inevitable decay as technological secrets were forgotten (how very 40K!). The third paragraph’s descriptions of the various strata of the hive’s society idly casting their waste down onto their lesser was also great.

And I gave you Falx Horrificus: lord Sophusar of the Psychopomps leading his fallen chapter into the Eye of Terror for the first time, their discovery of a Crone World, ambush and the eventual creation of the Falx Horrificus.

I hereby close that topic for the purposes of rewards (though as always if you have more entries on the topic please post them at any time, with a suitable note in the post’s title).

Here begins our twenty fourth challenge of Inspirational Friday 2016:

The Primordial Annihilator versus the Inquisition

From the myriad Ordos – Malleus, Xenos, Hereticus, Chronos, Scriptorum, Machinum, Sicarius - to their Astarte lackeys of the Grey Knights and the Deathwatch, the most Holy Orders of the Emperor’s Inquisition are a powerful and common foe of those who serve the Four.

This week I ask you to give us tales which pit renegades and the servants of Chaos against the forces of the Inquisition.

The challenge has also been extended to the =][=, Grey Knight and Death Watch forums (particularly a challenge in the latter’s anti-xenos-centric case).

Inspirational Friday: Versus the =][= runs until the 2nd of September.

Let us be inspired.

And who shall judge this new challenge? That decision lies with our current judge: Carrack. To the chosen victor: step forward and claim your Octed Amulet:

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IF - ETL Model

 

Judging this week's contest has been hard. I say that about every week I get to judge, but this one is particularly difficult. Even though there were only a few entries, they were submitted, along with pictures, by three of my favorite painters on the B&C. I made an effort to remain objective, and judge the stories on their own merits, but I can't say I totally succeeded. I'll include what I liked about the minis, as well as the stories, mostly for my own sake so I might one day be able to accomplish similar feats, and be able to pinpoint what I like about the minis beyond just general feelings of awesomeness. My own painting skill is minimal to say the least, and like my writing, is mostly self-taught, but perhaps input from a novice such as myself might be of some use to you.

 

Krautscientist - Apothecary Dumah

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dumah_(angel) An angel of death armed with a fiery sword, coincidence?

 

-I liked the mythological aspect of his role as Chooser of the Slain. I think this is a cool way to describe his role as an apothecary, taking the worthy to fight on in immortality.

 

-He has his own personal goals. This is important, it gives him motivation, which is important to both his own character, and that of the warband he is part of. It is also nice that although he hasn't had success, which would bring the warband out of the realm of established background, he is making progress, and not blindly following an unattainable goal.

 

Dumah

 

-the light effects. Not just the glowing power sword, but the glowing bits on his armor, especially how the ones that are more recessed on the model aren't as bright. Also, the way the Khorne talisman gleams is cool.

 

-the pose. He looks like he is striding the battlefield with an open stance, inviting some fool to challenge him, while at the same time looking for the worthy. Alright, maybe I'm tying the story in with the image, but it fits so well.

 

Scourged - Battle Wounds

 

-Zankar was one of my favorite characters you had written about. His Quiet Riot Head Banging ( I'm going to date myself, but that was my first 45 record) was a unique way of dealing with The Gift, and really showed the madness most of The Scourged suffer in a memorable way. He deserved another story, and he is a perfect candidate to show the horror of helbrute interment.

 

-Speaking of which, I think you have written the best description of the horror of a Helbrute's existence I have read. Also, I'm looking forward to more about the Flesh Moulder.

 

The Iron Monger

 

-The colors. The contrast between the daemon flesh, armor, mechanical parts, and accents is superb. The helbrute is one of my favorite models, but I find it can be a little confusing as to which parts to paint what, you definitely didn't have that problem.

 

-The weapons. The missile launcher is really well done. I like how you incorporated the red part of your color scheme into the weapons.

 

Kierdale - Falx Horrificus

 

-The artifact. Every great lord should have a great weapon. The origin of the title weapon is fitting of such a weapon, and especially so for the Psychopomps.

 

-The impact of your lord. Lord Sophusar doesn't make a lot of appearances in the tales of the Psychopomps, but when he does, it is memorable. This heightens the impact he has, which I think is important.

 

Lord Sophusar

 

-I honestly don't know where to begin. I mean the eye lenses, the faces, the marble, the little ears, the freehand symbols, the pages on the book, I'm awed. Truth be told, I don't even like the colors, but they are done so well I love them anyway. I'd say you've outdone yourself, but you always put out top quality.

 

 

 

I really did try to limit my fawning praises, but it got harder and harder as it went on. I also would have gotten my choice out earlier, but I got stuck looking at Krautscientist's WIP page for a while in amazement.

 

My favorite story was Battle Wounds by Scourged.

Trial

 

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“Nothing human moves that fast!” Hrodgeir spat, gripping a talisman in his left hand whilst he triggered a burst from his bolter in his right. The skittering, dancing killer darted out of sight before the Space Wolf’s shots had even exited his weapon’s muzzle. “Ecclesio!”

