Azorius Posted April 22, 2019 Share Posted April 22, 2019 How severe is loss of traitors? Disparity of both Astartes and mortal assets doesn't seem significant, especially considering nature of the battle (i.e. planetary siege), Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/325484-black-book-the-eastern-expansion-campaigns/page/31/#findComment-5300561 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kelborn Posted April 23, 2019 Share Posted April 23, 2019 Several raids/ tribes/ fleets as distractions before combining to one Major assault. One of its parts is the rescuing one with Andezo and a task force of Striking Shadows onboard. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/325484-black-book-the-eastern-expansion-campaigns/page/31/#findComment-5300676 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted April 23, 2019 Share Posted April 23, 2019 How severe is loss of traitors? Disparity of both Astartes and mortal assets doesn't seem significant, especially considering nature of the battle (i.e. planetary siege), Yeah, I hadn't bulked the invaders as much as I should've, and forgot to factor in the small Loyalist Mechanicum force or Insurrectionist Knights. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/325484-black-book-the-eastern-expansion-campaigns/page/31/#findComment-5300717 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted May 6, 2019 Share Posted May 6, 2019 Fixed now, hopefully Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/325484-black-book-the-eastern-expansion-campaigns/page/31/#findComment-5308310 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted May 17, 2019 Author Share Posted May 17, 2019 So, this is one trilogy that doesn't seem to easily translate into the new format. In theory, this would cover Nomus capturing Azus before Andezo rescues him. That's fine, but a new, more narrow title is in need. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/325484-black-book-the-eastern-expansion-campaigns/page/31/#findComment-5316223 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted May 17, 2019 Share Posted May 17, 2019 To be honest, as long as we keep the Retaliation theme in play, it hangs together. I think theme still needs to provide much of the connective tissue, and we can make sure that's apparent when the Predators descend on the Steel Legion. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/325484-black-book-the-eastern-expansion-campaigns/page/31/#findComment-5316241 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted May 17, 2019 Author Share Posted May 17, 2019 I don't know. It will depend on how much ground there is to cover. We will need some kind of minimum and maximum word count size for the black books so that they're kept equal-ish. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/325484-black-book-the-eastern-expansion-campaigns/page/31/#findComment-5316246 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted May 17, 2019 Share Posted May 17, 2019 Perhaps a fourth, smaller engagement that serves as a coda of sorts? Potentially non-Legion factions, be those Mechanicum or Army? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/325484-black-book-the-eastern-expansion-campaigns/page/31/#findComment-5316249 Share on other sites More sharing options...
simison Posted May 17, 2019 Author Share Posted May 17, 2019 That presupposes we need to more to the book. That remains to be seen. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/325484-black-book-the-eastern-expansion-campaigns/page/31/#findComment-5316250 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bluntblade Posted May 17, 2019 Share Posted May 17, 2019 Very true. Actually, what am I saying? Foleith and Thelum make a solid chunk together, and the latter zooms out at the end so we can home in on the Eastern Fringe. Certainly no need to add more. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/325484-black-book-the-eastern-expansion-campaigns/page/31/#findComment-5316254 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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