“Keep down, brother. Wouldn’t want to scorch your whiskers.”

The space wolf’s retort was lost to the roar of the Blood Angel’s heavy flamer, the sheet of flame engulfing the piles of debris and filth they found themselves fighting amidst.

“You really should consider donning headgear in the field, brother.”

“’m not a pretty boy like you, Angel.”

“Quite tru-“

A keening wail cut short their exchange as the pirouetting, somersaulting killer staggered, swathed in fire, into view. It dropped to the ash-covered ground and began to roll to no avail for the fire of promethium could not so easily be extinguished. A few second later it lay still, charred and smoking.

Strigifo’s hand on Hrodgeir’s pauldron stopped him from advancing out to examine the kill. The space wolf stared at the Mentor legionary when he did not remove his hand.

One down,” the Mentor answered in a cautionary tone before shouldering his own bolter and moving off, not toward the charred corpse but circling round to the right. The Fist, Paz, followed suit a few meters behind.

Taking cue from their squad leader, Ecclesio took off round to the left, hefting the bulky flamer with ease. That left Hrodgeir and the Templar Audemar. They exchanged a long look.

“I didn’t think you were up for that either,” Hrodgeir chuckled as he and the other raised their weapons and strode out openly across the ash. Up the middle.

Let them come.

 

 

The squad of five Deathwatch marines had been briefed by an inquisitor of the Ordo Xenos and quickly dispatched here to the sumps of Brasov Hive on Hydrus VI. They weren’t informed of the source of the intel – how typical of the Ordos! – only that an Eldar incursion was anticipated in the hive within a standard month. What purpose could draw the fay aliens to the lowest levels of one of the planet’s oldest hives none could fathom, but the Deathwatch was the Imperium’s shield against the xenos scourge. No matter their purpose, the aliens would die.

 

 

Hrodgeir kicked the blackened corpse with his boot, his own armour a similar shade of black but for his right pauldron, still displaying the black wolf’s head upon a field of brilliant yellow, all dusted with the grey ash which pervaded these lower levels. About his armour he had hung the talismans, runestones and trophies he had accumulated throughout his century-plus years of service to his chapter. It had been his skills garnered over those blood-soaked decades which had seen him seconded to the Deathwatch.

“What is it?” Ecclesio called out from across the silt flat.

“Dead,” the spacewolf called back, laughing and looking to Audemar to share the joke. The Templar was as a statue, and this cooled the wolf’s humour.

“No idea what it was…Harlequin?” Hrodgeir ventured, though he could find no shuriken weapons or mask. Nor did it have that bastard-deadly spike weapon strapped to the back of either forearm.

“We are being watched.”

Audemar had barely spoken since the squad’s coming together so this final breaking of his silence focused Hrodgeir.

“Sniper?”

The Templar made the slightest of nods but no move to indicate the direction of the enemy he had apparently spotted.

“Should’ve worn my helmet,” the wolf muttered.

 

 

Hrodgeir and Paz were down and the rest of the squad pinned. It was now apparent that the dancing killer’s advance had been covered by a master sniper. And likely reinforcements – enemy reinforcements - were en route. That left the three remaining Deathwatch divided, each huddled behind debris: fallen masonry from the higher levels of the hive, broken pipework and rusting, discarded shipping crates.

Strigifo had ordered them to regroup on his position but as soon as Ecclesio and Audemar had left cover shots had come their way. The timing had been so impeccable that the enemy had to be eavesdropping on their comms, so the three had abandoned vox. In a squad which had fought alongside each other for years, where each marine knew his battle brothers almost as well as he knew himself, this was no great issue. One intuitively knew how the others would act, but in the case of three astartes from wildly differing chapters who fought alongside one another for the first time, it was another matter.

Strigifo checked his bolter’s ammo once again and thought of his squad mates. A blood angel and a black Templar. He sighed. While he would have preferred to out-think the enemy, he feared the angel and Templar would prefer more...visceral…tactics.

So be it.

He rose, aiming his bolter in the direction of the sniper’s last known position and loosed a long burst, hoping the others would understand his intention.

It worked when he saw Audemar and further off to his left, Ecclesio, break cover and begin sprinting across the ash-carpeted chamber.

“Traitors!” came a roar from his right and Strigifo was forced to cut his burst short as a pair of men – men! Not Eldar – charged at him from behind a half-fallen wall. Had the bastards been flanking him while the sniper had him pinned? Scraps? Sump-dwellers? Hive gangs? He had little time to take in their appearance other than that they bore large ornate shields and swords, arcs of power dancing across the surface of both. No gangers, then.

The remaining bolts in his weapon tore the first man in half, the impacts of the first two shots pushing the shield aside before the third blew the man apart, but he was forced to thrown himself backwards as the second man swung at him.

He blocked the next swing of the man’s sword by sacrificing his bolter, dropping the two halves of the weapon and drawing his pistol as soon as he had booted the man backwards to get some room.

The Mentor then charged the man, firing as he went to ensure his foe kept his shield up. Blinding himself. When the firing stopped the man instinctively lowered his shield to look about for the black-clad marine, and Strigifo’s fist took his head off.

Even as he heard the report of his squadmates’ weapons and that of the enemy sniper, his attention was drawn to the weapons of the man he had just felled. The crosspiece of the power sword had upon it an immediately recognizable symbol, albeit smudged with the ash and silt which coated all surfaces down here. An ornate capital I.

His mind raced, searching for an explanation. If these men had been sent as backup then surely he would have been informed. There was no reason for their attacking the deathwatch squad. Had they somehow been deemed traitors and set up thus by the inquisition, to be taken down by the Ordos’ killers in this deep dungeon of the hive?

What was clear was that these men were agents of the inquisition, and the Mentor legionary would have answers, or vengeance.

 

 

* * * *

Castor, captain of the 2nd, knelt before his master.

“It appears our dupes were duped, my lord.”

Lord Sophusar of the Psychopomps leant forward in his throne within his chambers aboard their flagship, Charon.

“Go on.”

“Master Angra’s cultists were successful in seeding the hives with rumours of a coming Eldar incursion, as planned, and members of the deathwatch were dispatched...however it appears your nemesis responded with not her own forces this time but rather orchestrated it that agents of another Ordo, likely Malleus or Hereticus, were tasked with taking `us` down.”

The barking laughter of the lord of Chaos rocked the room and was soon joined by a chorus of sycophantic daemons who reclined upon the steps and divans scattered about the room.

“Well played, autarch Qarasion. Well played.”

 

 

With only two entries so far...do we need another week?

As the only entries so far are from a couple of old Chaos hacks ;) and a couple of loyalists have shown interest in another week, I've pushed back the deadline to September 2nd. I hope no one objects.

I had fun with this. Who doesn't love a good origin story? My namesake warband served their loyal days under the hand of the Inquisition, so you know I was going to have fun with this topic. And even more fun was recycling an Inquisitor I outlined in another story that I never finished. Good times were had here. Enjoy.

 

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In a Vostroyan Forest


“It would be wise, Gallus, for you to put that bolt pistol down and walk away.”


The unstable demigod appeared to disagree with that logic, or just did not care. The Chapter Master refused to comply with her demand. Instead he held the firearm pointed in her general direction with an unsteady hand. He and the majority of the other Astartes had become manic lately, slowly descending into an irrational madness that worsened with time. The results of this malady no doubt brought about this heretical standoff aboard Veritas, flagship of the Seekers of Truth.


“I.. we… I… all hear, Inquisitor. All hear… lies… voices in… she died… little thoughts… wrong, so wrong... such horrors and… so small and weak… mind-echoes… hurts...  you killed her... ”


Babbling. Nonsensical babbling. Though Gallus was still better off than the majority of the crew. The fool could barely articulate himself over his weakened and failing mind, but articulate himself he still could. Many more weren’t so lucky, reduced to pained wailing or a comatose state. Regardless, it was this affliction that had driven him to a state of irreparable paranoia. But no matter his reasons, the Chapter Master was still threatening her at gunpoint.


“I’ll say again, Gallus: put down your weapon and walk away.”


Tsalie Krejcik had never faltered from the threats of weaker men. No soul could rise through the ranks of the Inquisition with such a weakness in their convictions. An Astartes threatening to take her life had never caused her any undue stress. This occasion would be no different. Tsalie embraced the standoff with her own Inferno pistol drawn, keeping Gallus and his small retinue at bay while they exchanged their parley.


The confrontation had come as a surprise while enroute to her shuttle. No doubt the Chapter Master chose this moment, as he knew Tsalie’s acolytes would be away from her side to prepare the shuttle for her departure. Clever. Even in their weakened states the Seekers still possessed a whim of their cunning tactics. A shame they would never serve the Imperium again, after this day. The Servo-skull hovering over her shoulder had been recording everything as it unfolded, automatically uploading it to Inquisition servers. The Seekers of Truth would no doubt be classified as Excommunicate Traitoris before this exchange ended.


“...just a child… so small… you let her die… lie to all, lie to all… no one… dead in the snow...”


On and on with the babbling. Nothing she was saying was making it through Gallus’ clouded thoughts. The man was lost. The three Astartes behind him seemed no better, either. One stood on unsteady legs that swayed him to and fro, while the other two were wracked with twitches and spasms to the point of miniature seizures as they fought to maintain an active consciousness. Gallus was the most composed of the lot, able to keep his weapon aloft while the others were not. But it wouldn’t be long before he was as ruined as the rest.


“Gallus, you need help. You are not thinking clearly. None of you are. If you put down the weapon  I will help you. But if you make a single more threatening action in my direction I will put you and your men down with the swiftness and fury of the God-Emperor.”


“...die… lie… die… lie… girl dies… lies… sister dies… you lie… you lie… the lie… the lies…”


This didn’t sound babbling anymore. It was the same thing, over and over, about death and a girl. He had been going on and on about a girl dying and lies. Quiet rumors had been spreading through the ship that the Seekers of Truth had been gifted with a new psychic touch that let them hear lies. She had written it off like all of the other countless rumors of extraordinary abilities the superstitious crew would invent about their Astartes masters. Even if that wasn't nonsense, death and lies were part and parcel for the Inquisition and their Astartes servants. But this time he said “sister.” She killed a sister. Gallus was ranting about someone specific, a certain child and sister. Did he mean…?


No. No! He couldn’t know about that. This was some odd gambit Tsalie couldn’t understand. Gallus was toying with her, in some kind of game or attempted manipulation. In his paranoia he invented some unforgivable offense and was instituting his corrupted justice upon her. Or it was a crafted means of unsettling her, and only luckily managed to strike a nerve. Surely that’s what’s Gallus was doing - he was playing off of those rumors to toy with her. Yes, that had to be it. No one, Gallus or otherwise, could know about her.


“This is your final warning, Gallus: either you-”


“But the lies! I hear, Krajcik! I hear all! I hear yours!”


His outburst was sudden and loud, rather out of place from the mumbled stream of thoughts he had been speaking since approaching her in the narrow hall. His shouting  revealed a saliency in his  eyes that had been missing until now. Gallus Herodicus was finally granted a reprieve, a moment of clarity within his madness. And he was wasting no time in speaking clearly before the moment evaporated away.


“Your father’s lasgun. Target practice in the woods. Trees… and snow… and trees… quiet. Your sister… sister… such a little girl… sister wanted to join. Uncertainty. Father said… father said… father said… forbidden. Hand the lasgun away. Aim. Pain and light and fire and pain and screaming. One face mangled… melted… dripping. One body ruined… burning away… open wounds… flesh of fire... tears freezing in the snow…”


No! There is no way he - or anyone - could know about that! No one had been there to see it happen. They were alone. No one for miles, their parents in the mines. It was just an accident. She just wanted to be an ace shot, like her father. She needed the practice. Then powercell on the rifle overcharged and exploded. Tsalie’s face had been partially melted and destroyed from the blast. She was lucky from only being adjacent to the rifle. But… but Teesa had been holding the gun…


The revival of the buried memory saw the Inquisitor unconsciously touch her gloved hand to the side of her face, feeling the damage done that day. The skin and sinew had long since healed, but she never did repair the damage. She wanted the scars to remain forever, even if the guilt was buried away. The lower portion of her right profile was a twisted wreckage of scar tissue and bone and crude Vostroyan augmentics. It felt so cold to the touch, though the resurfaced memory burned bright.


“The gun didn’t kill. Sister’s body charred and smoking. Arm gone… leg gone… chest open… everything burning… flesh black… So much pain. Begging. Crying. Begging for help. Crying from the hurt. Begging to make the pain end. Sister begging sister… help her… help her...”


“Stop it.”


“No help for kilometers. Home so far away… sister can’t walk. Can’t move. Can only cry and beg. No medic to help. Only cold and pain. Memories come... father’s stories from wars... soldiers dying of wounds... no medics to help… only Emperor’s Mercy.”


“I said stop it, Herodicus!”


“Nothing around. No weapons. But a rock. No one around. No people… no voices… only tears and begging. You do it... you grant her mercy. You end her pain. Sister screaming… you crying… bone crunching. Strike and strike and again and again. Finally silence. You ended her pain. Her suffering.”


Tsalie can’t hold her composure anymore. Fifty years had been spent repressing that memory - the truth - from the universe and herself. It was not a memory she wanted. But here and now, at the threat of gunpoint, she was forced to relive it. A stream of tears - cold as the Voyastran winter that day - poured from her biological eye. It was the only thing she could do to help Teesa, the only thing! It was the only option!


“Last… last chance, Gallus. Stop it. Stop this, whatever it is… please.”


“Can’t tell them… won’t understand. Hide the truth. Father won’t understand. Mother won’t understand. No one will understand. Craft the lie. Believe the lie. The blast killed sister, not you. But you did. You killed her. You killed her. And lied. You killed her and lied. Lied. You lied. All of life based on the lie. Everything from the lie. The lies. The lies!”


The coherency in the Chapter Master’s voice was faltering again. His eyes were once more growing glossy and dim. He was losing himself to his mind once more. He and the three other Astartes were shuffling toward her now, closing the gap. His chanting of “the lies” had become a sort of rallying call to the ailing warriors at his side. With Gallus’ accusation done, apparently they were satisfied and wished to render judgement.


Tsalie’s pistol was shaking in her hands as unsteadily as Gallus’ now, but for far different reasons. The sorrow was overwhelming, having to relive her sister’s death after so long. The scars had remained all these years, reminding her every day of her past. But never once did she confront the memories, relieve them, or face judgement for her sins. Never. Having to confront them here and now, so abruptly and with no escape, it was too much. She needed to focus her thoughts, tighten them, sharpen them. She needed to bury her sister once again. This was not a situation for sorrow. No, this situation necessitated rage.


The rumors had not been rumors after all. For once the scuttlebut of toiling minions had been damningly accurate. The Seekers of Truth had become tainted by some foul influence. They could truly hear the lies of others after all. The accusation of Gallus was proof enough of this sorcerous ability. And to cohort with the sorcerous will of the Warp was among the most ultimate of heresies in this galaxy. The Seekers of Truth had sworn themselves to her service to eliminate the deceptive heretics they had become. By this indignation she would not abide.


“Death to the heretic.”


The heat and flash of the Inferno pistol was staggering, overwhelming her biological senses as the beam of energy tore a hole through the left shoulder of the Astartes closest to her. The superheated beam left a circular void where armor and flesh had once been. Groaning, the superhuman slumped to the floor as his brothers ended their trudging to start running in her direction. The standoff was broken. Time to run.


Turning on her heel with a flurry of robes Tsalie sprinted toward the hangar where her shuttle and acolytes waited. The hovering Servo-skull spun in the air and followed, continuing to record as the three Astartes chases the Inquisitor. It couldn’t be any more than a hundred meters before reaching the safety of her ship and bodyguards. She could make it, if she ran fast enough. The repeated barking of a bolt pistol firing behind her was an extra incentive to run faster.


One such round glanced off of her pauldron and detonated in the adjacent wall, a loud reminder of death’s proximity. In that moment Tsalie was very glad her power armor had been worn this day. Normally, on such a casual visit to the Seekers of Truth she would have adorned her more informal garments and robes. But something within her soul had urged her to wear her full plating before this encounter. Later, once safe, she would have to give proper reverence to the God-Emperor for his guidance.


Only fifty meters left -  nearly an eternity to go. The three Astartes were not closing on her, thankfully, but the pace was maintained. Gallus’ aim was just as thankfully compromised by his manic state, unable to connect anymore shots since the glace against her shoulder. But all it would take was one lucky shot for a bolt round would find its mark and end this chase prematurely. That could not happen. Not now, not this close...


Twenty-two more meters, and finally close enough to link her augmetics to the receivers in her acolytes. That shuttle needed to be ready to go. The stream of data covered her right field of vision once the link was established. The shuttle was ready! Thank the Golden Throne! A single thought later and urgent messages were broadcast to all of her servants, updating them to her situation. Acknowledgement runes all flashed before her eye, giving Tsalie a burst of confidence that she just might live through this day. She just might make it.


There. The bulkhead door to the hanger. She could make it to safety in mere moments if that door wasn’t currently sealed shut. There was no time to open it herself, no time to have her acolytes do it, and no time to think. Were she to try and open in mid-pursuit it would no doubt bring her death. All Tsalie Krejcik could do was hope: hope that her throwing aim was accurate, hope that cutting off the barrel of her pistol would create a beam just the right size, and hope that she could do it all before Gallus struck a lucky shot.


Now or never.


While still running at her full speed, Tsalie threw her robes open and pulled the power saber from its ornate sheath, activating it in the same motion. Using one fluid swipe she arced the blade in front of her to slice the barrel of her Inferno pistol off, the momentum of the blades trajectory allowing her to then fling the saber away. It flew across the expanse in front of her, still alive with energy, and pierced the panel controlling the bulkhead door. That had better short out the power and prevent the door from opening, or this next part would be pointless.


The Inferno pistol fired, now unrestricted to a narrow beam and shooting out in a much wider spray. Such a thing had weakened the power of the shot, but it was still miraculously strong enough to cut a hole in the door. And, sure enough, that hole was now just wide enough for Tsalie to leap through. It seemed that way anyway. But maybe it wasn’t. It was hard to tell in the split seconds she had before needing to leap with arms and legs outstretched. Either she would fly through the damaged door and complete her escape, or find herself stuck in a ring of molten metal and left to the mercy of three insane Astartes.


Though a combination of heightened senses and skill and miraculous fate she lept and cleared the small opening. By the God-Emperor, it worked! The Inquisitor tumbled onto the grated floor of the hanger bay, turning and spinning her body until she could right herself and finish her sprint to the shuttle. Sparing a glance over her shoulder, she saw Gallus trying to fit through the hole but unable to do so, thanks to his much larger frame. Still, though, he fired away with his bolt pistol, unwilling to end the chase.


“Jaco, suppression!”

 

“Aye, mistress!”


The acolyte in the featureless mask turned and unleashed the explosive fury of his heavy flamer at the hole in the bulkhead door. The younger man doused the opening with a torrent of burning promethium, forcing the Astartes to withdraw to a safer distance. Only when his mistress was safely in the shuttle did he cease his efforts and join her. With extreme haste, Inquisitor Tsalie Krejcik and her retinue departed the battle barge of the Seekers of Truth to rendezvous with the nearest Imperial outpost they could find.


Once safely departed from the vicinity of Veritas and free of any weapons locks, Tsalie finally relaxed in her seat. Her heart was still pounded from the exhaustive chase, and her fury was burning just as bright. Then and there, Inquisitor Tsalie Krejcik vowed to ensure that the Seekers of Truth would suffer annihilation by her own hand. Their vast history and presence within Imperial archives will be deleted from existence and their stain on the God-Emperor’s Holy Imperium would be forever removed. She would scourge them from this galaxy.


As she mentally accrued her wrathful declarations Tsalie became aware of an awful smell tickling her nose. Looking down at her robes she saw bits of still-molten metal burning away at the rich fabrics. The smell filled her small cabin. It was a strong, acrid smell. The heat and sulfur of the metal gave a sharp tang to the thick burnt carbon of the natural weave. It shouldn’t, but it smelled familiar to her just then. It smelled like a memory, it smelled like regret, and like… like a smoldering corpse in a Voyastran forest.

A short one, and not my best one, but one nonetheless. Hopefully not too late!

 

 

Yes Inquisitor.

 

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I thank you for your entries in The Primordial Annihilator versus the Inquisition over the last two weeks.

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Carrack gave us The Trial, in which the protagonist Ryon inadvertently got steadily deeper and deeper in with – to heavily understate it – the wrong crowd, finally facing trial before a member of the inquisition.

The design of the trial was excellent, conjuring up images of dark age witch trials, and I was kept guessing as to what fate might await Ryon until the very end.

In A Vostroyan Forest was Scourged’s entry this week, finally giving us the origin story for the Seekers Of Truth. As always with your work it was very well written, kept the tension up and I could empathise with both sides.

Squigsquasher’s entry was Yes Inquisitor, detailing inquisitor Vivian Draskette and her acolyte Milo’s discovery of corruption – a cult familiar to them – upon an Imperial world. I hope we’ll see a follow up to this story!

I gave you Dupes. I’ve mention before about my chaos lord Sophusar and his nemesis the craftworld Carth-Lar autarch Quarasion fighting proxy wars. I decided this time to have both sides attempt to outwit the other, with the final result of a deathwatch squad expecting to fight Eldar but ending up taking on the acolytes of an Ordo Hereticus (or perhaps Malleus) inquisitor dispatched to combat the Psychopomps.

I hereby close that topic for the purposes of rewards (though as always if you have more entries on the topic please post them at any time, with a suitable note in the post’s title).

Here begins our twenty fifth challenge of Inspirational Friday 2016:

Interview with a Chaos Apothecary

While they lack rules beyond that most infamous of fallen physicians: Fabius Bile, no warband can survive without specialists to tend to the injured and, as they did while loyal to the Golden Throne, so too must they continue to preserve the geneseed of the legion, chapter or warband. Who are these fallen apothecaries? How do they cope with the desperate circumstances of their warband? Do they attempt to maintain its purity or do they experiment with the captured geneseed of other chapters and warbands with glee? What are their views on the Gods? On mutation? Do they hide themselves away in the warband’s ships and bases or do they take to the field? To what purpose?

This week I ask you to give us an interview with a Chaos apothecary.

(as with previous An Interview with... challenges the format need not actually be an interview msn-wink.gif )

Inspirational Friday: Interview with a Chaos Apothecary runs until the 9th of September.

Let us be inspired.

And who shall judge this new challenge? That decision lies with our current judge: Scourged. To the chosen victor: step forward and claim your Octed Amulet:

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I swear, you folks never make this easy on me.

 

Trial

 

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Dupes

 

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Yes, Inquisitor

 

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In the end, of the three options, only one (I felt) best encapsulated the interplay between the Ordos and the Heretics. In one story we all truly had a taste of the imperceptible and inevitable corruption of Chaos finds its way into the most loyal of servants, as well as the unforgivable and resolute nature of the Inquisition that seeks to stop such corruption. And so, I pass the baton back to Carrack for Trial.

 

...now I need to see what I came come up with for this week's topic. I did just invent the Fleshmoulder a few weeks ago, so I guess he deserves some spotlight time.

Thanks. I honestly didn't know if the story worked. I liked the trial by ordeal, it seemed appropriate for the Inquisition, but the rest of the story was written just as set up for the trial, and I was never quite satisfied with it. Thanks. I'm looking forward to reading this week's stories.

A well deserved win for Carrack!

 

I'll agree mine was far too short. I was intending it to be a fair bit longer but I ran out of time and had to wrap it up fairly quickly. Vivian Draskette and her long-suffering tech-savant acolyte Milo will almost certainly return in the future though.

 

I'll hopefully be able to crank out something for this new competition, though with college I may find myself with precious little time. We'll see.

The Mesomelas Stalks

 

 

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Well it's not an interview, but it fleshes out an important role in the Black Maw.

Old Wounds Never Heal

 

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Fleshmoulder

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Fleshmoulder


The stub of the Astartes Zankar was slowly being carted away, out of the medical bay and toward a new home in the bowels and forges of Deception’s Call. His departure was quite a relief, really; berating Thamda’ul for his work, then begging him for death at the flip of a whim. Such an annoyance he had become, in such short manner! And the stub did not even have the decency to provide a sustainable harvest of biomass for experimentation. Shame.


With the distraction gone, Thamda’ul walked with no sense of urgency to the next ailing Astartes in his wing. There were quite a few, thanks to the events of Ophiuchi. From the stories told, it was one very bloody campaign against the locals. He did not mind, though. The bloodier the battle outside of the ship, the more fun and resources would come aboard the medical bay.


Like this pour soul. Unlike Zankar, this one would not be fodder for the Iron Monger. This one - what was the name… Chisol? Kamdalee? Phael’ul? Hard to keep track of all the neophytes these days - was clearly dead, but too stubborn to admit such defeat. These were the patients that always proved most annoying. Aside from the tedious routine of gene-seed harvesting, they always fought with what little strength they had to cling to their pointless lives. Though, doesn’t everybody?


Thamda’ul softly ran his left hand and fingers over the scabbed face of the almost-dead Astartes upon the slab. Two of his mutant minions took that opportunity to race down his arm that they might play on the landscape of the enhanced flesh beneath them. The unknown marine - Simisal? Un’da? Mherinda’ul? - feebly tried to swat them away, unamused with their chittering antics. Oh, that would not do.


With a thought, the narthecium on the apothecary’s left wrist came to life. Though, in truth, the device and his wrist were indistinguishable now. Multiple lifetimes within the Warp’s influence and his own playful experimentations had found the means to fuse his body and his purpose into one fluid appendage. Resting the top knuckle of his middle finger against the temple of the fallen soul beneath him - was it Rhuhimia? Or Skoben? - he issued his mercy: an ossified spike shot out of the knuckle at lightning speed and pierced the thick cranium, curved barbs and hooks making mincemeat of Astartes brains.


“So why spare Zankar, but sacrifice Xhophias? This flesh was far less damaged than my new playtoy’s.”


Khan’tu. Thamda’ul had not realized the smith had not left with his servitors and prize earlier. Recalling the ossified spike back into his narthecium-wrist, he turned to address his guest. It was rare that anyone willingly chose to stay within his operating theater. An exchange of dialogue would perhaps be stimulating.


“That’s where we differ, monger. You know your metals and daemons, but I know the flesh and the soul.”


“Then enlighten me, moulder. What could my senses not perceive?”


Thamda’ul paced the perimeter of the operating slab, moving to the opposite side that he could dissect while still engaging with his guest. The central slit in his narthecium-wrist parted and out forth came a chitinous collection of tiny limbs and blades. By rote, the chirurgeon turned and moved the body with his right arm, letting his left start to cut away and collect the precious gene-seed within, all while conversing with Khan’tu.


“Yes, the torso and limbs of… who was this, again?”


“Xhophias.”


“Sure. Body and limb suffered only minimal damage and could very easily repair on their own. But internal hemorrhaging was beyond repair. Cardiac function was at twenty-four percent and declining. Lung perforation was beyond easy repair. There was severe laceration to multiple other organ systems, all of which conducive with a heavy concussive force to the chest that splintered various bones to cause said ruptures. And that is before I could even diagnosis any cognitive damage. Nothing of this flesh was salvageable for life.”


Not dissuaded by the gory scene unfolding, the Iron Monger was approaching Thamda’ul to stand opposite him around the corpse. The semi-sentient mechatendrils hovered and swayed, looking this way and that, one or the other moving to investigate some form of data stimulation and leave it again. It reminded him of his pets, his creations, the little beings dancing around his shoulders and the corpse. They moved and played no different than the tendrils, but with an excitement and speed that all smaller creatures possess.


“Point taken, Fleshmoulder. But I did not need more fodder for the forges. Why bother sparing Zankar at all?”


“That was pure amusement. For a creature so obsessed with his own immortality, I merely saw fit to grant him the boon he desired. Though, of course, his wish was granted with an irony even the True Master would approve of.”


The chitinous tool-arms finished their work, both progenoid glands harvested with zero complications, as always. Eagerly, two of the little mutants grabbed at the still-warm organs to carry them away. Off they scampered, blissful with their temporary duty, to deposit the glands within the dwindling stores of others. To be able to harvest both glands, let alone one, was a rare treat nowadays.


“Even still, I am hardly well provisioned. We are lucky I have the materials to maintain our meager collections of machines and engines. I won’t have the means to grant Zankar his new life until we find lucky spoils of war, or even luckier means to barter. He’ll be trapped motionless within a sarcophagus with only his thoughts for quite some time.”


“...and?”


There was a pause, and then both artisans allowed themselves to enjoy some fits of laughter. Thamda’ul’s was hearty and organic, barely modified by the ornate respirator he wore at all times. His head was thrown back, hands gripping the table, while all of his minion joined him with laughter all their own. Khan’tu’s laughter was a metallic scraping through his utilitarian helm, head lowered and slowly shaking from side to side. The more salient of his mechatendrils turned and ‘looked’ at him, confused by the new stimuli.


Soon enough the two Astartes composed themselves. Thamda’ul was already working to crack open the fused ribcage of his latest corpse. Deep within was an Oolitic kidney that was miraculously without harm. He had not played with one of those yet, not in a long time. And he was long overdue for a distraction aboard this monotonous vessel.


To his surprise a dragon-faced set of claws appeared in his vision, helping him pry open the splayed torso. Thamda’ul looked up in query but found only the steeled gaze of the Iron Monger, unflinching once more with their shared laughter now ceased. What an amusing gesture. But was it the claw, or Khan’tu who willed this sudden assistance?


“You’ve already harvested his progenoid, Fleshmoulder. What more use do you have of Xhophias?”


“This is my hobby, and I have not indulged in quite some time. I do believe I already know your thoughts on the matter, Legionnaire, but how do you perceive mutation?”


A disgusted grunt was the only answer needed, and expected.


“So I thought. What you abhor, I revere, as do many others. The change of the flesh is a miracle found exclusively in the Warp. I’m endlessly fascinated by it. What causes it? What purpose does it serve? Why will one of us become heightened by our changes, while others still hindered? Is it the will of the True Master, thus beyond our understand and seemingly random? Or is there a root cause?”


“Have you found such a cause?”


“Oh no, not at all!”


This time it was just the chirurgeon who laughed, albeit briefly. There was never any real answer to those questions. To understand the nature of the Warp was faith and philosophy, not science. But that did not mean attempting a logical understanding could not be fun, even if futile. With the kidney now in hand, it was the perfect moment for a demonstration.


“I will show you what I know, though. Look here: the Oolitic kidney. This is a product of our reality, by our own hands. It is as plain and tangible as the bolter at your side. It is a product, made and manufactured. But it is organic, and thus so susceptible to the aetherial energies of the Immaterium. Observe.”


Another section of the narthecium-wrist opened up, this time slithering out a malicious serpent. Its eyes and underside glowed with the unnatural orange lights that infused so many of the daemonic energies Khan’tu had employed on many occasions. Upon seeing the serpent-tool freed all of the little mutants and minions scurried away, fleeing in fear. The serpent-tool hovered in place, glowing, waiting for a command from its master.


“Curious about all of this one day, I decided to studio ectoplasma. What a wonderful invention it is. But it can be more than just a weapon, you know. Oh, so much more! Yes, it is lethal, but within its energies there exists the potential for the opposite as well…”


The serpent-tool lashed forward, striking the inert kidney in Thamda’ul’s right hand. It bit down, diluted ectoplasma flowing into the dark chunk of flesh like venom. And as quickly as it struck it let go, receding into the narthecium-wrist once more. Khan’tu waited, his gaze shifting between the kidney and the apothecary a few times, until something finally developed.


Before both of their eyes the surface of the organ began to boil and bubble though it emitted no heat. It bobbed and shook on the hand it rested, like some creature from within trying to break free. Rapidly and in no logical pattern little limbs sprouted from the sides, six little legs all scrambling to prop up the organ. As a single eyes bubbled to the top surface to cover it all with a sickening blink three more limbs burst forward: all with too many joints and none of which resembling anything close to functional physiology. Now granted with existence, the kidney-thing lept from Thamda’ul’s hand and danced around, looking and moving like a pincered arachnid.


“See? The flesh was made to change. It was made to be corrupted. It was made to be moulded.”


“Moulded? You say that like you dictated these changes.”


“I have, to an extent. There are elements in the ectoplasma that I can control, in a way. It is not a uniform energy. With less of one frequency, or more of another, it will affect the outcome. Yes, when left unchecked it leads to randomness. But if harnessed, it can be controlled.”


“So, you have found the way to create life? You have become a god?”


The incredulous tone was not lost on Thamda’ul. Though the smith was impressed, he was not convinced of the depth this knowledge held. To the warrior of iron, this corrupted flesh was to be as reviled as much as any other, despite its beginnings. Though, his tone was not without merit. This ability, though quite marvelous, did not make him anything close to a god.


“No, no. Sadly, this knowledge is not the key to my apotheosis, or anyone else’s. That thing, or any of the others, is not alive. Never was, and never will be. It may move around and act on instinct, but it lacks a soul. There is no life in that flesh. Though the Warp gave rise to my minion, it holds no psychic presence there. So much must still be learned.”


With the serpent-tool sheathed once more, the tiny mutants timidly made their way out of their hiding places. Before long they were bounding and scampering all along the robed body of Thamda’ul once more. One of the more bold creatures wandered its way toward the warpsmith, curiously wanting to investigate this new mountain of a man. It took small steps, inching closer and closer while making inquisitive squeaks. A daemon-faced flamer whipped around in a flash, incinerating the little entity in a heartbeat. Khan’tu would not dare let that thing ever touch him.


“Then… why bother?”


The Fleshmoulder paused his actions and stood, thinking. He wasn’t really sure. Unable to think of an adequate answer, he simply shrugged.

“Because it’s fun.”


Perhaps it was from the natural termination of the conversation or from his own personal disgust with the demonstration, but for whatever reason Khan’tu decided he was finished with this dialogue. He nodded to the apothecary and left, the mechatendrils rapidly investigating their surroundings for any last scrap of sensory input before leaving. Oh well. It was a fun conversation while it lasted.

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